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Reviewed By: Velvetina(too lazy to log in) On: March 01, 2006 08:20 CST
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Lol woot, an update how awesome!! I love Jame, she's so totally kickass. Awwww Poor Seto *huggles CEO* Get better soon sweetie. I adore your Seth, he works so so well in this story and he's been so supportive of Jo, very cute! I hope that they can work it out :) Yay the whole gang has rolled up, now to see what they manage to do. Mwahaha Yami's gonna have to be in charge of the Shadow Realm, too funny. I'm looking foward to seeing his reaction to that particular bit of news.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 09:19 CST
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Tis me! Sorry that I haven't been around for a very very long time, life seems to get in the way and then I figured that I really ought to catch up on the whole plot properly so over the past day I've re-read Chrysillis and Emergance to make sure that I can once again understand what is going on. Woot Seth! He is so cool. Are you gonna make it a threesome with Seth, Jou and Seto? That would be extraordinarily cool!! I'm now dying to know what happens next. Do they all get back ok? Will they all end up living in the shadow realm. And how on earth is Jame coping back at Kaibacorp? Lol
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: February 09, 2006 20:05 CST
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Oh yeah! Teh question... Um... I like it how it is; as memory form (in english: Him reliving it as a memory, so then it would be present tense). It flows better that way I think.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: February 09, 2006 20:03 CST
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Hilarious as always - you just have to love those food references (I sure ain't gonna eat there even when I'm dead and dared to). Maybe someone should get food poisoning...? Might be fun - especially for Bakura! And Pepi and Yami... Well, the plot thickens, now doesn't it? :D Well, I read this chapter yesterday, so I don't remember any critiques (nothing that stood out anyways), so I guess I can only say that this was another well-done chapter. I'll try harder to come up with something to critisize you about next time, k? :D Enjoyed immensely; Sorceress_Sarrkh
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: January 02, 2006 00:04 CST
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I don't know why no one else is reviewing. I adore your story and read it the second I see that a new chapter's up in my inbox. But I haven't been reviewing because I've been WAY, inhumanely really, busy lately making sure I have work and trying not to starve while all my bills all the time. Plus I only sometimes have things to say. I only review when I definitely want to mention something. Meaning that those times that I've said how much I like your story meant that that particular chappie REALLY was enjoyable (and, as you can see, I'm barely making sense here - I haven't been able to finish one of my own sentences in forever @_@). But there's always me here to love your story. Even if I'm lazy about showing it :p. Perhaps the others are as well? Well, you have a happy holidays (rather, hope you had good ones) and keep on writing! It always brightens my day to see that little update in my mailbox. :D
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: October 25, 2005 20:52 CDT
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eh heh... I sorry. I've gone and done teh lazy thing once again of reading your chappies as soon as they're posted, but not reviewing a damn one of them. Ma bad? Anyways, interesting as always and I adore reading this to no end of course. However, I think you may be cutting too much of Yuai out or something because, yeah I know that she and the magician are married, but when the hell did they start sleeping together? She and yugi never went that far... Or even hinted at even wanting to. Feh, I just think it landed quite abruptly on me, is all, though she's obviously far more likely to do that with her honey rather than even yugi. I do have a request: can we see how they met and ended up together? 0:D I think some background on that might be cool. As well as seeing what the hell Seth's been up to while Seto's been accusing magic of bullshit 'n all that. Oh, and one question: when did Seto konk out? Was it when he first got to the Shadow Realm, or actually at seeing mokie (he's the shit! Hurrah, hazzah, and bring on the adventure with him and teh theif!)? Hope ya wrist gets better and can't wait (as always) for the rest of the story.
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Reviewed By: The Panasonic Princess (too absorbed in my work to log in ^.^) On: October 04, 2005 16:04 CDT
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Wow. Just... wow. When I started reading this (like, at the beginning of Emergence-- hey, I'm a bad reviewer), I never expected a plot like this. Your foreshadowing is excellent and your characters are believable. That's a feat when you're talking about fanfiction, especially that of a popular anime. I don't believe I've ever read a fanfiction that I felt this involved in (even though I don't review like I should). I've dragged my friends into this. I'm seriously going to be disappointed when this ends. Just promise me you'll keep writing *something* when it does. Please? ^.^
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Reviewed By: `Daebird On: October 02, 2005 10:33 CDT
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That was great. One would think I'd be used to the surprises by now. ^^ Wow, the newest hot spot this year seems to be Shadow Realm. Yep, all we need now are some cheap souveniers and loud brochures. And its Seth!-hugs- It's so cute how he's keeping his desires under control...especially with a horny Jo. But I think he and his hikari are already introduced? It's all well. Poor Ryou and poor Bakura; well, at least if he tries hard to rescue Ryou, it'll be worth it in the end. Oh! and I see a reference to that (stupid) movie! Although I am unsure if Anubis was before or after Yami's time...Anyway, I am still waiting for the grand unveling of the villian (and the dazzling, riveting secret of Jessica's baby). Keep writing! But don't strain your hand too much, lol!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 04:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job. Poor Yami to have accidentally killed your wife and son while playing a game. I hope Seto wakes up soon and gets busy.
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Title: Exellent
Reviewed By: Taji Kanjinnamida On: September 26, 2005 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, I would have never guessed that the eye would go after Yuai. Great job on th OC's, they're not MarySue's! I do have to agree with you on your reply, a good author can make any pairing work.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 08:21 CDT
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Love this story. I hope Seto and Jou get together so Seto can start using his brain and get them all home including Ryou and Yuai.
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Title: Awwwwwwwww!
Reviewed By: Taji Kanjinnamida On: August 19, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never been a seto/Jou fan but righ after they were reunited I cried! I love you stories and the seen realy professioal. Great job i read them alll on the same day that i found this series. Yami/Yugi are my favoriter couple ever, and that is unusual because almost every other cuople i like is cannon but you did an excellant job portraying not cannon pairings. excelent thank u so much for writting this story!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 00:05 CDT
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I hope Kaiba can get enough rest and put his mind together enough to get them home. Poor Mokuba is so over whelmed. Great chapter.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 07:03 CDT
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I hope Kaiba can get enough rest and put his mind together enough to get them home. Poor Mokuba is so over whelmed. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 07:04 CDT
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*looks shifty* ah I've been on holiday and so missed the last chapter...I swear I used to be better at this whole reviewing thing! lol oh well at least I'm here now. You mean mean mean person Jo and Kaiba can't go back? but thats so sad! Aww its all so yummy and angsty I love it! My heart practically breaks for Mokie I mean no kid have to deal with that....oh well i;m sure it'll come right in the end.
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