| "The Poison of Erised!" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha. good chap. and np for helping you i just love this fic too much ta let you quit. og ya ad so so sooo sorry for not being on any more im so busy. ill be on tonight tho so dont worry. lol
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Reviewed By: twiddledee *notsigned* On: June 14, 2005 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am soooooo excited you started another fic. I love your writing style it is so intoxicating and addictive. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: A mm member On: June 13, 2005 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
theres only one chapter!? Nooo! More...must...write...mooorrreee! lol, i loved it! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: cute_kirara16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! what a great story you have here i hope you update asap please...sesshomaru's character is so perfect wow.
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Reviewed By: Knight2 On: June 13, 2005 12:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm, I don't know what to say yet. I'm wondering about pairings, though, Kag/Sess (I guess), Inu/? (I at least hope that Inuyasha won't die or anything.) Anyway, I'm waiting for next chapter.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Another great story on your part. What an awesome story line as well. At first i thought it would be about Inuyasha. You know, another one of those fics where he loses himself and attacks Kagome. But this...this is absolutely brilliant! i love it. Sesshomaru's charater is completely perfect. And i can't wait for the next chapter! Pllllllease update soon! Ten cookies for you and your great story!
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Title: Erised
Reviewed By: yamiko reidman On: June 12, 2005 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome writing! Your stories get better everytime. Although he wanted to be really careful not to hurt her, wouldn't drwing even the littlest of blood hurt. It would have to be at least the size of a paper cut and those really hurt.
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Title: wow,,,,,
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow keep up the good work i can't wate til' the next chapter update again soon please?
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