| "Moving On" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 22:27 CDT
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Stupic mediaminer isn't telling us when stuff gets updated. Well, it was a good chapter. I'm amazed Inu wasn't mad that he got a knofe thrown at his head. i really hope they forgive each other.
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 16:22 CDT
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Hey this new chapter was great i hope you write another chapter real soon. well til the next review
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Reviewed By: dadslittleangel13 On: August 12, 2005 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was great i hope you hurry up with the next chp.
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 09:57 CDT
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that was sad.....please update!!
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Title: Really Good
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 05:02 CDT
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I like it alot. It's cute. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: baby blue On: August 11, 2005 16:08 CDT
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good again
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Title: slang
Reviewed By: Kerica On: August 11, 2005 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story and plot is really good, and I could only find one thing wrong. You continuesly put I am, or did not, or other wordings like that that sound nothing like what a 23 year old would say. It's fine when they're mad, or pretending to be mad at eachother, but in normal speach you should use didn't, or I'm more often. Just a suggestion. Luvvers~~~~Kerica~~~~
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Reviewed By: SesshomarusNekoHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol loved the story! i cant wait for the next chappie!! keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 13:04 CDT
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It was a really sweet chapter! There's an enviable relationship between Inu and Kags.Except that smirk, that InuYasha have... And I've got to mention that the scene with Sessy and Rin was funny:)
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Reviewed By: Midnight1213 On: August 10, 2005 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story! so update my sanity depends on it! .... yeah thats how great ur story is so keep up the great work and update soo pleeeeeeeeeeeeez -(realname....didnt feel like logging in) Midnight1212
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Reviewed By: baby blue On: August 09, 2005 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
good
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job, i really like your writing style... this story is getting really interesting... hope you update soon!!! please... lol
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 10:50 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your story please write more chapters real soon. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes thanks oh and my name is Nyah i am 15 and i spend most of my time on this website reading and reviewing lovely stories like yours please email me at krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com when you write another chapter
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Reviewed By: ameera4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 16:58 CDT
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bada bababa i'm lovin it
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