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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: January 02, 2006 00:04 CST
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I don't know why no one else is reviewing. I adore your story and read it the second I see that a new chapter's up in my inbox. But I haven't been reviewing because I've been WAY, inhumanely really, busy lately making sure I have work and trying not to starve while all my bills all the time. Plus I only sometimes have things to say. I only review when I definitely want to mention something. Meaning that those times that I've said how much I like your story meant that that particular chappie REALLY was enjoyable (and, as you can see, I'm barely making sense here - I haven't been able to finish one of my own sentences in forever @_@). But there's always me here to love your story. Even if I'm lazy about showing it :p. Perhaps the others are as well? Well, you have a happy holidays (rather, hope you had good ones) and keep on writing! It always brightens my day to see that little update in my mailbox. :D
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: October 25, 2005 20:52 CDT
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eh heh... I sorry. I've gone and done teh lazy thing once again of reading your chappies as soon as they're posted, but not reviewing a damn one of them. Ma bad? Anyways, interesting as always and I adore reading this to no end of course. However, I think you may be cutting too much of Yuai out or something because, yeah I know that she and the magician are married, but when the hell did they start sleeping together? She and yugi never went that far... Or even hinted at even wanting to. Feh, I just think it landed quite abruptly on me, is all, though she's obviously far more likely to do that with her honey rather than even yugi. I do have a request: can we see how they met and ended up together? 0:D I think some background on that might be cool. As well as seeing what the hell Seth's been up to while Seto's been accusing magic of bullshit 'n all that. Oh, and one question: when did Seto konk out? Was it when he first got to the Shadow Realm, or actually at seeing mokie (he's the shit! Hurrah, hazzah, and bring on the adventure with him and teh theif!)? Hope ya wrist gets better and can't wait (as always) for the rest of the story.
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Reviewed By: The Panasonic Princess (too absorbed in my work to log in ^.^) On: October 04, 2005 16:04 CDT
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Wow. Just... wow. When I started reading this (like, at the beginning of Emergence-- hey, I'm a bad reviewer), I never expected a plot like this. Your foreshadowing is excellent and your characters are believable. That's a feat when you're talking about fanfiction, especially that of a popular anime. I don't believe I've ever read a fanfiction that I felt this involved in (even though I don't review like I should). I've dragged my friends into this. I'm seriously going to be disappointed when this ends. Just promise me you'll keep writing *something* when it does. Please? ^.^
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Reviewed By: `Daebird On: October 02, 2005 10:33 CDT
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That was great. One would think I'd be used to the surprises by now. ^^ Wow, the newest hot spot this year seems to be Shadow Realm. Yep, all we need now are some cheap souveniers and loud brochures. And its Seth!-hugs- It's so cute how he's keeping his desires under control...especially with a horny Jo. But I think he and his hikari are already introduced? It's all well. Poor Ryou and poor Bakura; well, at least if he tries hard to rescue Ryou, it'll be worth it in the end. Oh! and I see a reference to that (stupid) movie! Although I am unsure if Anubis was before or after Yami's time...Anyway, I am still waiting for the grand unveling of the villian (and the dazzling, riveting secret of Jessica's baby). Keep writing! But don't strain your hand too much, lol!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 04:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job. Poor Yami to have accidentally killed your wife and son while playing a game. I hope Seto wakes up soon and gets busy.
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Title: Exellent
Reviewed By: Taji Kanjinnamida On: September 26, 2005 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, I would have never guessed that the eye would go after Yuai. Great job on th OC's, they're not MarySue's! I do have to agree with you on your reply, a good author can make any pairing work.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 08:21 CDT
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Love this story. I hope Seto and Jou get together so Seto can start using his brain and get them all home including Ryou and Yuai.
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Title: Awwwwwwwww!
Reviewed By: Taji Kanjinnamida On: August 19, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never been a seto/Jou fan but righ after they were reunited I cried! I love you stories and the seen realy professioal. Great job i read them alll on the same day that i found this series. Yami/Yugi are my favoriter couple ever, and that is unusual because almost every other cuople i like is cannon but you did an excellant job portraying not cannon pairings. excelent thank u so much for writting this story!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 00:05 CDT
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I hope Kaiba can get enough rest and put his mind together enough to get them home. Poor Mokuba is so over whelmed. Great chapter.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 07:03 CDT
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I hope Kaiba can get enough rest and put his mind together enough to get them home. Poor Mokuba is so over whelmed. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 07:04 CDT
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*looks shifty* ah I've been on holiday and so missed the last chapter...I swear I used to be better at this whole reviewing thing! lol oh well at least I'm here now. You mean mean mean person Jo and Kaiba can't go back? but thats so sad! Aww its all so yummy and angsty I love it! My heart practically breaks for Mokie I mean no kid have to deal with that....oh well i;m sure it'll come right in the end.
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Reviewed By: emeraldisles [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh...No! The cliffy is going to take over. Poor Poor Seto, I hope everything turns out alright for him and that they, (as in Jo and Seto), can go back to the real world, it would be a shame to see everyone else suffer. Yami is acting the hero, but I love the gentleness all the Yami's show the hikari's and the hikari's reactions to the events that are unfolding. If in fact the hikari's are in danger though, considering the guarding by the yami's, why hasn't there been an attack on them. It only seems that the attacks are going after Seto at the moment so there would be no reason to protect the light's at the moment. Right? Well, that is my rant. I am praying you update soon, I absolutly love your stories! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up to the good work!
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Title: I love it.
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 02:03 CDT
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I am glad that Mokuba is safe. Kaiba is going to see Jo and maybe yuai. I wonder if he will be able to hold onto his sanity through this. Hopefully, seeing Jo will help him. He really needs a rest. I will try to be patient. I am really enjoying this.
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Reviewed By: 'Daebird On: July 19, 2005 22:03 CDT
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Wow, I can honestly say I love the way you write the characters. Seeing Kaiba's rather submissive reaction does make the reader look at things less superficially. The chapter was still very angsty despite the humor and as always, the suspense is omnipresent. I really think your best point is writing situations and settings realistically and originally. I mean, the way you write, it makes Shadow magic, evil loonies, teen billionaires and yamis all seem like normal real life. That was what attracted me to your works and it's why i continue to like them. Anyway, I'm glad Kaiba will see Jo, I'm sure he'll feel a hell lot better. Now only if Mokuba and the rest could figure out what happened. Waiting for the next installment. Good luck.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 13:46 CDT
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*looks around nervously* urm hiya!! Long time no see hunni. Let me start of by saying I am so SORRY that i've missed all of this it is truely awsome as you always are and i've missed thi so much, so my apologies!!! Anyway I love this new arc and all of the cunning plots and twists you have, serousl how do you think up such clever things. *bows* you are wonderful. Can't wait for the next chappie xx
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