| "The Poison of Erised!" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Title: Yey!
Reviewed By: Inukame [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 11:15 CDT
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Yey you updated!! And a good chapter too. I'm sorry for your knee, hope it is better now. And I'm sorry for not reviewing last time. I was going to, but then one of friends called at me and I forgot all about it.*ashamed* But the main reason is YOUR STORY IS THE BEST!!!!
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Title: The Poison Of Erised!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 23:14 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Thirsty
Reviewed By: vermillion 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!! I am so glad you've decided to keep updating. As usual you've done a remarkable job. There are real gaps in the story, very fluid in its motion. And the plot itself is intriging enough to hold your attention and see it through to the end. Like a steak dinner date. I am impatiently awaiting further chaps. Though I have to say I am might parched. Got Lemonade? Hope your doing well. My best wishes for your speddy recovery.
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:02 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE! I MISS GETTING TO READ THIS STORY
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Reviewed By: koumorihana On: August 31, 2005 19:02 CDT
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Is Inuyasha going to get any nicer to Kagome? It just bothers me so much how you have him treating her. By the way, the story just keeps on getting more and more interesting. Thanks for posting so quickly.
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 12:45 CDT
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great story please start some anwsers soon though, plz! Is the secret going to come out now? Is she going to be permanent youkai? Please UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: vengeance_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story for a long time in my spare time but never had the time to comment/review. This story is by far the best fiction I have had the privelage of reading. The way you word even the simplest of actions is just fantastic, and the story is so creative and interesting. I can't wait to read more!!
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Title: The Poison Of Erised!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 19:11 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters
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Reviewed By: Skyhawks On: August 21, 2005 10:03 CDT
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Will Kagome get pregnant?
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Title: Goody
Reviewed By: vermillion 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fantastic story! I couldn't stop till the latest chap. Keep it up! You got a great imagination.
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Reviewed By: The Black Fox On: August 14, 2005 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! It was well written. Matter of fact is was one of the best that I have read. You hace to finish it.
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 12:18 CDT
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I also wanted to state one other thing. In the previous chapters, you mentioned in your notes about not posting here anymore because no one is reviewing. Just because you don't get a lot of reviews, doesn't mean people aren't reading. A lot of times, people have other things to do, and reviewing a chapter may take longer than they have time for. As for me, I don't review every single chapter. It gets repetative and redundant. I will, however, review what I've read up to a certain point when there's been something new added to the plot. But personally speaking, saying that you aren't going to post on a particular website anymore because of lack of reviews is a bit childish.
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the changes in Kagome are in part due to the potion Sesshomaru has given her, and part of their mating, that way she will match him. I personally think it's permenant. I also think the blue eyes was she herself showing through. I also think that she will be upset at first with Sesshomaru, not with the act itself, but the fact that he thought that was his only chance at being with her. But I think that once she talks to him about it, she will be accepting of the whole thing, since Sesshomaru did have good intentions. She also realizes that he is taking care of her, and caring for her, so that may soften the blow a bit. I think she does have some hidden feelings for him before all of this started, that's why the potion seems to be wearing off faster. It's also an unforseen side effect of the potion. I think, from what Miroku said, that the witch knew the side effects, but for one reason or another, did not mention them to Sesshomaru. I think it's a part of her trying to bring them together. As for her family, I think they will be very accepting of what happened. Her mother took Inuyasha in, so there's nothing to say that she wouldn't do the same for Sesshomaru, especially since he does treat Kagome in a much better manner than Inuyasha. Thinking of all the times Kagome has gone home because of something Inuyasha said or did, I think her mother will take that into consideration.
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 00:53 CDT
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I want another chapter... And now I demand twins!!! Well... maybe not demand... but you should've had a baby already so you owe us twins now! Keep it up and we'll be expecting triplets... Just kiddin', but maybe four...? I mean... Well if that was the case then poor Kagome! But... How about five?
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing your story is great. I want to know if Kagome is going to turn into a demon forever.
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