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"His Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ]
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 Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 25, 2005 15:14 EDT
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Very engaging!!! I'm a bit lost on the Kag/Sess part, but that's okay. Poor Shippo!! *cries* Evil evil bitch!
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 25, 2005 08:42 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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 Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 24, 2005 13:11 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
thanks fo the chapter, keep on writing
 Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 24, 2005 11:11 EDT
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Sniff, Poor Shippou. I don't think anyone is going to escape this fic without some kind of emotional scars. This story has transcended anything I've read before delving into the pyschological implications of the past and present hardships. You're doing a great job and can only hope that Shippou at least accepts what his parents have to say even if he can't understand it. Something like that will take years to get over I think. Keep up the great work!
 Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 24, 2005 04:15 EDT
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Yay! Good Story! Keep up the great writing. Poor Shippou! I wouldn't want to forget that poor thing. *takes Shippou and cuddles him*
 Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 24, 2005 01:08 EDT
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I am putting a tissue box right here for this story. This chapter was to heart wrenching. I hope that they convince Shippo that they do love him and would fight for their memories to stay. Love the story, keep this going, later.
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2005 20:25 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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 Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2005 12:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
Woot! I'm all caught up again! I'm almost glad that I fell behind because I would have hated seeing my fav character go through so much heartache. I hope Shippou is safe and sound and won't be to harsh on everyone when they find him/he wakes up.
 Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2005 00:39 EDT
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Well, I am glad that the end of all that. Now to just get Shippo back and safe. Course I wonder what will his reaction be? Update soon, later.
 Reviewed By: Sarah_0895  On: April 22, 2005 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I love your story it is the best one i have ever read!It is even better because you come out with a new chapter everyday and they aren't short.Please keep on writing!
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2005 07:21 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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 Reviewed By: katie111222333(1katie1)  On: April 22, 2005 00:44 EDT
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yay!! 3 or 4 chapters in one day!! keep updating like this and i'll shower you with virtua cookies and hugs!! DIE JAKEN!! i like how kagome's pretty much the only one without inu youkai, or at least youkai blood... good job!! i like the story so much it's on my favorites list twice, so i recieve 2 e-mails whenever it's updated, so i know immediatly it's yours!!
 Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 21, 2005 23:46 EDT
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That is one nasty spell that has been cast on the group. Wonder what will happen now. Update soon, later.
 Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 21, 2005 21:48 EDT
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Those were some very high emotional chapters. What is going on back at the castle? Why was Shippo left alone? I hope this has something to do with the spell that Kikyo placed on Kagome. Cause I just don't see Kagome forgetting Shippo like that. Update soon, later.
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 21, 2005 14:57 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
^_^ THAT WAS SO CUTE ^_^!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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