| "Himitsu" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: BlackCherry On: July 01, 2005 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hot Damn! You never cease to amaze me. I thought chapter six was only going to lead to disaster. But nevertheless I did have a few giggles.
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Title: Hot Damn!!!!
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy S*** is this EROTIC!!! I love that it's in Goku's POV. I much prefer reading in the third person...but damn! What hot- *shudder* writing! Naughty Goku...
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Reviewed By: oz On: June 23, 2005 21:09 CDT
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jaw on floor...what was that?! yup it happens later gator update soon
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Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged in On: June 22, 2005 12:46 CDT
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I... LOVE... this fic. The Goku voice is so refreshing, so compelling. I've never really bought the prudish Chi Chi but I have to see how she works in this story--Goku's taking her like that was such a wonderful surprise. I really am wondering what's up next. This is all so marvelously sexy, in unexpected ways.
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Title: Envy MY Pain
Reviewed By: Envy My Pain [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you allow Goku to express his feelings, and how it's mainly pointed to him not really Bulma and Vegeta---it's as if it tells of his expresstion of need I love it, simply love it. Please Update. Ja'ne
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 09:42 CDT
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Hot damn. I love this fic. I'll never eat cantelope again without thinking of this chapter! 8-D
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Reviewed By: BlackCherry On: May 20, 2005 13:14 CDT
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Oh, I feel so sorry for Goku. I mean he tried to pleasure his wife but failed. I think somebody better teach him some moves or else he could forget about ever scoring.
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Reviewed By: BlackCherry On: May 11, 2005 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It just keep getting better and better. I wonder if Goku ever going to get permission to "touch"
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this. What I'm waiting on is to see if Goku will later use what he learned/witnessed from Vegeta/Bulma on an unsuspecting, frigit Chi-Chi... THAT WOULD BE AWESOME!!!
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Reviewed By: oznerol On: May 05, 2005 18:39 CDT
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that big ass pervert what the hell hey hey hey he could be going to chi is he afraid or something poor chi prolly hasnt gotten any since he started this lil thing thats why she so cranky. well update soon jeeze bulma and vegeta some lil rabbits aint they thats hilarious
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Title: YEah
Reviewed By: JebusOfNazareth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My ratings are a little more critical than my actual feelings. This is good stuff. I wonder if or when the orgy will occur.
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Title: chappie two
Reviewed By: BlackCherry On: April 28, 2005 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Lord, that was great! I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: mirai shell On: April 22, 2005 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY IN THE WORLD WOULD YOU LEAVE SUCH A CLIFHANGER!?!?!? Please write more! I loved it. This is the first time I have seem a fic with a promise of BDSM action. I hope you update soon! I'll check up on you! Mirai_shell@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: BlackCherry On: April 21, 2005 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely, sexy, oh so naughty. More more more please!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 18:28 CDT
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Me like! Me like! The art is beautiful. Dharmaserenity posted a link to it the other day at the Salon. Goku's face was especially fascinating--as is his voice here in this narrative. Can't wait for you to reveal the back-story. I'd assumed that Goku was invited by Bulma, that this scenario was something promised in "The Gift." Now I'm *really* intrigued!!
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