| "A Mother For Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 19:36 CDT
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This is doing really good. I can't wait for more. I wonder what the guys will think of her living there with the other young youkai. Update soon, late.
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: June 23, 2005 17:46 CDT
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wow! that was a sudden twist!! i like it!! i think kag/kimi wouldn't be a half bad pairing, but it would work best if Miroku died first, so as not to make it seem like she's rejecting him... but that seems to be the direction you're taking with the story anyways =^_^=
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: June 23, 2005 17:46 CDT
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wow! that was a sudden twist!! i like it!! i think kag/kimi wouldn't be a half bad pairing, but it would work best if Miroku died first, so as not to make it seem like she's rejecting him... but that seems to be the direction you're taking with the story anyways =^_^=
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Reviewed By: snowecat29 On: June 22, 2005 19:53 CDT
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Sounds like Sango has appendicitis or something. Is she gonna be alright? I don't think Miroku is the sharing type, so that youkai had best watch his step. It's good to see him jealous though. It's cool to see that you are taking the seldom-used path of both Sess and Inu taking Kagome as their mate. She is the perfect counterbalace for the both of them, though what about Sess's vassals and such? How will they react to both human and hanyou? Hope for some more drama soon.
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: June 20, 2005 21:10 CDT
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awwww, very long chapter!!! YAY!!!! i don't know what to think. it was so good, it was deep too. ^^
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: June 20, 2005 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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omg i havent laughed that hard in forever, the beginning back was just hilarious! my sides hurt! great chapter....nicely balanced between funny and mouth watering smut, but now im going through withdrawl...must have more.....yes yes! plz plz *gets down on knees* update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Black_widow(notsignedin) On: June 16, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE UPDATE AND SOON!! -Ja ne. -Blue
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Title: Ch 11
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 03:03 CDT
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wow, what a fantasy. I've never wanted to be Kagome more :blush: well anyway, I'm not sure how much more of this incredible sweetness I can take. is it time for more conflict? where is Naraku? I await your next chapter ^_^
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would do anything to switch places with Kagome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, I was Just woundering if or when theres going to be a lemon!! I just LOVE your lemons!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: usakogeisha On: June 09, 2005 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love this story the interaction between the three of them are wonderful very tastefull can not waite to read more
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: June 09, 2005 20:23 CDT
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KAAAAAAAAAAAWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love it! Can't get enough of it. Update again soon or I think I'll die from withdrawl! lol.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 18:48 CDT
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Ooh, a threesome. I do like this. I was thinking you were goin in this direction. Just all the interaction between them before the kiss hinted at it. Hope to see more soon, later.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: June 07, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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im laughing so hard im crying over here! omg, kags really did get the best of both of them didnt she! wonderful story....so sad about kags family....made me cry. :( keep up the wonderful work...i'm crossing my fingers that theres a lemon in the near future.....*wink wink hint hint* if you need some help with writing threesomes, drop me a line, id be happy to help. jessylang@sbcglobal.net anyway, great work...update again soooooooon pleaseeeeeeeee!
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 15:05 CDT
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I love it! It's a lot of fun and I like how you are shaping things. I look forward to more.
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