| "I'm On The Outside" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Reviewed By: wench On: July 29, 2005 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely love ur story..... can't wait for another chapter! :)
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Reviewed By: AimzyJ On: July 28, 2005 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You quoted me! Omigoshhhh... Anyway, I'm happy you updated so quickly! Another amazing chapter, and I am dying to read about how Inuyasha's mother reacts. I must ask, how old are you? You have superb writing skill for someone of ANY age, but I am curious. Have you ever taken writing classes? Take your time with the next update!
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Title: You're my hero!
Reviewed By: NihilismsFallen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh, I love your story so far! Haha, you have a great sense of humor to, I laughed alot! Awesome...Update soon! You said something about a sequel somewhere, looking forward to the rest of your story and sequel..Rock on.. -NihilismsFallen..
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Reviewed By: AimzyJ On: July 26, 2005 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic my dear! Sometimes lemons can ruin a fanfic, it really is a make or break situation depending on how the author handles it. You know, lemons can change the characters and all... But THIS really was what I was waiting for. You kept their addictive personalities intact, and it was just so cute and horribly realistic. This fanfic is right up there with my absolute all time favourites. Wonderful job, have I mentioned that I love you?
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Reviewed By: Sangokirara711 On: July 26, 2005 16:57 CDT
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Okay, I've never read a lemon that I enjoyed so much! Personally, not a big fan of them but...aww...it was so cute! (Cute lemon? There's an oxymoron for ya!) Ohh...I really liked it! I swear, you're an incredible author! (I even think you're better than Sueric) Which is a shocker! Everyone go O.O K...so anyway, love the chapter! Super kawaii! Keep it up...please! (BTW, I just noticed the title is the name of my favorite Staind song. Yeah, been reading the story since the beginning and just noticed it.)
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 16:09 CDT
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Sometimes you just gotta be outside the situation for it to make sense. Go Sango and Miroku! Well, its great that they both finally "pulled their heads out of their asses." We had a clear shower curtain once...my brothers would walk in on me all the time...anyways. Great chapter, I just found this story while cruising mediaminer. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 10:01 CDT
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Please update ASAP please i luv ur story!!=)
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Reviewed By: Kagome1619 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 04:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE YOUR STORIES I AM UR #1 FAN KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 18:11 CDT
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aw that was so cute..but i gotta ask..is anyone else having troubles with new chapters..im not getting any notices and when a new chapter is added i cant veiw it..so um is there another chapter after lifeline yet? it says there is but i cant seem to get it,..well anywho love this story..
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Title: Awesooome!
Reviewed By: AimzyJ On: July 23, 2005 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfiction, I really like it so far. I'm glad you are taking your time before you inevitably have Inu and Kag hook up. Kudos for that, however I'd like to see longer chapters... that would be nice. Oh, and more frequent updating! I sit around waiting for the new chapter to come up, and I am completely bored. So hows about it? If you doooo I will rate every chapter from here on iiiin. Think about it!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller On: July 22, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job. keep it up. update ASAP
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV UR STORY SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: lokon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 13:32 CDT
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I typically don't read Alternate Universe fics but this one grabbed my attention pretty quickly. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: michael22 On: July 22, 2005 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story and it's well written. So just finish it up please and keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: FieryFaerie On: July 21, 2005 20:34 CDT
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I really love this fic. In general i really dislike Alternate Universe, mostly because it's usually done poorly, but this is well written and has a really good plot. Great job! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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