| "His Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: 1katie1(2 lazy 2 sign on) On: May 03, 2005 10:33 EDT
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lol, the title alone made me jump for joy... :P die evil maika's father... dude...person...thing... lol, keep updating at this pace and i may no longer suffer from withdrawal!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 06:40 EDT
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 22:44 EDT
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Boy, if only she had stayed to listen to Inuyasha more. And if Inuyasha hadn't said that maybe he would have mated Kagome. I know that was a possibility, but still. Hope that everything turns out right. Glad that someone caught that stinky Jaken. Update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: 1katie1(once again 2 lazy 2 sign on) On: May 02, 2005 22:08 EDT
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:D am i the katie you're referring to?? *smiles hopefully* yay for updates! :D plz keep updating at this pace, if not faster, *suffers from withdrawal* :D now a little 5 character portrait of inuyasha created for no real reason... :P ^-_-^
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 20:00 EDT
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 (nsi) On: May 02, 2005 19:33 EDT
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This is so good poor Maika I hope Inuyasha finds and kills all the bastards (including her father) that raped her ::growl:: But good nonthe less Update soon but don't rush, and don't pay attention if any one flames you Ill bite them for you :D ^~
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!_! poor Inu!!
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Reviewed By: NeoQueenRini On: May 01, 2005 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Normally Idon't read the really long or OC fics but this one was good. I can't wait to read the next chapter, this has a LOT of plot twists. DIE JAKEN! DIE!
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Reviewed By: EquineBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 14:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story..I really hope you continue!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 18:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: meme!!!(1katie1) On: April 27, 2005 14:10 EDT
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yay! we get the best of both worlds!!! :D great job!
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Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 02:29 EDT
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*frustrated at ending* *loves story*
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Reviewed By: meme!!! On: April 27, 2005 01:20 EDT
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noooooooo! keep kagsys human!!! plzplzplz... i'll still read if she doesn't, but LET HER STAY HUMAN!!! lol ;) good chapter (this is 1katie1)
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! It's just screams cute everywhere. One of the things about this story that is so rare is Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's relationship, I love how they get along…one can never find a fic with their relationship like this. Poor Shippo, why did he have to be traumatized so? The spell was activated when Kagome had the dream, right? I don't understand all this talk about mates being sensitive…what the hell do they mean?! The situation whit Inuyasha sleeping with Sesshomaru and Kagome is no big deal. Just think of it like this, Kagome's bed is an over-sized dog bed and Sesshomaru, Kagome, Inuyasha and Shippo are pups sharing a bed. That's the picture I get when I read it, I mean Sesshomaru is Inuyasha's old brother and Kagome is his younger sister with Shippo being their pup. Why was Kagome the only one to stay human? It doesn't make sense. Why did Sango and Miroku say as dog demons? I am so glad Kikyo finally got what was coming to her! And what happened to Naraku and the jewel shards? I can't wait to see what they do to Jaken. Please update soon! I look forward to reading more of this great story!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 23:41 EDT
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I am so glad that Inuyasha was able to help Shippo. It's really important that they continue their relationship. And I think that his mate needs to learn about his relationship with Kagome. That kind of thing shouldn't be keep out. It the way relationships work. No secrets like this. But other than that great chapter. Can't wait for more, later.
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