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| "Psyche" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: Me On: June 19, 2007 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just happened to stumble upon this story, and instantly feel in love. I love the way you put Seto through hell, and have him doing something completely unsetolike,(listining to Yami, and doing magic for example)yet it's written so realistically that I can believe it. The lemon with Seth and Seto was really good. You showed the stubborness and determination really well throughout the entire scene. That was Joey who finally yelled wasn't it? awww...good timing... I only have two requests 1) update plz!!! 2) be nicer to Joey. He has realy been through a lot. Seto has to, but Joey is the one going through all the physical pain, and trauma, while Seto is going through all the emotional...hmmm that's kind of funny in a way... two people in love, one protecting the other from emotional pain, while the other protects his love from physical... Sry for my ranting...update soon!!!
| Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: March 19, 2007 20:58 CDT
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YUM! I GET COOKIES! - Finally glad you got it up and interestingly enough there won't very many errors to find. Kudos to you. :D - But... I get the feeling the characters are a little OOC... I wonder if that's just because so much time's gone by? Ah well. 'Til next chapter. :D
| Reviewed By: xminkx On: March 15, 2007 17:57 CDT
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OMG! You're alive! And as you probably guessed, I LOVE this chapter. I really wasn't expecting a lemon between Seto and Seth, so this was a nice surprise. You're right, they both have no sense of seme or uke (annoying, but sometimes it works), and I think you wrote it really well in conjunction to their little heartfelt talk. The feelings and emotions were so appropriate as was the way they interacted with each other. Really pretty. -sigh- I feel bad, because now I must envy you. ^^ As for the rest of the story, I have mixed feelings about it. Happy that everything is coming together, but sad that it is going to end. I think I really will cry when it ends. Your story is so unique to me because it gives all the characters time in the plot whereas others just focus entirely on one or two characters. Your fic also captures their personalities and reactions so realistically, but also with a hint of magic, which can always be expected. Well, I think i shall end it here now that I have rambled enough. PS. I was under the impression it was Akhenaden, but i kind of abandoned the theory in the middle for some reason. So, I dunno if I get a cookie for that lol.
| Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 08:02 CDT
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Good chapter. I'm glad you updated. I will enjoy the virtual cookies. I know Seth is worried about nothing he will not turn into his father. I hope Ryou Bakura, and Jo will be okay.
| Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh/She-Who-Will-Change-Her-Name-AGAIN-Later-On On: March 02, 2007 21:11 CST
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Hey there - Because of life I've only just now realized that you've gone MIA on us! You're still continuing right? Just in complete lurve w/your FF right? ~insert yugi-adorable eyes here that can't be resisted at all~
| Reviewed By: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates On: December 22, 2006 03:00 CST
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You know, I think Jame is going about things the wrong way. What she needs to do is to tell Kaiba that if he gives her a ridiculous amount of paid vacation she will stop trying to get fired and just resign herself to outlandish pay and a cushy job with an insane amout of leeway and power.
| Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 01:44 CST
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Great chapter. I guess it is probably Seto's or Seth's father. I can't wait to see who the dragons end up with. Maybe pegasus?
| Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: November 17, 2006 16:31 CST
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Alrighties then! Works better for me anyways... Umm... Actually I'm really thinking of Seth's Father Akunadin-whatever because of the give-you-all-the-power-in-the-world line that's in there. But who do YOU think it is? ~snicker~
| Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 10:22 CST
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Poor dragons. Don't make them wait too long. Good chapter. I hope Mokuba is okay.
| Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh/DreamwindsofJasmine On: November 01, 2006 01:14 CST
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:D - ah ha! The puppy dog eyes work! I shall use them once again in the near future >D. ...can't wait, can't wait...wanna see more of the story... And though the dragons must wait, it'll be yet one more romance for me to enjoy :D; so I is coo wit' it. I do have one question though... Since it's been so long since the beginning of this story/trilogy that you've got going on here (and must excellent read that it is), would you mind a one final, REAL, critique at the end of it all that tells you of all loopholes, rushed-ness, lacking of details, and whatnot? I tend to see the whole effect of the story better as I read through it all at once and making side notes at the same time. So I just wanted to see if you wanted praise and encouragement as you write and then a real review at the end of it all, or if you'd prefer an actual review of each and every chapter (as well as what you've got so far)? :) Now it's your turn to vote! Bwahaha! ...oh look! Ice Cream! ~darts off, completely and utterly forgetting what she was talking about~
| Reviewed By: DreamwindsofJasmine [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 11:19 CDT
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...oh yeah... DreamwindsofJasmine is actually me, Sorceress Sarrkh (and I won't use this name for long, so don't expect to see much of it if I can help it). Sorry about that, I hadn't realized I was logged in. ~scratches head sheepishly~ Heh...
| Reviewed By: DreamwindsofJasmine [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 11:17 CDT
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~has just read dragonmaster's review and immediately ditches original intention to poke at author to see if she's alive~ ...You know... She may just have something there... Kinda might be interesting, even though I don't think she's in this story much, if at all (will need to reread it all). But, anyways, I just wanted to say, that I love your story, I WILL need to reread the entire thing (once it's finished) in order to find out if there are any loopholes, AND, the most important part of all: ~insert puppy dog eyes of doom here~ Why, oh why, haven't ye updated yet? T_T Will you please please please update soon??? ~insert tear filled cutesy blue eyes white dragon eyes here~
| Title: Greetings
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 10:41 CDT
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Hi Talmin, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. but you have been doing a wonderful job. I'm still very impressed....though I've been thinking a bit about Seths pairing...you were saying something about you would be willing to listen to suggestions, well what about him and Serenity, I mean it would be perfect, Jo with Seto, Serenity with Seth, and seeing as how She's one for the few people without a significant other...but that's just my thought. Anyway, I can't wait to see the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 03:45 CDT
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Good chapter. I think you should go with you planned pairing. Good story.
| Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: July 13, 2006 01:44 CDT
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LOL. Same mistake? ~snicker~ And the marriage proposal is endearing and flattering, however, unlike your characters, I unfortunately happen to be straight. Btw, for some reason I can't seem to stop laughing at Pegasus' "It's after me, it's after me again". It sounds so... paranoid...? :D And the comment after... ~rolls with laughter; then abruptly realizes she's completely off topic and babbling~ Ok, back to business. My choice is the authoress' choice. Author instinct is surprisingly right on for things... But I definitely wouldn't mind seeing the threesome with Jounouchi and Seto (mostly because of all the hinting :P). But I choose your instincts over all. See ya next time (will be as quick as this chapter though? You took by surprise there... So fast!)
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