| "GunDread SEED- The Second Stage" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Im glad you are pairing Misty with someone she deserves to have a boyfriend she's a cool character in the series.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I finally made up my mind after reading the lemon scene between Kyo and Dita from this day on Im going to call you lemon master I dont care what you say but all of these lemon scenes are awesome keep writting.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah bring on the Kyo Dita lemon scene
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Title: Amazing lemon scene
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that lemon scene between Max and Barnette was amazing it turn me on sorry but I have to be honest with you anyway update soon and I am looking forward to see Kyo and Dita doing it.
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Title: Lemon scene
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great lemon scene keep it up
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Title: Lemon scene
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm if the girl made dinner for Kyo before the lemon scene begins Im gonna guess its Dita
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Title: Graet Chapter
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this chapter is very good I was just wondering are you going to have a fight scene between The I Freedom and the Endless Vendetta because that would be awesome anyway update soon and.............Im looking forward to upcoming lemon scenes(chuckle).
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Title: Lemon scene
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you sure this is your first time writting a lemon scene because you wrote it like a pro damn you're good and.......I have to......admit......that it turn me on(blush) anyway keep writting the story is getting good now.
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Title: Lemon scene
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story but I have one question who is going to be the girl in the lemon scene with Kyo I mean theres Dita Meia Jura Mai and Sara so whos going to be the girl Im my opinion I with Dita or Meia.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 07:45 CDT
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If you aren't going to listen to me then call me the next time there is a battle chapter.
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Title: I thought I explained GENESIS
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 03:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Here is the definition for GENESIS from the OFFICIAL site: Gamma Emission by Nuclear Explosion Stimulate Inducing System (GENESIS) A giant gamma-ray laser cannon which serves as ZAFT's ultimate weapon. GENESIS is powered by nuclear explosions, which are made possible by N-Jammer Canceler technology. The burst of gamma radiation created by the explosion is directed towards an external alignment mirror, then reflected back onto the weapon's main section, where a secondary mirror turns it into a coherent laser beam. The alignment mirror block, which lies in the beam's path, is reduced to radioactive scrap and must be replaced before the weapon can be fired again. The entire system is protected by Phase Shift Armor, and Mirage Colloid technology is used to conceal its presence until ZAFT is ready to unveil it. Despite its immense destructive power, GENESIS wasn't originally meant to be used as a weapon. Its original purpose was to deliver energy to the solar sails of interstellar spacecraft, making possible the exploration of other solar systems. When the system was redesigned for military use, it was adapted to emit gamma rays, a form of high-frequency electromagnetic radiation which can permeate solid matter and break down molecular structures. Although gamma rays themselves are invisible to the naked eye, the interplanetary gas which lies along GENESIS's firing path emits light as its atoms are excited by the intense radiation As you can see GENESIS is powered by nuclear EXPLOSIONS not nuclear reactors.
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Title: One more thing
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 17:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
One more thing, when will you update Zoiddread?
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Title: That isn't the reason
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually the reason why the Phase Shift Armor on GENESIS could withstand beam fire is because there was multiple layers of Phase Shift armor. The beam fire would penetrate the first, maybe second, layer of PS armor but would stop at the third. The reason the detonation of the Justice caused GENESIS to explod is because the explosion set off the nuclear weapons that were stored inside of GENESIS.
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Title: Fan Fan Delight!
Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD I love this story!excellent except later on,i had to figure some sentences out,as you apparently need sleep.You later mispell,space to early,or retype another sentence at points,but besides that...its great! P.S. Why must Kyo be so hot?My sister and GF both want to have him now(no,im not incest,im just stating my sister thinks hes hot).Heck,even IM attracted to his description,and envious of his cooking skills(and im not even gay! o.o; ) but really,i LOVE this story...PS,could you make(or one of your friends make character images on a server like photobucket for us to see what each character looks like.specifically the gundread exclusive characters,machies,and scenes.^^ Thank you!
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Title: Posted By: "Fablu"Lance
Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD I love this story!excellent except later on,i had to figure some sentences out,as you apparently need sleep.You later mispell,space to early,or retype another sentence at points,but besides that...its great! P.S. Why must Kyo be so hot?My sister and GF both want to have him now(no,im not incest,im just stating my sister thinks hes hot).Heck,even IM attracted to his description,and envious of his cooking skills(and im not even gay! o.o; ) but really,i LOVE this story...PS,could you make(or one of your friends make character images on a server like photobucket for us to see what each character looks like.specifically the gundread exclusive characters,machies,and scenes.^^ Thank you!
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