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| "GunDread SEED- The Second Stage" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 19:52 CST
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Keep writting Im looking forward to the make out scene between Kyo and Meia.
| Title: chapter 19
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I love this fan fic and since you made a make out scene between Kyo and Jura and Dita how about making a make out scene between Kyo and Meia.
| Title: Bad Tidings.
Reviewed By: Dreadman's Ghost Mk.2 On: November 30, 2006 12:42 CST
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Scratch that. They stoped me from tellin u thru pm.... Bad news mate. Ive been banned from this site. Dont know why, Dont know how, and dont know who. Want to warn you. Also, though it might be selfish, I want to ask you to find out why. Thx. Email me at kenmarshall@comcast.net Ill tell you more then. Stay safe, and dont tick off these "fair" admins. They will turn on us within a moments notice.
| Title: Bad Tidings.
Reviewed By: Dreadman's Ghost On: November 30, 2006 12:37 CST
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Ill pm u about it....i dont think it is "safe" to say it in a forum....
| Reviewed By: Jonathonlepoidevin On: October 29, 2006 06:14 CST
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awesome story, i just finished reading both, can't wait to see what the next chapter is going to be about, keep up the good work
| Title: Great stuff
Reviewed By: whizkid25 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 08:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey EternalFreedom, I recently read up on your work and it's really great. Although I notice some (or maybe most) of your chapters are similar to the actual anime, you still managed to add some extra spice. You have a good skill in journalism...I wonder if that's the something you might want to venture into. Anyway, as my comment title shows...great stuff. I hope to read more of your fantastic work. ^_^
| Title: Sorry bout the impatience..
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 20:32 CDT
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Sry if i was soundin like a rushin asshole in my last review :( Anywayz, tototally agree wit the love part, understand that love is definatly NOT about the sex, its about the feelings. But heres a good way,(in my opinion) to have it be : 1.Kyo has sex wit one of the girls, feels horrible afterwards, tells the other girls bout it. 2. Girls get angry and dont talk to kyo for a bit. 3. Kyo finds soem way to apologize to all the girls, they all fall for him again 4. Girls all agree that they all love kyo the same, and dont mind if he has relationships wit the others, since they no he returns their feelings. Remember, that was just a hint, so ya dont have to go by it :D ur fanfic, not mine
| Title: Rabbat
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 01:55 CDT
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Hey, rabbat had it comming..but utan? did utan have to die? who is gonan slobber pyro now? Also, bout Dita..... ... .... GOD PLZ I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please, please just have him get laid! please! end the tourture and get it over with!
| Reviewed By: Deathzealot [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmm.... I see that you are giving both the Harvesters and the Nirvana Mobile Suits. I can see something like say a Leo or Strike Dagger be the MP MS of the Harvesters. However the Nirvana has the Vangaurds and while your right they are not nearly as good say a MBF-M1 Astray or a ZAKU. Hmmmm... Anyways the way you described Parfet's idea is that is going to be a hyprid of a Orb MVF-M11C Murasame and Alliance GAT-04 Windam. I think you should have Kyo to help Parfet creat their new MS. Of course I am sure that the Dread pilots will not be happy about losing their fighters. But I agree in the age of Mobile Suits fighters like the Dreads and Mobile Armor like the Moebius are nothing but Clay Pigeons. Anyways I have been meaning to leave you a review since I started reading the first story but never got around to it. So now I have and I must say I have really enjoy both of these stories. Keep up the good work. Deathzealot (Anakin736@aol.com)
| Title: Yo. Me again
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 22:02 CDT
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Ya im asking other author's for advice, forums 2. As of yet, only you post =\ I noticed that alot more ppl visited in the prolouge than in chp 1 part 1, and 0 for chp 1 part 2, but thats udnerstandable, since i just put it in there 2day. Cio.
| Title: Changed it, plz rate again
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 19:42 CDT
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Yo, i changed it, and it is ALOT longer now :D so plz check it out!
| Title: Ahhhhh.....That clears up the age issue..buttt
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 16:07 CDT
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Hmm... Now that you say it, Kyo is a good 342 years older than misty,( due to his peaksis cacoon that you mentioned) but, physcically, he is STILL 19 years old going on 20. I thought he was 20 tho, because at the start of GunDread SEED- THe second stage, in most of the chapters you keep mentioning it being,"A year from they defeated the first harvister battleship", and then he was 19, so wouldnt that make him 20? And the misty case, see your reasoning, but make them be more like brother/sister that they both lost, instead of a pairing, cause that would support the misty side story you have, and would fit her character alot more, because in the series, she later looks at meia like a older sister, so maybe, we should look at kyo as a older brother I HAVE STARTED MY STARCRAFT/VANDREAD FANFIC!!! Want your advice on it, and no one has posted reviews, so if you could help me on there Enternal, please post and give me some tips :D
| Title: Trying to write my own Vandread Fanfic :D
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 22:53 CDT
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Heyo! I wanna be a writer in proffession, and thats how i started looking at fanfics(and printing them out, wasted my entire cartridge on this selection o_O), and i was wondering what anime i could use. I was gonna use starcraft, but there isnt a anime for it(but damnit there should be!), then was thinking of metal gear, and i want to know if that is a anime :D respond if u know tha answer!
| Title: Gundread STARCRAFT! xD
Reviewed By: Crossover teaser...for me pwease? On: July 07, 2006 19:28 CDT
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I know it sounds kinda wierd, but... why not, lets say... at that end battle episode, when all the human colonies come togather, have some of the 'Toss(protoss for all you non-starcraft playing HETHENS So please, for the sake of this fan, please have a starcraft crossover again! (p.s, is there a metal gear anime? cause i got the game,(one after earth invasion) and i didnt no bout this areana teams story. please respond! :D)
| Title: Bed mate ratings (my opinion)
Reviewed By: Dreadman On: July 07, 2006 19:21 CDT
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Ok, the following is my opinion of Kyo's....*cough*..."Bedmates"(ya know wat i mean...^_~)from 1 to 15 Dita-15:DIta is hot, we all know that, yet she hasnt made out with Kyo..why? Meia-14:14 cause she...slept with him in teaser Jura(aka Bombshell)-14: Already kissed,(twice), and made out with him. i think thats enough for jura at the moment dont you? Mei-15:Has only gone on a date with her. I wanna have a relationship! Sara-15: same as Mei, cept no date Misty(minor)-0....Do i really have to say why misty got a zero?
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