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Reviewed By: Xanith On: June 03, 2005 16:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
its very very very good
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Reviewed By: atlfinest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good you need do write a nother one it was like keep asking me to read so more write another and for i't your frist time writing a sex secen it was good it gave ever detail Love yaLL DEVINA
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Reviewed By: katt_jam On: June 03, 2005 10:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
sounds like it will be a good story, Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Lady X On: June 03, 2005 06:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
You should defintly keep this going
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Reviewed By: new fan On: June 03, 2005 04:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good. You should defintly keep this going. I would really like to see what happens.
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