| "A Mother For Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Title: u r back yippie!!!
Reviewed By: gb On: November 21, 2005 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more babies!!!! =) ya know sessh maybe a tad bit ooc, but i like that he has become a big brother (no pun intened). this story is like a fine wine ijust keeps getting better the more i read it!
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Reviewed By: BankotsuAngels On: November 20, 2005 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter update soon!
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 23:54 CST
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that my dear was simply wonderful. thank you so much. the way that sess took the time to soothe and comfort sango was extremely well done. I can't wait for more. Of all of your fics
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: kimchan884 On: October 24, 2005 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story gets better and better with every chapter this is the best sess/kag/inu fic I have ever read. please update soon. every chapter has me on pins and needles waiting to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: gb On: October 10, 2005 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg it's so good to read from you again!!! i'm glad that you are back!!! =)... and i loved this chapter!! those poor brothers!! but yoiu know what good for kagome!!!! =).. i will wait here to read more please and thank you!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA got her back!!
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: September 26, 2005 12:38 CDT
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omg im laughing again! i know i really shouldnt be laughing but its hillarious! those poor guys! if kagome keeps up like that she really is gonna kill them....and possibly kouga while she's at it. the scents (and *cough* sounds) will eventually drive him nutz! roflmao!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0_0 .......... wow! Thank you for the lemon!!
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Reviewed By: CarrieFay (not signed in) On: September 25, 2005 13:49 CDT
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh man i love it! Great chapter! Very amusing! I cant wait for the next chapter cuz i have a feeling its gonna be as good as all the others! LoL Buh bye!
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: September 22, 2005 15:39 CDT
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no updates in a while. not rushin just your stories keep me goin.a.s.a.p. will you update this story that, love story with suki and shioris dad, and loving kagome?love ya! jakens in australia right now so he cant talk.bye and thanks for everything!!!
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Title: CarrieFay
Reviewed By: CarrieFay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! I just finished it tough, cuz i have scool so it took me a couple of days! After seeing all the SUPER-long chapters and then this last one i was like, "NOOOOO!" lol its really good. Cant wait till you update! I dont know if this site sends out messages on updates or not. If not could you email me at fay77_7@hotmail.com? That would be so great! Thanks so much buh bye!
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Title: Excellent ----- >>don't hate me for my review though, i'm trying to be constructive
Reviewed By: Angela On: September 14, 2005 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're fanfic is excellent, it was deep yet lightly glossed which is an extremely hard thing to find in fanfics, and i cant commend you on how well you keep the lengths of your chapters so readers don't lose interest and have time to breathe at the same time, although i have to say don't take this the wrong way, but the characters are a bit off, inuyasha would have bit Sessh's head off after he kissed kagome reasons or not...but maybe i'm the only one who see's that,1 small note though the use of repetition can get weary if not used apropriately, for example, how the characters fall asleep so often (and quickly) the use of kissing each other on foreheads (although it was very cute) and how inuyasha tone is always used "gruffly" just a couple of examples, i don't know if you or anyone noticed them, i'm probably too much of a perfectionist, so dont take my word into too much consideration, your story is amazingly presented well nonetheless, so do keep weaving to it, because from everyone else's reviews, we all busting for more...call it a human psychi thing or the fact that you're a really talented storyteller. so congrats on the great story, hope to see more soon! ~Angela~
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Reviewed By: Darth Plagueis On: September 10, 2005 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the fanfic, Sesshoumaru is my favorite character. please up date me on the story at Darkknight257@comcast.net thanks.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Be careful with the sugar!! Your chapters are too sweet!!^_^
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: September 09, 2005 15:59 CDT
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sorry i didnt write back sooner. i had the english assignment from hades.i love the stories!all hail to whisperingwolf! the refrigerator:grrrrr. speed:why is the frige "grrring"at me? the frige door opens. meatloaf:i have come for you speed. speed:OH MY GOLDFISH!i knew this day would come!its my dads mutated meatloaf!i told him it was mutated,but he called me a dumbass okie. jaken:thats because you are a dumbass okie. speed:excuse me whisperingwolf.*cries of pain and torture come from the slimy toad as he is beaten with mirokus staff* meatloaf:may i be of some assistence?*meatloaf helps me beat jaken to a pile of green play-doh* speed to meatloaf:im still not eating you meatloaf:i wouldn't want to be in your nasty mouth even if you payd me. spee:thats what orlando bloom said when i revealed my feelings to him orlando:and i ment it too1 spee:well at least johnny depp loves me johnny:actually no i dont,we're just friends speed:damn.oh well cant blame a gal for tryin'. love the stores. update A.S.A.P.! youre doing a great job!
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