| "Himitsu" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 15:31 CST
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I hate MM's review system. You tease!!!!!! Well done. The tension is getting quite thick. Something is going to break eventually. Really looking forward to it when it does.
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Reviewed By: WARRIOR007 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 02:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE AN EXTROARDINARY AUTHOR! POINT BLANK. BEST FIC IVE EVER READ, HANDS DOWN. PLEASE UP DATE SOON, YA GOT ME HOOKED, BETTER YET, YOU'VE SUCKED ME IN! (PUN INTENDED)
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Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, as always. I like Goku's voice in this, and the way it has progressed. I love Bejiita's reactions to Goku's ferocious lust. You've stretched the sexual tension out to the point of pain... for the characters and your readers!
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Title: Himitsu
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 22:18 CST
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Wow you haven't let me down yet. great chapter. I really like the interaction with chichi. you keep us all on our toes. please update soon...
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Reviewed By: tin797 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 10:18 CST
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"Author's Notes: 1. Steer: A castrated bull. ^_^ Bulma would never have forgiven Gokuu if he did that, and it would kill any future yaoi really..." Future yaoi? In this story? Not sure if i can take it... Anyway i will prepare myself for the "worst", hope the next chap will be up soon!
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Title: Still good.
Reviewed By: Freaky_X [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 05:53 CST
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Still wonderful.. I loke your way of wrtitng and suprising the reader. I will just sit here and waite patiently for it to go on..
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really don't know what else to say but i want more! i also am gonna DIE waiting for them to finally get it on! i wonder... do you think they could deprogram Chichi and let her in the fun? just a thought...
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Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 03:44 CDT
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Wow! I think that word is the only one I have capacity enough to say after reading your story. It made me laugh, made me cry - ahem - made me hot lol. It is an absolute roller coaster of emotion, made so plausible because of your excellent story telling and knowledge of all the characters. Excellent work and I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged in On: September 25, 2005 11:01 CDT
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Good Lord, woman. This story just gets more and more lush and intense. It never fails to surprise me too! That's the best part--it's not a formula lemon work. I love Goku here, I understand Vegeta, and thank you for making Bulma a real woman.
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Title: Himitsu
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 21:58 CDT
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I understand goku's frustation really. great chapter and i can't wait for more. why would veget make contact and than let goku down like that. He knows what goku wants. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: September 24, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story!!!! I enjoy how you mix sexual and psychological elements together.
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Reviewed By: FireFly01 On: August 22, 2005 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for this update forever! But it was certainly worth the wait. I feel sorry for poor Goku. He's trying to stay away, but with all the looks he's recieving from Bulma and Vegeta, he's getting the wrong signals... so he's going back and still getting rejected. Poor guy!
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Title: Himitsu
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 06:50 CDT
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Wow as i read this story i find it very hard to sit and not stay still. very hot chapter, it's funny reading a story that describes how i feel now about sex, always wanting more and always feeling unsatisfied in my own sexual life. i can relate with goku on so many levels.. i really can't wait for an update.....
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Reviewed By: Black Cherry On: August 22, 2005 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. But I have a bad feeling that Goku isn't going to get what he so desperately wants.
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Title: Himitsu
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 07:49 CDT
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WOW awesome story. I really like the way you have all three of them together. I really wanted something to happen between bulma and goku, but i understand why it didn't. please don't take to long in updateing this story. I want to know whats new for the three of them....
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