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| "GunDread SEED- The Second Stage" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 ] | Title: Reply
Reviewed By: EternalFreedom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 19:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Judging by the reaction I got, I guess not everyone's happy with this chapter. For that I do apologize. I guess the past four weeks being unable to update the main files has finally come back to bite me by the jugular! I'm sorry, I had so many ideas in my mind that if I didn't write them I'd probably go nuts! In fact, I've been having headaches for the past few days imaging the scenes…INCLUDING this one with Kyo and Meia. I had to take some serious rest before my coconut decided to sprout prematurely. To Panur: I can understand the reaction you had, but I did state that this is merely an experiment! I have no intention to blatantly announce my ideas, but like I said, I had to write them out so I can be better relaxed at writing. If it offends you this much I will take out this chapter and start from scratch. And why am I EVIL? You confused me with that statement. If I really was evil, I wouldn't be writing stuff like what Kyo and Meia were doing and getting them to do that scene I mentioned. Anyway, I appreciate the opinion and I do admit it was a little evil of me for making the teaser. It's okay to me if the review you put here says it, I don't mind good or bad comments that much, and yours has good grounds for them. Anyone else with comments?
| Title: my, but are you evil?
Reviewed By: Panur [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 19:02 CST
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yep....veeeeeeeeeeerry evil. I hate teasers! >_< I can't read tesers because they make me feel awful! I always have to read the endign of the book well before the beggining and know the plotline and ending of the movie before seeing it! You are *killing* me!
| Title: Can't wait for more!
Reviewed By: Chichiri MonkMask [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read your ZoidDread fic and liked it, so I decided to check this out and I have to say I really like it. I've seen both Vandread 1st & 2nd stage aswell as Gundam Seed and liked them both. (Although I havn't seen Destiny yet ,I've heard mixed reviews so havn't tried.)Like Panur I think a harem fic of 4 or more would be very complex ,but also like Panur I by NO MEANS wish to derail your plans. In fact I'm incredibly interested to see you do it. I like your style of writing and have no doubt you can do it. I'm eagerly awaiting more ,cya -.-
| Title: Thank you ^///^
Reviewed By: Panur [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 23:05 CST
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I can't believe I got an open comment like that, in the middle of the story (basks in glory) Just want to clarify I, by no menas, hope/think/want to interfer with your planned relationship... I rp with a friend and I think we have at leats two couples actively in a threesome and as happy as they can be... what I meant is that two, hell, even three girl couple would be ok... but engaging in a relationship with 7 or so of them would be really, really, REALLY complicated. Not only because of the ex, but because of the feelings involved as well. I'm sorry it took me so logn to revew this, I was having finals, which I ended today, and yes, making a comission for you would be a great pleasure for me. Only I must say: I have my limitations so depending on what you ask it might take me more or less time, or I'll have to aks you to change the request (by example, I'm real bad at mechas, so if you want one they're gonna have to be real simple), but I'll fill you more on this later. But yes, making a comission would be real fun, I'd like that. ps: luck with life and update soon!
| Title: Hello again
Reviewed By: Panur [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 10:33 CST
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I promise I'll stop reviewing after this oen, you must be bored to death with my reviews ^^; Firstly, i'd like to add that i am waiting for the sex parts as much as the male readers (pervy me) secondly, about the whole Kyo situation, I think there are two points to be considered: In one hand, woman are used to a *couple* sort of relationship, as in one one, right? But then again, ALL of them want Kyo. Is usual in harem fics to have them deciding to "share" the man, and usually the man likes it, but as a male friend of mines pointed out: it just wouldn't work: either the man ends up feeling somethign like a sex toy, or as *I* like to point out, the girls will eventually start feeling jealous of eachother and then things would go BAD. My POV as girl is that Kyo should choose oen girl and talk to the others about it. I think most of them, with the possible exemption of misty will be mature enough about the situation... or at leats I hope so ^^U Anyways, that's just my opinion, i certainly wouldn't stop reading it if it ended up indeed as an harem (heck, the real reason i staretd lookign for pics in mediaminer was to find porn after all, and as long as it has Duero/Parfet you can count on my undying loyality) As always, faithful reader, Panur ps: hope it helps you, promise i won't bomb you with reviews anymore, bye
| Title: Love you!
Reviewed By: Panur [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good God, but do I love you... The last part with Kyo and Duero's little talk was amazing! i especially like the twist you gave it by having Kyo explaining the whole sexual attraction as what it really means... Oh God, poor Duero....I can't wait to see what you do next! Oh, and how is Kyo supposed to be spelled? I've been wondering....
| Title: SUGOI!!
Reviewed By: Seed00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, I still like your fic. I'm still enjoying myself when Iread. I don't know about originality because I havenm't seen the series and I don't what was there and what you replaced but I still think It's cool. One thing I see as an exagerration though, It's the 50 funnels. I mean overwhelming power is one thing, god-like capalities is another, that's the only thing I found that was exagerrating, even IF Kyo is pexis-enhanced and son of the ultimate coordinator. (Dude, seriously, 50!, Kira manages 8, Rey has 8, Rau had 11 units, 43 beam gun nozzles total, ((info taken directly from www.mahq.net, mecha Providence gundam section)). Well, It's your idea, I'm just suggesting. We didn't see much of Meia or Misty, so bring them back at your convenience. Cool then, I salute you. Peace out
| Title: Great
Reviewed By: Sithums [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the fic thus far. I've never heard of VanDread before so I wouldn't know if your ripping alot or not but either way the story kept me hooked the entire time. Keep writing, hope to see the next chapter soon!
| Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Seed00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 08:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there ever was an action romance fanfic in which I enjoyed reading, this would be it. Out every universe in anime, that includes sci-fi and space battles, Vandread comes up. (Granted, I'm not stupid, there are better ones out there, I just like Vandread). I haven't seen Second stage, so I really can't make any bad comments. This alos goes to the other one: Gundread. Replacing Hibiki with Kyo makes it a lot more awesome. The kid's okay, but too much of a clod. So, we have harem kind of thing. One guy with many women, this'll get interesting. On another note, O can't help but notice how you keep modifying chapter 5. Make up your mind and go to thee next chapter, please. I'd like to see what happens before I have to move. Still, this story is awesome and don't let yourself be discouraged. Keep it up. Peace out.
| Title: good
Reviewed By: Tifa_Lockheart022 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry up and write another chapter already you left me on the edge of mt seat here and i would like to know whats going to happen next please. oh and the bath scene was quite hilarous if i might add.
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Jehuty Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 01:18 CDT
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this is getting more and more exciting. Keep it up!
| Title: 'BOUT TIME
Reviewed By: Dark_Hound [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 23:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey eternal its about time you updated and boy i think the wait was worth it. but hay i've got two more storys but if you dont want to read them thats ok there Called GunDread SEED white angel and My life
| Title: O.o
Reviewed By: Dark_Hound [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well EternalFreedom i have to admit you storys intrege me and keep up the work. why?? WHY?!?! DO I HAVE TO 'Please enter the letters written below: WHY!?
| Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Jehuty Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic and, don't take this the wrong way, a major improvement in grammer over the last one. I'm looking foward to the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Deathzealot [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 02:39 CDT
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This is great keep it up, I can't wait till the next chapter so hurry up with it please, also I think Misty should have been someone different like someone who nows who Kyo really is but too late now and yes I did have a round of laughter at the Bath Scene, I nearly woke my parents up... heh heh
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