| "A Mother For Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: VB On: September 10, 2009 14:30 CDT
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Ohhh Miroku just jinxed them. I really hope you do finish this fic one day soon.
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Reviewed By: Cindy in Pickering On: March 16, 2008 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent story and well written too. I hope you come back and finish it someday as it is a shame to see it end right here.
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Reviewed By: Taisho, Hana aka, Evil Neko On: January 11, 2008 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please come back inuyasha fan.com we miss you and you haven't up-dated in like for ever. and i want you to come back and make new stories.............. well as you can tell i now know where you hang out so i can review you until you either come back or you find me. ( sticks her tounge out) good luck. hpoe to see you soon back on inuyasha fan.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 09:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful story. I hope that you continue it one day.
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Reviewed By: Skylily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 21:04 CDT
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T_T it's too bad you're not finishing it, but thank you for writing till now. thank you so much!!!
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 14:16 CDT
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love it cant wait for an update. poor yasha with a tree in his foot, i know how much it hurts i almost had my foot taken off by a tree.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story!!!!
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Title: Nice Work
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic was very nicely done. Very good grammar for the most part and nice writing style. The only problem I had was that there didn't seem to be much in the way of good flow and storyline. It's very hard to keep track of whether one of the characters is in the present or in a memory, and then you kind of throw a lot of 'cliche' type themes in, like Shippou calling Kagome Mamma, and Sesshoumaru turning sappy around Rin to the point he's almost unrecognizable. However, if you put aside a lot of the OOC moments it is a very good read. Nice job.
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Title: A Mother for Rin
Reviewed By: ILoveInuYashasTheMost On: June 02, 2006 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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MORE!!MORE!!MORE!!! So far this is an excellent story. Can't wait for updates. Keep em coming.
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Title: Your back!!!
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 23:37 CDT
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I thought you had this story started. Oh well. Anyways I love this chapter. It really shows their father/daughter relationship. I can't wait to see more. Later.
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Reviewed By: What was my last username? Meh, It's Katie On: April 27, 2006 22:21 CDT
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OMFGS you're updating!!!!11one1 Will you be updating regularly again, or will it still be just once every so often?
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Reviewed By: not y_turtle speedy_turtle On: April 27, 2006 15:26 CDT
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clearing up my name!
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Reviewed By: y_turtle(not signed in) On: April 27, 2006 15:25 CDT
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i said "write" not start over!but hey as long as you continue im good!
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 15:52 CDT
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ok.i am a member now.i kmow you visted today..now write!i'll write with you.i only have one chapter up because i cant figure out how to make the story end up as the summary too.:*
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Reviewed By: raven of the dark On: April 12, 2006 04:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story... this is my all time favourite story... I hope you will continue... inu/kag/sess... it is really good how you actually made them get together... I was wondering if I could use the same pairings for my story... I haven't posted it yet, I will soon... must update and give me your reply... must update...
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