| "A Changed Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] |
| Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] |
Reviewed By: juana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! another chappie!!! keep writing! I can't wait for them to meet Inu Yasha! keep it up!
|
Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 18:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow so good plz update*kinda speechless sry*
|
Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I really like this one. I was a bit worried when you had Koenma suddenly pop up with information about Kagome. I would like to know why she was off the radar for so long in the first place, and why they suddenly managed to find her. Secondly, I wouldn't mind if you threw Kurama into the mix, as he appears to need some of the same comforts as Hiei, but if you have to choose between the two of them, please pick Hiei. ... I loved the warming scene in the kitchen. Not exactly waffy, because it lacked the fuzzy part, but it was definitely warm and comforting. I really like where this is going and how you're handling the characters. Nothing is too OOC or anything, so thank you very much for that. I can't wait to see where you take this, and how you get the tantei through the well. If only one of them can go, I suggest Hiei. He has no mortal obligations (and I want the relationship there to develop). Please take your time with the character interactions between the tantei and the shard searchers, and don't botch it just to get the necessary scenes over with. Also, I don't think you mentioned them telling Kagome about the Reikai. Maybe you should go back and add that scene in. It would really help, because, as is, you have Kagome going from knowing there are demons around, to knowing the basics of Reikai and that Boton is Lady Death/a ferry girl. Please keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing more of this story in the future. ... Thank you, Kin-chan Pandun
|
Reviewed By: juana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! I really love your story! your style is fantastic and just wow! your grammar and the spelling is really good. I love your plot and the fact the you don't make the characters too OOC. I have really enjoyed this fanfic of yours. So keep up writing! i'll be checking! Ja Ne!
|
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
VERY VERY SOON PLease !
|
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that so cute. What will hei do next *S* please update soon.
|
Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 14:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
You. Are. Evil! How could you give us a cliffie like that?! I would like to see more soon please! I really loved this chapter, you're doing such a good job, I would like to say 'Go you!!!!'
|
Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!! You just had to stop there!?!?! OH PLEASE HURRY WITH ANOTHER CHAPTER!! I'm itching to see more Hiei/Kag. You're doing really good with that relationship! I think that your exploring a side of both of them and thier relationships that most people don't with the lonliness and sorrow etc. Your doing a wonderful job can't wait till the next chapter
|
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was odd why did it repeat an earilier message? Hmm... Any2way pleaseupdate very soon I want to se what happens next.
|
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH please update very soon I love this story.
|
Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 15:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, yes, very rare to see a threesome of Hiei/Kurama/Kagome...so I'd like to see that!
|
Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 15:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
It keeps getting better and better! Please, love the frequent updates, and about what Kagome sensed...she could sense Hiei's arua correct? Earlier in the chapter you said she THOUGHT she sensed it. Did she sense it? And who's paired with who?
|
Title: GJHJ
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT YOU SHOULD MAKE IT A KURAMA/KAGOME/HIEI PAIRING
|
Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, but *weeps* did you have to stop there?!?!? It\\\\\\\'s great, well written, so far you\\\\\\\'ve avoided all the anoying pit falls most authors fall into and rewrites of everything that\\\\\\\'s the same in most stories! I love Hiei...He\\\\\\\'s so Hiei! Can\\\\\\\'t wait till the next chapter. Hiei/Kag please *on knees begging* ^^;
|
Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 18:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
my......he...art....*dies and comes back to read* plz write more i really like your story it's so well formed and hiei's emotions are displayed and portrayed in a fashion that is utterly perfect and sooo awsomely unique......in other words hiei is hiei not hiei as the authoress sees it.... plz continue(HIEI/KAGS ............FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!) -yours truly ookami
|
| Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] |
