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Reviewed By: Me On: July 18, 2007 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! A happy ending that dosn't leave me wondering "what the hell just happened!!!" everything was answered, and wrapped up. Cute ending by the way with Yami, it had that awwww moment. Again that was a wonderful story. I simply love your writing style. Your right...it's very sad that it's over. Yay a cookie for me for my rant about Joey and Seto!!! I'm looking forward to reading other works. Make sure you make your RK fic easy to understand for me cause i've only seen about 10 episodes...:(
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 01:06 CDT
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Good chapter. I love the way you tied almost everything up. The three can take a break form the shadows and Yami can take a break from RL but can still visit. He has his son back and it is good for now.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: July 15, 2007 19:28 CDT
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teehee - his dragons rock and rule just like your story :P
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Reviewed By: azure eyes On: July 13, 2007 01:07 CDT
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Wonderful story!!! I hope you decide to write others after this. one request- Joey, Seth, Seto lemon plzzzzzzzzz????!!!
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Reviewed By: azure eyes On: July 13, 2007 01:07 CDT
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Wonderful story!!! I hope you decide to write others after this. one request- Joey, Seth, Seto lemon plzzzzzzzzz????!!!
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Reviewed By: Me On: July 12, 2007 23:28 CDT
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All i can say to you after hearing how sad you are about ending your story is: The end of one adventure is the beginning of another. I hope that you continue to write, and post. Your writing is very addicting.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 01:41 CDT
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Great chapter. I am so glad that they are all okay. The dragons are so cute with their masters around. Poor Kaiba, at least he got to help Seth before he was smothered in dragons. I hope they can get all the Hikaris and Yamis sorted and separated again.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 06:02 CDT
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Great chapter. I hope the Yamis will be okay and the Hikaris will not kill them. I'm glad Jo is starting to remember.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: July 01, 2007 00:45 CDT
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Oh it's all good - Marik can come back later (tho why HE left is beyond me) and answering your reviews after the story's over is chill too. :) We all eagerly await the next chappies of course.
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Reviewed By: xminkx On: July 01, 2007 00:17 CDT
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Omg!!! More chapters! I must say I was absolutely thrilled when you said the story was coming to a resolution, although currently it seems there might be just a teensy bit more to deal with. You know, I felt bad for Marik being uh...reintegrated?...and missing out on the action, but the Millennium Rod does need to be in Seth's hands, I suppose. And as for the priest, I say good call...obviously he left after forseeing the inevitable between Seto and Jo, lol, which mercifully was not as angsty as I expected. Yet again, my soul is in epic conflict because I do and don't want to see your story end. Ah well, it gives me an opportunity to read all three installments. (I actually reread Just Shoot Me and realized that the Starbucks parts are actually funnier now that I am an employee there, haha.) Anyhow, i will conclude by saying that the last two chapters were awesome ('cept for some grammar...I think you need to add the word Kaiba to your Word dictionary, so it will automatically mark Kiaba as a mistake)and do keep updating before I start to have seizures from all the suspense. Oh, and thanks for treasuring my reviews, lol, I'm glad you find them worth it just as I do yours. ^___^ PS: Now that the show ended, do you watch GX or prefer the old Series? This is only out of curiosity; myself, I don't get GX and against all odds I have found other obsessions. But I still love Seto and the Priest as my OTP. ^^
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: June 28, 2007 00:10 CDT
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lol - They actually seemed pretty in character (for the most part) to me - You always act different with yourself. Especially when you're plotting :P - I have to admit, I'm sad this story's ending, but I think I'll get over it when I reread the whole thing in one sitting. And then hound dog you with critiques like you didn't know could exist :D
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Reviewed By: Me On: June 19, 2007 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just happened to stumble upon this story, and instantly feel in love. I love the way you put Seto through hell, and have him doing something completely unsetolike,(listining to Yami, and doing magic for example)yet it's written so realistically that I can believe it. The lemon with Seth and Seto was really good. You showed the stubborness and determination really well throughout the entire scene. That was Joey who finally yelled wasn't it? awww...good timing... I only have two requests 1) update plz!!! 2) be nicer to Joey. He has realy been through a lot. Seto has to, but Joey is the one going through all the physical pain, and trauma, while Seto is going through all the emotional...hmmm that's kind of funny in a way... two people in love, one protecting the other from emotional pain, while the other protects his love from physical... Sry for my ranting...update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: March 19, 2007 20:58 CDT
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YUM! I GET COOKIES! - Finally glad you got it up and interestingly enough there won't very many errors to find. Kudos to you. :D - But... I get the feeling the characters are a little OOC... I wonder if that's just because so much time's gone by? Ah well. 'Til next chapter. :D
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Reviewed By: xminkx On: March 15, 2007 17:57 CDT
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OMG! You're alive! And as you probably guessed, I LOVE this chapter. I really wasn't expecting a lemon between Seto and Seth, so this was a nice surprise. You're right, they both have no sense of seme or uke (annoying, but sometimes it works), and I think you wrote it really well in conjunction to their little heartfelt talk. The feelings and emotions were so appropriate as was the way they interacted with each other. Really pretty. -sigh- I feel bad, because now I must envy you. ^^ As for the rest of the story, I have mixed feelings about it. Happy that everything is coming together, but sad that it is going to end. I think I really will cry when it ends. Your story is so unique to me because it gives all the characters time in the plot whereas others just focus entirely on one or two characters. Your fic also captures their personalities and reactions so realistically, but also with a hint of magic, which can always be expected. Well, I think i shall end it here now that I have rambled enough. PS. I was under the impression it was Akhenaden, but i kind of abandoned the theory in the middle for some reason. So, I dunno if I get a cookie for that lol.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 08:02 CDT
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Good chapter. I'm glad you updated. I will enjoy the virtual cookies. I know Seth is worried about nothing he will not turn into his father. I hope Ryou Bakura, and Jo will be okay.
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