| "GunDread SEED- The Second Stage" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: Spiky Roxy On: October 09, 2009 09:58 CDT
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WOO HOO!!! FINALLY! I was hoping for a death sentence for that idiotic and insane prime minister, but THAT prison works hehehehe I was rather disappointed to find the trial so.. insignificant... I wanted to read those useless pleas and smart-ass remark the prime minister will say during the trial, ah well this chap was GOOD!!! I really hope you'll finish the next chap soon, and also this story of course... I WANNA SEE A HAPPY ENDING!!!! ...thinking that Lacus and Kira are dead made me depressed again.... *cries*
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Reviewed By: Spiky_Roxy On: October 01, 2009 09:07 CDT
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It's been MONTHS since I last read this fic and it is still AWESOME as EVER! YOU MUST hurry and write the next chap... DAMN it was getting soooo goood!!!!! Please hurry
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Reviewed By: inuboy86 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2009 21:55 CDT
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Finally you are updating this story it's been too long I hope you continue to update.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cracks knuckles* Okay, now that I've read through this bad boy, time for some serious critiquing. First I liked the character development in this story. All of the characters change over the course of the story and it doesn't feel forced. Barnette was the most notable and well executed of the bunch IMO. Then I liked how the battles are portrayed. Though sometimes it gets a little predictable *cough*SuperDuperCombinerGunDread*cough* it can't be helped and it's not to say you did a good job leading the reader up to that point. You did a great job of mixing the two canons together and make them seamless with each other connecting all the dots together rather convincingly. However, Kyo has to be the biggest Gary Stu I have ever read. He is THE perfect man. He does everything perfectly and sometimes that drove me up the wall. On the other hand, to be fair you don't make things easy for him and to some degree you show that it takes a perfect man to accomplish what Kyo has done and will do. So I can't take you behind the woodshed on that. If anything, you make a fascinating use of a Gary Stu. And finally, this is more of a personal gripe, but I really find the author's notes within the chapter themselves to be very distracting. But that's just me. Also, in some of the later parts (notably in the Trials chapter) some of the narrative gets cutoff mindway and I wonder if you forgot to finish it or it got lost when you posted it up. I really think you need to find someone to help you edit them to fix some of the simple mistakes (like capitalizing names or using the right names). So that's my 2 cents. I like the story and I'm excited to see the final battle but more than anything I'm looking forward to more character development of the cast.
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Title: Finally.
Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course id give this 10/10 it deserves no less.Though personally that last part now has me thinking of ed-ni-kai from avatar.... Kyo and the admiral in a big open arena,Kyos first move him jerking back his arms causing a large amount of dust to sprial around him(like a powerup) and then him slamming his fist into the ground tsuanade style causing it to fissure on the poor admiral hes fighting.Seriously,he seems THAT angry.lol anyway,whate ever you do with the nexxt chapter,i look forward to seeing.Also,would you mind if i reposted this series on deviant art,giving you total credit for it?The main reason for this is cause ive noticed fanfictions on deviant art usually get fan art to join them^^ and trust me,ive seen some GOOD fanarts for certain storys...heh heh.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: shin akamichi On: November 05, 2008 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow,im happy it came so fast,i hpe to see more soon^^
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Title: NIce job and finally.
Reviewed By: Reishin Amara(shin akamichi) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i did love this,and already sent my only complaints using "email author" however,i just CANT wait for the next one.id rather thsi than the vandread-halo anyday!XD though i do intend to check that fiction out once im done with gundread seed.
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Title: My stories
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey what's up as always you are doing an amazing job writting this awesome stories I love all of them to this one to Zoidread and Naruto desserted island. I want to tell you that I have write a lot of Naruto stories at fanfiction.net I even wrote my Naru/Hina/Saku love triangle until chap 19 and I also written other Naruto stories so if you want to check them go to the address above under my profile see ya and keep writting.
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Title: HIYA!
Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only rated enjoyment an 8 because i was forced to wait so long to read this bit,plus the rest i already had memorized during the wait....besides that...FINALLY A NEW ADDITION!YAY!NOW IF ONLY WE CAN REACH THE END I CAN DIE A HAPPY BACHLEOR!
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter I love it update soon.
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Title: Impressed Highly but still needs more.
Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok,This fiction is godly in terms of many ways,lemons,Battles,Descriptions,ect.But Yoyu should find someone to make fanart too,so we can have visuals(good ones please>.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING you really are the lemon master that was the best lemon in the whole site I gave you a ten but in my own opinion I give you a one thousand very very very good simply amazing it was really the ultimate lemon scene I was so aroused damn I will sell my soul to the devil just to be in that situation update soon.
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Title: Ultimate Lemon
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES so you're finally bringing the ultimate lemon scene I can't wait please update soon by the way is Kyo going to be al right I mean he's going to have sex with FIVE WOMEN for crying out loud the poor guy wont have any energy left after that but hey I wish I was in that kind of situation too.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah another awesome lemon and are you planning to do a free for all between Kyo and his five girlfriends is it true then I dont want to miss it.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everyone all hail the lemon master Eternal Freedom amazing simple amzing the lemons scene are so amazing please update soon.
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