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Title: chapter 19
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy (not logged in) On: June 06, 2006 17:06 CDT
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This was really quite emotional especially chapter 18, it felt torn, a brutal sadness.Has Goku really reached his Zenith, enlightenment, can Vegeta no longer satiate him? I'm not so sure. I don't understand the dynamic between Vegeta Goku and Bulma, at one time it seemed as if passion would unite the three together, what are Bulma's feelings towards Goku, and Goku's for Bulma's? I liked your use of displacement of desire, or substitution of desire, the way Goku gorged ravenously on the food desparately seeking for a way to quench his desire, to be filled, he was almost manic in his persuit.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 17:19 CDT
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I kinda feel goku's pain and emptiness, to want and love something thats out of reach from you and you knew it all alone. well thats how i see it. awesome chapter as always, really can't wait to read more.
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Title: himetsu
Reviewed By: ~anz~ On: June 05, 2006 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intense. You can feel the tension... Goten informing him he knows the truth ~an illusion shattered~ What's left...bingingfood!~ the great pacifier!gotta love it~ ~and Bejita
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Reviewed By: Rourinu On: April 30, 2006 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*goofy grin* Me love chapter very much so.... I was following this fic from the start at the Yaoi Hotel so long ago... then kinda dropped out of the fandom. Came back though just today to see what people were writing and was delighted to find your story again. I wasn't disappointed either! That was one of THE BEST lemons I've ever read. It actually lasted more than two paragraphs like most fics and was written so well. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 21:07 CDT
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Yeah, we're all gonna need a minute here, to get over that one...INTENSE. All the much more so after all the buildup, but even a second reading of this chapter weeks after the first (gods, has it been that long already?) had my nerve-endings smoking the chair! Ouch. This is still so PAINFUL, their coming-together really does hurt, their attraction is fascinating yet so gut-wrenching that I'm still clicking away at times. I love these guys, I love them together, but GODS! Why must they suffer so? Of course I'm enjoying it too, how could I not? You are divine. *grovels for next chapter*
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Reviewed By: anastasiavesperman On: April 19, 2006 05:47 CDT
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I, uh, ack, I can hardly even put words to the way I feel about this story. I guess the highest praise I can give to any story is that it makes me feel like I'm _inside_ the story, not with the characters but _as_ the characters, and this certainly fits the bill. It has been my great pleasure to see your writing blossom over the years.
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Reviewed By: X. Sky On: April 18, 2006 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear god, these chapters are so intense -- no wonder you had trouble writing this one! Wonderful, as always, and made even more so by the fact that this brutal surrender to their desires didn't end with declarations of eternal love or whatever. "..hate you..." he whispers into my skin. That's absolutely PERFECT.
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Reviewed By: It's Camaro On: April 11, 2006 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Style of Writing: 10 Spelling: 10 Originality: 10 Enjoyment factor: 1,000,000 HOLY SHIT GIRL! you have outdone yourself. Surely, worth the wait. Can't believe how hot that was. I had to keep wiggling my toes to be sure they were still attached. You're such a Goddess.
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: April 07, 2006 16:31 CDT
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That last part was so beautiful but so sad. I can't even imagine whats going to hapen in the next chapter. What was Vegeta thinking of doing, telling Bulma?I hate to say it but Goku is being a little selfish, has beeen the whole time. If Chi Chi would just given him some maybe this wouldn't of happen... but maybe it would of. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Thanks
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: bdegrees [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 16:18 CDT
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Wow. I really feel for the boys, here. I mean, as much as I wanted them to do it, at the same time, I didn't want them to hurt the people they love. This was great. I'm sorry it was hard to write, but it was super easy to read..when I wasn't spacing out and drooling on my keyboard! Can't wait to see the aftermath.
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Title: Himitsu
Reviewed By: (MACCAM) On: April 07, 2006 12:30 CDT
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Holy shit, what a chapter. i can see why you had a hard time writing this chapter. I really like the end result, and your right he's not sorry. I know i wouldn't be ;P. I can't wait to read what will come next. BTW when will goku get his BJ?
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 17:24 CST
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Denial will get them nowhere fast, but acceptance won't bring peace. Thanks for the cliffhanger!
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Title: himitsu
Reviewed By: Evil_Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 07:32 CST
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Cliffhanger!! How dare you do that to us!! such a cliffhanger...you must me evil :P But the chapter was awesome :D!! and I want more!! I'll be waiting for the next one but puhlease...be quick..I NEED to know what's going to happen !! lovies Evil-Vegeta
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Reviewed By: bdegrees [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 02:05 CST
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WOW! I really hope there is an update soon. This story is just amazing. The subtle turn of Goku's mind is very believeable and that is a little scary. I love your visual descriptions. This story is just awesome. One of my all time favorites, no question. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: March 02, 2006 03:01 CST
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I wonder how deep Goku's passion for Vegeta really goes. They are both Saiyans and like species are attracted to each other on some level. Will this thing that both saiyans have burn out quickly like a candle burning at both ends? What has Goten been up to with his sneaking out? I look forward to your next up date.
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