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"His Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ]
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 Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 14, 2005 16:47 EDT
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wow! really great story! I can't wait for the next chapter. It's really intresting how you've got everyone pairded up. Keep writing!
 Reviewed By: AmberHaze  On: April 14, 2005 15:35 EDT
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I love your fic!!!!!! Please continue ASAP! And no the last piece didn't suck.
 Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 14, 2005 12:26 EDT
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Not saying that I'm desperate here or anything my loyal readers, demo I've gotten so many reviews and quickly as well afterthe posting of my other parts that I feel I need to ask: did this last piece I posted totally suck? ~Whispering Wolf
 Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 13, 2005 01:00 EDT
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wow so many chapters in one day! The story is GREAT! keep up the awesome work!
 Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 12, 2005 18:51 EDT
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This was such a great chapter, cant wait for more!
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 12, 2005 14:38 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Poor Rin!! I just want to wrap my arms around her 'till she forgets her pain!!!!
 Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi)  On: April 12, 2005 14:10 EDT
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i love it! keep those chpaters a comin! this is great! wonderful work!
 Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 12, 2005 02:01 EDT
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more more more more!! i'm totaly enjoying this..i was suposto be in bed 3 hours ago..but i stayed up to finish reading this..the reason that it took me 3hoursto read..is becas my beloved kept on interupting me *growls at hubbypoo* guess i'll have to show him who's the alpha bitch in this household eh??
 Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 11, 2005 23:10 EDT
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The shopping chapter was cute. I really wish that Kagome's friends from her 'home' would just lay off. I mean come on, obviously there is no attraction to Houjo. Man, I always new there was something wrong with that boy, he's just too nice. Jaken, I hope will be found out at the one to start all of Rin's misfortune. Like that Inuyasha is looking out for better mates. Kikyo just isn't the one. At least not in this story. Update soon, later.
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 11, 2005 22:56 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I think your story is just the sweetest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 11, 2005 22:35 EDT
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Yay! more wonderful chapters! please keep writing, I want to read what happens next. ^_^
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 11, 2005 17:48 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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*strangles Hojo and Jakkan*
 Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 11, 2005 15:28 EDT
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I don't know what to say. I was almost in tears at the end of this and that rarely ever happens. I am amazed at your ability to say what needs to be said to let us know exactly what happened without dwelling on the horrible act. Instead, you move beyond the act to let us connect with Rin and Kagome to feel their shame as many victims do. I hope that Sesshoumaru and Maika will eventually kick Jaken's and the other four youkai asses very very soon.
 Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 11, 2005 13:41 EDT
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Wow, I've loved reading this fic! I never imagined Hojo as having such a dark side to him although after reading this, it's going to be hard thinking of him any other way! I can't wait to see what you have in store for Kagome and Rin once they get back to the castle. Jaken will surely throw a fit and try to use the last few chapters against her. Until the next, ja ne!
 Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 11, 2005 00:05 EDT
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awesome! can't wait for some sess/kag goodness, but thats just the henati in me talking. Inu just said he didnt think of Kikyou as a mate either? soo are they gonna get together still? *wah* I'm confused! Please write more soon!
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