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Reviewed By: `Daebird On: July 13, 2005 07:07 CDT
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First I would like to say, I love the whole idea of the Shadow Realm and the monsters in human forms. I've only seen a few other fics that have the sort of thing...ok, just one other...so points to you for originality. ^^ It's nice to see Jo feeling better and as for Mrs. Jonouchi, I think you made her behave quite...normally as befit her personality and as a human being. 'Twould have been boring if everyone was so tragic and quiet and lovey dovey. More points to you and several cookies or w/e obsessed fans offer to authors. Also loving the suspense not only with the bad guy, but with Yuai and Bakura. Captive Passions too. :p Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 03:30 CDT
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Love the update. Who is this bad guy. He really hates Kaiba. I'm glad that Jo is feeling better and back to normal at least physically, mentally is another story. Great update. Please update soon please.
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Reviewed By: `Daebird On: July 07, 2005 10:17 CDT
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I totally loved all the drama in the last two chapters. It's all beginning to connect together and yet it's still full of suspense. Yuai as the Duel Monster, I can say I saw that coming. And is it safe to assume that the man had the Sennen Eye? Very much looking forward to the next update. On a note, I love Captive Passions. ^^. And I wouldn't be surprised if Jessica's baby did end up looking like Yami. -claps- yay, everything is working out. ^^
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: June 30, 2005 12:41 CDT
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Yeah! More kaiba-magick! Though I think MY idea wasn't too bad. ~snickers at magician of black chaos scared of a snarling ball of fluff~ :P Can't wait for more (how long will this thing be anyways?).
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Title: In love with this
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 03:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You didn't really kill her. The red eyes black dragon is there. Really cool. I hope they can fix Jou up. Poor Kaiba and the rest I hope the spirits can figure out what happened. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: June 20, 2005 22:01 CDT
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...evil mother... ~trails off in language unsuitable for drunken sailors~ They cut off the rest of my post! From the parenthesis on: (cheap imiatation of an angel smilie) - I'm referring to this little guy: 0:D
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: June 20, 2005 21:59 CDT
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LOL! Humiliation, though you're forte, is a hilarious venture! The beginning of this chapter was hilarious, the end, an evil cliffie from hell! What d'ya mean he lied?! She'd better not be really dead forever! That lie had better mean to be that she dies when she's supposed to, then the knife revives her and that's how the curse is lifted! hmm... that sounds like an idea I may use if you don't actually... >D See ya next chappie! Oh! P.S. Seto + Magic = hilariously interesting. Will there be more? 0:D (
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn I wanted her to break the curse but not to die! Poor girl, I hope at least the curse is broken. I bet the Eye is looking for Jou. He has to be the saddest and most depressed of all. Update soon, please. I still love the story even though you killed Yuai.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: June 13, 2005 14:55 CDT
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That's good to hear. I'd say not to worry about using Yuai too much, but that's probably because I really like her character and can't stop laughing at how much she detests her millenium eye. I can't wait to see how this goes. That's a neat thing to have Kaiba pulling a magick traser to find Jounouchi. The one thing we all know he would never do! heehee... Damn, I really can't wait to see where this'll go. And this is the last arc in the entire story line, right? ...wow...
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama (not signed in...) On: June 11, 2005 17:36 CDT
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Hey! Um...wow I totally didn't grasp that whole Bakura-Pegasus conversaton. It didn't make sense to me at all. Are you saying that Yuai's gonna die??...how sad! She should so cheat death >.>. All her other deaths were really upsetting too...great story! Find Jou, Kaiba! Find him quick! >.
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Reviewed By: `Daebird On: June 11, 2005 13:34 CDT
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It's quite annoying when reviews don't show.:sigh: Anyway, I thought both the chapters were so, so wonderful. So, I had been right in guessing it was Yuai who was to die ^^. Poor child, though to have lived like that for how many lifetimes? Let her cheat death. As for Kaiba's haunting, I'm not supposed to find that amusing, now am I? But it was so well written and the emotions, the drama...god, it's good. Now, that Seto has Yami, I hope Jou can tough it out. And for a clarification, Jessica naturally had a female sibling who became a male or vice versa? Whatever it is, sounds like a damn good soap.
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pegasus is so funny and so is Bakura in this chpater. Great work with Kaiba trying to concentrate. He better hurry. Poor little Yuai reliving her life over and over. I hope she can break the cycle. Update soon, Please.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: June 03, 2005 22:36 CDT
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Ok. Enough of my lazyness. I've been reading every chapter of this story the same day that you've posted it, so now it's time to feed the muses! ...except it's really funny when they whimper... >D Anyways, this story is definitely much darker than the other ones. Especially at the end of this latest chapter. How bad is gonna get, you think? :) God I love reading every single one of your stories! They're all really great and entertaining and it's ok that Yuai has the necklace. She clearly doesn't want it, so it's all good! ~snickers at her trying to bet it~ There are a few grammer errors in some of the chappies, like, you add a few unneccessary words on occasion; ex. "Isis was chatting to a large man portly man"; that kind of thing. No biggie, but a review should include critiquing if possible! :) Well, that's my word on things and you probably won't hear from my lazy arse again for yet another few chappies, but we shall see. Read ya next chappie 'n keep the beyond great work!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Jou! He gets raped so often the poor boy. I don't think it will him that dies though. Maybe< anzu? She is the only one who can go as far as I am concerned or the bad guys who stole Jou. It is an evil plot and I love it. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 05:16 CDT
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woah! intense! I hope Yuai doesn't get hit by a car!! The Jou ghost with Kaiba was awesome. Jou's dream was sad T.T. I want everything to be okayyyy...heh. Oh I loooved the poker game! ^^;;. I can't wait for you to update...and entertain me more!
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