| "I'm On The Outside" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 21:20 CST
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wow.. i am hooked.. i can't wait to read the sequel...great job!!!
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really enjoyed this story. I am looking forward to reading the sequel. ^_^
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_girl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 12:18 CST
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I loved your story I'm also reading "I'm Looking In" and I love it you are a good writer keep wirting.
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Reviewed By: Sailor Sarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story...I just want to turn it into a stuffed animal or something and spend the rest of my life hugging it...Wow, THAT wasn't a confused analogy at all. Anyway, I'm adding you to my favorites 'cuz you rock. Yeah.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was really good i finished it quickly and read the sequl as well they are both kool.keep writing i like ur stories alot star555555528 or tiffany
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Title: Poor Inuyasha!
Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 00:28 CDT
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I am enjoying your story so far but I need to ask...do you also follow Suerics' policy about always liking (and writing) happy endings?
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Reviewed By: emmet849 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 15:11 CDT
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Hey, I just wanted to let you know that although I'm only on chapter 4, I think your story is wonderful! Thank you so much for writing it!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan still (nsi) On: September 24, 2005 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this is one of the sweetest fics i have ever read. i was so into it, i couldn't stop 'till i read it from start to finish. i have already finished what you have posted for the sequel, and i'm diggin' it too. you are so talented!
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: September 04, 2005 19:16 CDT
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so sorry i didn't review more, but MM.org stopped sending me update alerts. :( Awesome ending, and I'm gonna go read the sequal right now!
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Reviewed By: Miss Saucy Wow On: August 29, 2005 06:05 CDT
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When I read the phrase "vapid whore", I knew I had to review! I love that phrase! I am getting invested in this story and cannot wait to see how it develops. I love how you show the constant yet shifting nature of their relationship. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: cyberdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 16:25 CDT
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Something's wrong if Kagome would flinch at the word Mate. What happened. that preview has me more eager for the sequel so hurry up and get it out.
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Title: Dammit! You made me cry!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You know how much i loved this story...you hurt me to DEATH with that ending. GRRRR -I guess that's payback for suicide rain ne? LOL This sequel...you better not break them up..i'd just DIE! Start writing -This minute!!!!
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Reviewed By: ~Maggie~ On: August 23, 2005 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ark! I'm only on chapter nine but--but I don't know if I can go on! I'm in love with their friendship and I don't want to see them go through that pain....You immedietly had me hooked to this story from the beginning. I love the shy Inuyasha and the kind eyed Kagome and how they were brought together. Every litte chapter as they grew brought a smile to my face and some parts had me gasp. Lol--especially when he was like "When did you get those?!" That really happened to you huh? *pats* I don't think you've made Kikyo overly pycho ((some people go all out)) and I thought everyone was pretty in character so foo on those people who tell you otherwise ^^ I think my favorite chapter so far was the 8 ((at the club)) Let me tell ya hun, Inuyasha and Kagome dancing? That was incrediably hott!! ^^ And though I really want them to be together I'm glad Kagome brought them back to their senses before they did something that would have changed their world completely ((because we all know they would have!!)) I love this story and I'll just tell myself to shut up and read it ((they're going to be together, aren't they?!)) Your story is absolutely adorable and the first I've been able to read all the way through 'till this point instead of just searching for good parts ((Hehe)) Lovely writing and much love to ya! ^^
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Title: Thats a good end
Reviewed By: Crimson Warrior On: August 22, 2005 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great and when you start making a sequle I will try to be one of the first to read and review I hope. Oh and are you going to have Kag or Inu cheat on each other but then they get back together. Cause I'm a Kags/inu, mir/san, and sess/rin fan so if you make a prologue just say if it will be the same character parings as it was in this one.
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Reviewed By: Hybrid Kitten (formally known as Sangokirara711 but MM.org won't let me log in) On: August 22, 2005 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happy you updated finally ^^ I really enjoy this story! And you mentioned having an artists' block, ne? Man, you made a good recovery. Everytime I get an artists' block... I don't always come back soo good ^^;; I can' t wait t read the sequel ^^
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