| "A Mother For Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: curly211 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 00:12 CDT
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This is a really cool story! I can't wait until you update and I love how there's some kind of twist in every chapter! ^^
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: curly211 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 00:08 CDT
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curly211@comcast.net
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not logged in) On: August 25, 2005 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As you've already heard... great story!!!! Love the lemons!!
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Title: I LOVE THIS
Reviewed By: darkwolvesoverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!! i love this pairng! Kag/Ses i love that pairing!! ^^
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: llxsunsetxll [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is getting really good. I would really like it if you send me an email saying that you update your story. here is my email address: email:llxsunsetxll@yahoo.com Thank you very much
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Title: GOOD WORK
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all of your chapters in this story. You surprise me beyond measure at your ability to rebound from your writer's block. I like the new twists that you have given into this story. With Kagura and Kagome now becoming friends as I hope that they will become close. It seems that also enrages Naraku. I really like this story alot. I wonder how the Kimigra incident will go over though with Sess wanting to make it all proper and Inuyasha just fuming beyond no end. His need to protect the females in his pack is rightfully justified. Please let me know when you update and place me on your list. I will email you with my information. Thanks for putting another BRIGHT HAPPY SMILE on my face. I look forward to another update on this story. Thank you so much.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi sorry) On: August 19, 2005 08:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've just read the last two installments in this story....somehow i missed the other one, damn mm.org! lol. ty for the email updates! anyway, wonderful chapters....a little short, but still very good. i've noticed that there were a few spots where you missed a word, but other than that i didn't notice any major problems. keep up the wonderful work! i look forward to the next update! :)
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Title: soon please
Reviewed By: habby On: August 09, 2005 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok now i think i can't wait much longer without crying when do, at least, think that you're going to have capter up? pleas make it soon because i'm starting to get tears in my eye.:'(
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Title: grate
Reviewed By: habby On: August 07, 2005 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please get a good -no grate- idea soon because you're killing. i bet you like that you're killing all your reader's. but its me who's in the most pain. i know that because when you said that you had writers block i almost cryed. and right when it was come to sasshomaru's part. but i really do hope you get a good idea and not just put something up to make us happy. i want you to be happy with what you wrote. happy with yourself. but don't take for ever. please have SOMTHING up by at least tomorrom. and don't worry if you don't get something up by then and it almost takes a month to get something up and all your readers have left you. at leaset know that i'll still be waiting. will bye and good luck =D
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Reviewed By: slivercat On: August 06, 2005 12:13 CDT
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Where's the writer's block?
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Reviewed By: dawnstar28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it, i just read the entire thing through, i can barely find anything wrong with it, but i cant think of what they are right now-_-'but it wasnt much, anywayz, keep up the great work, and i look forward to your next update!^__^ciao, dawn
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 02, 2005 16:28 CDT
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Great story so far, though Sess was a little off in this chapter. He would not say 'do not move one bit,' it would probably be just 'do not move.' Undoubtedly, Kagome would be like Sango in that she would not have a hymen. From everything that has happened to her, it would have broken ages ago. That's not to say it would not hurt or feel strange though. You also missed a couple words here and there, you might want to fix that. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
can i hold you to that? lol. here it was just getting rather good and you leave me hanging. lmao! meany! cant wait for the next chappie.
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Title: OK
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter too but it saddens me that Kagome cried. She has been through so much but now at least she can give herself time to heal. As I hope that the next chapter will be a good Sprite lemon/lime. I really want you to continue your writing. Thanks for making my weekend wonderful. I await your next update. Thanks again.
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Title: Relief
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is a good one. I am glad that Rin has awoken with Sess holding onto her. She needs to know that he still cares and loves her very much. I am also glad that Kagome has finally awoken. Thank goodness for Inuyasha and his way to make her drink her tea. I found that rather heartfelt and touching even though it was sealed with a kiss. I highly doubt that Inuyasha and Sess will be going anywhere without Kagome but I do think that Tsukina and her mate and her son can help Kagome to understand the whole courting issue. I hope that she is allowed to stay with them. Maybe they can help her with her Miko powers too since their son is a healer too. I can see great friendships and bonds being formed between all of them. I hope that she will keep both children with her for a time so that she can get to know Rin better too. It would be nice to see my mother daughter bonding in this story as well. I know how worried Kagome was about Shippou and I am relieved to see that he will be OK as so will she be too. Hopefully the worse is behind them. I await your next update. Thank you so much for this story too.
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