"I'm On The Outside" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel15025 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 11:30 CDT Comment/Review: this story is off the chain. u must update this frequently. and in ur spare time, check out my stories and reveiew pls!
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 18:21 CDT Comment/Review: awww....such a cute story...^-^ great job, keep it up
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Title: i loved it Reviewed By: !~@Kasha@~! (*not sighed in-DOG*) On: May 25, 2005 15:08 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Man o man! I love this story its' so good i love who you made kikyo rot because she was cheating on the sexyest half demon around. And I really hope that Inuyasha comes and tells kagome his fellin' and i want them to go out you know..... o and shippo wow i feel so sorry for him his mother and father died life isn't fare but thinking of Kagome as a second mother is so kool.he's a love able fox... but anyways' i love jhow this story is turning off so keep you the good work. love yea:~Kasha
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: May 24, 2005 21:15 CDT Comment/Review: Wow, three updates in one day! I be impressed. :) I was at school, bored out of my mind (had a four and a half hour break between finals today) and I went into the computer room to check my email, and saw yours! And I thought, "I'm On The Outside...when the hell did I add that to my favorites??" And then I read the chapter and was like, oooooh mee likey...and then went back to my email, and BAM! There was another chapter. So thank you for occupying my time. :)(Stupid InuYasha finally realizes he wants her. Men are so dumb sometimes, eh?)
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Title: wow... Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: May 24, 2005 14:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: make him dump Kikyo hard!!! i hate that bitch!! ^__^ anywho keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: KagoKitty *not logged in* On: May 24, 2005 13:40 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Cute! I would love to read more of this soon. I'm also pretty familiar with the whole 'best friends' with a guy growing up. Love reading another viewpoint of it. =^-.~^=
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Reviewed By: ama_tori (nsi) On: May 24, 2005 13:00 CDT Comment/Review: hey, i'm 1katie1 from The Inuyasha Fanfiction Archives on Ezboard. this was awwwesome!!!!! :D it's going on my favorits as soon as i sign in!!!
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 17:14 CDT Comment/Review: Aww..they're so cute together!! Update Soon!!
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Title: I loved it Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 19:59 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved it this story is so cute i hope you make inuyasha and kagome a couple you know because they are so cut together. I also like your plot in this story it is so intrestin'..please updata soon.
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Reviewed By: angel15025 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 11:41 CDT Comment/Review: this storty is cool so far. i hope u update often. and when u get the chance, check out my story 'Two New York Chicks in Inu-World' and, i dunno, tell every1 u know to read it
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Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 23:27 CDT Comment/Review: Hurray!! another great chapter>_
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Title: awwww.... Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 20:10 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: how sweet keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 07:16 CDT Comment/Review: really, really nice ^^ I hope they grew up fast ^_~
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Title: good Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 14:53 CDT Comment/Review: I like it a lot! please update soon, i really like the style you write with and i cant wait to see what happenes next.i give you a ten out of ten! :)please please please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 07:03 CDT Comment/Review: so cuuuuute! Just adorable! Please, keep writing ^^
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