| "I'm On The Outside" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Title: The Best Story
Reviewed By: llxsunsetxll [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOHH MY GOD!!!!!That was the best story I have every read. I almost cryed at the end, it was so sad. I cant wait until the sequal is here. Is it almost done? But anyway great job on the story. I hope that the sequal is even better!! :))
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Reviewed By: ameera4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 08:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this story please up date when you get a chance
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 15:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
great job. update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful! That last chapter was amazing, and coupled with that song...it was so hot! :D Great job! I'm glad that you updated! So, please just update again soon when you can! I'll be waiting!
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Title: Lemonade is always nice!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story & that was a yummy lemon :P
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Reviewed By: cyberdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where's the next chapter? This is a great story but i REALLY need a new chapter soon.
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Title: GREAT!!
Reviewed By: twingirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great story. It's got drama but it's also got it's funny side too. I love reading it!!! Please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko (not logged in) On: August 04, 2005 22:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Those were some enjoyable chapters you have there. I cannot wait to read more in the near future. Keep writing and I'll keep reading and reviewing.
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Title: Staind lover
Reviewed By: Drysdale On: August 04, 2005 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to tell you that I myself am a huge fan of Staind and i apprieciate the fact that someone out there also gets a kick out of Inu yasha. be sure to buy the new album Chapter V in stores Aug 9th if you're really devoted like I am.
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Title: The story.
Reviewed By: Crimson Warrior On: August 03, 2005 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good but to bad it has to end soon.
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Reviewed By: godie6790 to lazy 2 sign in On: August 03, 2005 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i love your story! plz plz plz update soon. so cute!
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Title: ffrg review (chapter 1)
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 13:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi and thanks for submitting your piece for review. You requested a review of chapter one and I am unclear on whether you mean chapter 1 or the prologue, so I've read through both. I am, as a rule, simply not usually a fan of AU fics--that being said, I didn't mind what I've read so far of your piece. You give decently solid reasons for your characterization and have been wonderfully creative with the younger versions of InuYasha and Kagome. The plot is cute enough, though I'm not sure where you're going with it. It sounds like the main point of the story is for these two to find each other and I'm not saying that is a bad plot, it's just somewhat cliché. Perhaps in later chapters you've found a way to spice it up some. Grammar and spelling are good in these two chapters and I'm not seeing any problems with run-ons or fragments, so good for you and your beta, if you have one, you work well together (or you do an excellent job with your own editing). My biggest suggestion would be to find a way to get into a flashback without saying ~flashback~ -- it's rather unprofessional looking. You have a pleasant writing style and good, strong voice to your piece. Usually, I would suggest that since you've got a solid piece, you try inserting your own characters. But in your case, if you remove the story from the blended universe you've created, I think you would lose some of the heart of it. Thanks again for sharing your piece and best of luck to you as you continue to wri |
Reviewed By: Sangokirara711 On: August 02, 2005 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww...you dedicated it to me? Hee hee! I'm so flattered. Anyway, as usual...awesome chapter! (Even better because it was dedicated to me lol) just kidding. Anyway, I do love your work and read all your fanfics so far. You are seriously my favorite fanfiction...author ^^ Hee Hee! Keep it up! (Sorry I didn't reveiw sooner...I'm having issues opening the story because of my computer and had to have a friend send me the link to chapter 19...so if I don't reveiw anymore it's because I can't read your story *cries*)
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Title: W.O.N.D.E.R.F.U.L.
Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, I've seen this plot many times, but you gave it a certain twist that made it different and stand out from the others! :D Great job! I really love your wording and I love even more that you didn't rush everything, it was done at a very relaxed, natural pace for something like this! Anyway, I love this story! You are an amazingly talented writer and I can't wait to read more and the sequal if you still decide to do one! Well, please, just update again when you can! Until then I'll be waiting patiently! Ta-ta! ^_^
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Title: Great story.
Reviewed By: dogdemonandkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, can't wait for you to update again. I really like the story
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