| "A Slave to No One" Reviews/Comments [ 182 ] |
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Title: thank you!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 06, 2005 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm glad you like it and i thought what you did with your fanfic's before (pre-writing them) was a good idear so i was gonna do the same thing!!! ^__^ keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: animemaster168 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is really good. I like the new command that she put on the prayer beads. You really are good at writing storie. I can't wait for the next chapter to be up. Please update soon. Animemaster168
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Reviewed By: Annaku On: April 06, 2005 14:32 CDT
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Awwwwwwww inu is sooo cute. Y was he being submissive to kagome before she bought him??? lpease update soon. wheres the pervert??
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Reviewed By: Guardianovthe3rdGate(not signed in) On: April 06, 2005 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story rocks! keep up the good work. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 00:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter, cant wait till u update over the weekend. huggles and happiness, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Hanyou Babe On: April 06, 2005 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed you end to make the same spelling mistake. Coarse means rough and course means path.It's easy to get mixed up and spell check will overlook it if it is spelled right.The best proof reading tool you have is your mouth.just read your chapters aloud and you should be able to hear most mistakes.
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 22:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
excellent, please continue!
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Title: now what do i put in this box???
Reviewed By: InuYashasloveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 05, 2005 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow another great chapter from you i can't wate to find out what's gonna happen next keep up the good work!!! oh..oh...oh... ok i've got an idea for a fanfic and i wanted to kno what you think about it! ummm..... 'Love in Angel Eyes' it's about Kag being blind and meeting Inu .... ummm... Inu grows to love her (he's Hanyou) but wants her to see him so helps her get new eyes... Kag gets her sight and falls in love with an "Angel" when her first eyes open.... and so on and so forth! well what do you think? it's off that one movie but has my own twist! ^__^ well tell me what you think and keep up your good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Title: OI!
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the storyline and you weren't kidding when you said there were -twists-. Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON! My prayers are with you and your friend.
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant(to lay-z to sign in) On: April 03, 2005 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey girl, loved the chap! dont know what that chick is talking about, probably jealouse cuz she doesnt have what it takes to write a kick ass story...and kagome is the one doin the ass kicking:P lol ne way update soon and say hi to kinx for me -jenn
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not logged in) On: April 03, 2005 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting, this keeps getting more and more interesting with each chapter...
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 17:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooh go kagome... go inuyasha. lots of fluff, got to love the fluff. cant wiat for more update soon. Zirra
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Reviewed By: Inu+Kag4ever On: April 03, 2005 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story update soon Plz!!!
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Reviewed By: spumante [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 16:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeaaaa its the beginning of fluffies. Another great chappie keep up the good work and as always cant wait for the next one
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD!!!Well update soon plz!!!I cant wait till the next chapter!!
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