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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh/She-Who-Will-Change-Her-Name-AGAIN-Later-On On: March 02, 2007 21:11 CST
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Hey there - Because of life I've only just now realized that you've gone MIA on us! You're still continuing right? Just in complete lurve w/your FF right? ~insert yugi-adorable eyes here that can't be resisted at all~
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Reviewed By: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates On: December 22, 2006 03:00 CST
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You know, I think Jame is going about things the wrong way. What she needs to do is to tell Kaiba that if he gives her a ridiculous amount of paid vacation she will stop trying to get fired and just resign herself to outlandish pay and a cushy job with an insane amout of leeway and power.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 01:44 CST
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Great chapter. I guess it is probably Seto's or Seth's father. I can't wait to see who the dragons end up with. Maybe pegasus?
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: November 17, 2006 16:31 CST
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Alrighties then! Works better for me anyways... Umm... Actually I'm really thinking of Seth's Father Akunadin-whatever because of the give-you-all-the-power-in-the-world line that's in there. But who do YOU think it is? ~snicker~
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 10:22 CST
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Poor dragons. Don't make them wait too long. Good chapter. I hope Mokuba is okay.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh/DreamwindsofJasmine On: November 01, 2006 01:14 CST
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:D - ah ha! The puppy dog eyes work! I shall use them once again in the near future >D. ...can't wait, can't wait...wanna see more of the story... And though the dragons must wait, it'll be yet one more romance for me to enjoy :D; so I is coo wit' it. I do have one question though... Since it's been so long since the beginning of this story/trilogy that you've got going on here (and must excellent read that it is), would you mind a one final, REAL, critique at the end of it all that tells you of all loopholes, rushed-ness, lacking of details, and whatnot? I tend to see the whole effect of the story better as I read through it all at once and making side notes at the same time. So I just wanted to see if you wanted praise and encouragement as you write and then a real review at the end of it all, or if you'd prefer an actual review of each and every chapter (as well as what you've got so far)? :) Now it's your turn to vote! Bwahaha! ...oh look! Ice Cream! ~darts off, completely and utterly forgetting what she was talking about~
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Reviewed By: DreamwindsofJasmine [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 11:19 CDT
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...oh yeah... DreamwindsofJasmine is actually me, Sorceress Sarrkh (and I won't use this name for long, so don't expect to see much of it if I can help it). Sorry about that, I hadn't realized I was logged in. ~scratches head sheepishly~ Heh...
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Reviewed By: DreamwindsofJasmine [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 11:17 CDT
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~has just read dragonmaster's review and immediately ditches original intention to poke at author to see if she's alive~ ...You know... She may just have something there... Kinda might be interesting, even though I don't think she's in this story much, if at all (will need to reread it all). But, anyways, I just wanted to say, that I love your story, I WILL need to reread the entire thing (once it's finished) in order to find out if there are any loopholes, AND, the most important part of all: ~insert puppy dog eyes of doom here~ Why, oh why, haven't ye updated yet? T_T Will you please please please update soon??? ~insert tear filled cutesy blue eyes white dragon eyes here~
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Title: Greetings
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 10:41 CDT
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Hi Talmin, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. but you have been doing a wonderful job. I'm still very impressed....though I've been thinking a bit about Seths pairing...you were saying something about you would be willing to listen to suggestions, well what about him and Serenity, I mean it would be perfect, Jo with Seto, Serenity with Seth, and seeing as how She's one for the few people without a significant other...but that's just my thought. Anyway, I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 03:45 CDT
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Good chapter. I think you should go with you planned pairing. Good story.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: July 13, 2006 01:44 CDT
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LOL. Same mistake? ~snicker~ And the marriage proposal is endearing and flattering, however, unlike your characters, I unfortunately happen to be straight. Btw, for some reason I can't seem to stop laughing at Pegasus' "It's after me, it's after me again". It sounds so... paranoid...? :D And the comment after... ~rolls with laughter; then abruptly realizes she's completely off topic and babbling~ Ok, back to business. My choice is the authoress' choice. Author instinct is surprisingly right on for things... But I definitely wouldn't mind seeing the threesome with Jounouchi and Seto (mostly because of all the hinting :P). But I choose your instincts over all. See ya next time (will be as quick as this chapter though? You took by surprise there... So fast!)
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Reviewed By: Velvetina-too lazy! On: July 09, 2006 11:01 CDT
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YAY that was amazing, but I totally cannot believe you left it there. I'm going to die with the suspense...ok a tad dramatic but wow. It was amazing. I loved the bit where Yami told Jou to find Kaiba...and he did! *Dance* It was so cute, all of Jou's thoughts. Please update soon!! *Smile* Cuddles, Velvetina x
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: July 08, 2006 20:51 CDT
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Goddamn woman! I love your plot bunnies! I love your sense of humor! I love your sadistic nature! I love reading this every single time a new chapter shows! And I love that as smart as Kaiba is, he can be pretty damn dumb when he's being his defiant old self that is so essential to his well-being. :D Bring on more!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 02:52 CDT
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Good chapter. Kaiba is an idiot. I hope everything turns out well for them and they find out who is doing this. Great job.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: June 24, 2006 15:15 CDT
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oh yeah! And congrats on the flu sharing! That's pure talent girl!
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