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 Title: Awww^_^
Reviewed By: PirateGirl90 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 19, 2005 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awwwww!!!! This is such a good fanfic!! I love the little best friends to future husband and wife thingy goin on!!! Very cuuute!!
 Title: Awww^_^
Reviewed By: PirateGirl90 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 19, 2005 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awwww!!!!! This is sooooo cute!!!! I love the little going from being best friends to future husband and wife thingy goin on. This is a very good fanfic!
 Title: good story
Reviewed By: bloomluvrchick  On: July 10, 2005 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey this story is awesome. I wish you would update. it has the potential of being my favorite story so far. so keep updating and I'll keep writing. k?
 Reviewed By: Jin Ryu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2005 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey- Wow! What a great story! "I'm On the Outside" is one of my favorite fics; I'm always looking for it to be updated! My favorite thing about this fic is your inclusion of Inu Youkai instincts. I'm a bit of a romantic, but I LOVE it when InuYasha gets protective of Kagome, and how, well, dog-like he his! It's quite entertaining, and also very sweet. Please, include as much as possible; you're so good at it! I'm also glad you've included Sesshomaru in this fic. He's one of my favorite characters just because he's so complex. I really like his relationship with Kagome: the older brother type deal. Really sweet. Well, please update soon! I'm really looking forward to it! (Did I use enough exclamation points?!?!) '_~ Jin Ryu The Silver Dragon
 Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 06, 2005 10:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice fic. I look forward to more updates ^_^ Favorite fo sho!
 Title: light_darkness
Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 05, 2005 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hurray!! another great chapter>_
 Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI  On: July 05, 2005 01:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
very well done. got to say, this chapter hit home. never had a senior grad dance but wish i had. everythign kind of came together in this. i love the car borrowing idea, very cute. good play on sesshoumaru's kind side as well, not all bastard and that is what matters. that was also a good interlude with kouga asking kagome about being back together. cleared the way to bring 'new' relatonships into the picture...if not ones that have been seen in the making for quite some time. anyway, as i said, very well done. :-)
 Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi*  On: July 04, 2005 23:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is yurami from ez board... im luvin it!!!! its so gooooooooooooooooood!!!! and i like how you're taking the relationship slowly... fics like these are one in a million!
 Reviewed By: oahtmeal [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 04, 2005 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey i hope theres more to come. i really enjoyed this story!
 Reviewed By: donnie_fae [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 03, 2005 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think it's really great. Well, since you're getting all these support messages, keep on writing!
 Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: spongemonkey [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2005 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like your story a lot! Kinda funny how it's an AU story and I still like it (even if all my stories are AU too!) I just never seem to really like AU stories but you'rs is incredible! Please update it soon^^
 Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2005 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! I'M DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! begging over now.
 Title: !
Reviewed By: SquirrelzOfTheDamned [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2005 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I heart this fic with all my
 Reviewed By: Kaitsu-chan  On: June 30, 2005 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Definately one of the BEST fictions I've read! Keep up the awesome work, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
 Title: WOW!!!!
Reviewed By: alize  On: June 28, 2005 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Amazing!!! i just read your fic from start to where you left off and i have got to say iy is wonderful. this fic is fantastic!!! very well written,detailed and well thought out. i give it a standing ovation. i know i'm rambeling but i just want you to know how great and talented i think you are. anyway please do continue this story and update again soon.
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