| "The Poison of Erised!" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: MysticAngelDust [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 05:37 CST
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*poke* I've been following this story for quite some time. Very well written and a very original story. Just thought I'd send a friendly *poke* to make sure youre still alive. ^^ Would hate to see this story unfinished.
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 14:14 CST
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Grrrr... why havnt you updated?!!!! this story is awsome you cant leave it like that!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: crazydontcoverit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, ive been following your story forever whats with the no updates???? It's driving me crazy come on now. Its a great, awesome story update before you kill me!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Teesha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is super kawaii! I can't believe you stopped it right there I mean I could kill you for it. But to business you just have to post the next part. For me :) I will be very happy. I just can't wait to find out what happens when Inubaka finds Fluffy and his dark side in love with Kagome. Ohhhh the suspense. You know for some reason this is wrong. But it feels so right!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 00:03 CDT
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Oh why do you not update?! I am begging you! I check every chance I get, and altough that may seem a bit obsessive... Well, it IS! However, this story has so many wonderful characteristics, minus the fact that you DO seem to go on about certain things, that's ok. Your story is indeed origional, fascinating, and so devilishly hentai. You must continue, destroy whatever curse has been put upon you that would not allow you to continue! Be it writters block or something else, it matters not just so long as it is destroyed and soon!
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Reviewed By: _Inukame On: September 27, 2005 04:11 CDT
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Yey!! You updated!!!!!! This was great, hope you update soooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 18:54 CDT
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you updated!!!!!!! cool! Awww that was so sweet of sess!!!! now kag knows, what next?!!! Will everyone know? Will secrets finally come out? You know I hate you for all the unanwsered questions! J/k!!!! lol but please, seriously, the suspense is KILLING me!! PLZ
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Title: The Poison Of Erised!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 14:51 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Shaku On: September 26, 2005 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely, wonderfully, EXCELLENT! I enjoy it so much!! Update more soon please
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is a good spot to leave another review. This story keeps getting better and better. It would seem that Sesshomaru's plan worked, but who was that other entity? Also, it would seem that Kagome finally realized who it is she is drawn to. I'm hoping she will be accepting of that, or at least have some sort of understanding. What she would really need to do, is to sit down and have a talk with Sesshomaru, at least find out why he though the potion was his only option.
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Reviewed By: Em On: September 26, 2005 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing chapter, absolutely brilliatn and well-written. I am quite jealous of your endeavors as I am an aspiring writer who can only hope to write half as well as you. I can't wait to see what unfolds next in this twisted love triange, sort of. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: lori On: September 19, 2005 20:42 CDT
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i luv it please post thanx!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death2 On: September 16, 2005 00:12 CDT
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H-HEY!!! Not a good place to leave a story! Not fair, not fair! Write more, please? Please? Please? Please? Please? It's going to be my birthday soon, the 28th of september, call it a birthday present and UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kinoko *not signed in* On: September 15, 2005 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this story a few days ago, maybe at a chapter or three a day, and I must say, you have me hooked! I think it's absolutely creative the way you change the views of the story, from third person, to a sort of second person point when you discribe the setting of the characters as if the setting (like a river or what not) had eyes to give account of the character's actions. It's brilliant work, keep it up, and I promise, I'll be back for more. Press on, - kinoko
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(2lazy2logn) On: September 15, 2005 10:26 CDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY, but youve got to update and start anwsering the questions! Please!So many questions and no anwsers! Please update soon, and thanks for the dedication, no one has ever done that:). Ill check every day! no pressure!...lol
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