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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pegasus is so funny and so is Bakura in this chpater. Great work with Kaiba trying to concentrate. He better hurry. Poor little Yuai reliving her life over and over. I hope she can break the cycle. Update soon, Please.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: June 03, 2005 22:36 CDT
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Ok. Enough of my lazyness. I've been reading every chapter of this story the same day that you've posted it, so now it's time to feed the muses! ...except it's really funny when they whimper... >D Anyways, this story is definitely much darker than the other ones. Especially at the end of this latest chapter. How bad is gonna get, you think? :) God I love reading every single one of your stories! They're all really great and entertaining and it's ok that Yuai has the necklace. She clearly doesn't want it, so it's all good! ~snickers at her trying to bet it~ There are a few grammer errors in some of the chappies, like, you add a few unneccessary words on occasion; ex. "Isis was chatting to a large man portly man"; that kind of thing. No biggie, but a review should include critiquing if possible! :) Well, that's my word on things and you probably won't hear from my lazy arse again for yet another few chappies, but we shall see. Read ya next chappie 'n keep the beyond great work!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Jou! He gets raped so often the poor boy. I don't think it will him that dies though. Maybe< anzu? She is the only one who can go as far as I am concerned or the bad guys who stole Jou. It is an evil plot and I love it. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 05:16 CDT
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woah! intense! I hope Yuai doesn't get hit by a car!! The Jou ghost with Kaiba was awesome. Jou's dream was sad T.T. I want everything to be okayyyy...heh. Oh I loooved the poker game! ^^;;. I can't wait for you to update...and entertain me more!
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Reviewed By: 'Daebird On: May 31, 2005 08:02 CDT
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Damn. Take a guy to the edge of sanity and then give him a push. You are evil! I like it! But what I find most admirable is that you have an OC with a Sennen Item, yet the story is still so wondertastic. Usually at this point, I'd find at least something to be uncomfortable about. I read this chapter about twice and then I figured, with the way things are going, you could indeed turn this into a Seto/Seth/Jo. The Sennen Rod does have a tendency to act up alone when Seto's in a crisis. Anyway, that's my lame idea for the day, but you'll be happy to know I've decided to give up figuring out who the bad guy is and leave things in your most capable hands. Keep writing. ^^v
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama (not signed in? O.o) On: May 29, 2005 21:05 CDT
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Ah! This story is so cool, like the others, yet so confusing!! @.@. Maybe it's because I read too many stories at once ^^;;. Heh..but I hope Jou survives...and Seto too T.T I feel so bad for him...well, can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep Jou alive!! And I have a feeling Yuai is in danger too...o.o
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another very well written chapter. The mystery is getting deeper. Will they find Jou. Who is supposed to die? Should we guess. I love this stroy. Great job! Updates soon.
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Reviewed By: Daebird- On: May 25, 2005 10:23 CDT
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And the rest of the review >
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Reviewed By: `Daebird On: May 25, 2005 10:20 CDT
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I can't believe I put off reviewing. >
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Title: me again bookwormloverjen
Reviewed By: bwlj On: May 22, 2005 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its got me hooked, you know how to write great stories, i think that i might just read the others again ^_^
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 07:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. I hope Yugi gets a clue as to what is wrong with his "girlfriend". Poor Joey. I want him back I can't stand to see Seto suffer.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 10:35 CDT
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im in love with your other stories that come before this one, and frankly i'm in love with this as well, even if its the first chapter, hell i love it, plz keep it going
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I just finished emergence and started this. Ilove it please update soon.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: JH-babe On: May 17, 2005 07:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still going I see? A tri-quel eh? LOL Ok...one question though...where and when in "Emergence" did Jou get missing/killed? I saw where he was learning how to croquet and all that, but when did he leave? I'm gonna have to save this story and re-read it I think...oy...^^
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Reviewed By: 'Daebird On: May 16, 2005 22:08 CDT
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Omg, it's up! ...well obviously...anyway. Poor Yugi, you'd think he'd be going into orbit with his best firend missing and all. Kaiba too, but he's so sweet when he's brooding. I loved how he just tries to pretend nothing happened, that's so Seto. Kura lost the Sennen eye..wait, is the evil person Tenma? Yes? I should probably stop guessing before I drive myself insane.lol. Keep writing!
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