| "The Poison of Erised!" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Title: Virgo
Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing your story is great. I want to know if Kagome is going to turn into a demon forever.
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 18:17 CDT
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dont stop it there! please update! please update! ill be moving all week and wont be able to read! Grr lol..PLEASE! ps does she know anything now? i mean its like..too much suspense with all these questions! Please, please start anwsering them or..do something! lol
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Title: Good Story (as always)
Reviewed By: chair-chan On: August 10, 2005 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah! This story is great! I just read it. You posted (or edited) everything so quickly. Practically all of the chapters say August 8! I don't know how you could write so much in so little time (either that, or you just recently edited everything, in which case I'm going to sound very foolish). I hope you aren't neglecting a life for us poor readers. Well, just writing to tell you that you have another reader hooked. You're like a drug...heh heh...*looks around as crowd slowly backs away* 'Neeways, keep up the amazing chapters! :P -Rosie, aka chair-chan (don't ask how I got the name)
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Reviewed By: princessgranny On: August 09, 2005 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow your story is really interesting. Grl all these questions once one is answered another comes along. Weird please keep writing
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Title: Correction
Reviewed By: Cynbad146-again On: August 08, 2005 10:05 CDT
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Attracted to Sesshoumaru . . . .Sorry for the previous error.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: August 08, 2005 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's nice to see that you are considering continuing the story on MM and AFF. I just wanted to add that I too, am a reader. This story is good reading but a little OC for me. It is hard for me to imagine that InuYasha would not try harder for Kagome, even though he often sticks his foot in his mouth, or, that Kagome would so easily leave him without testing her feelings for him (they are so strong in the series). It is not hard for me to think that someone would be attractive to Sesshoumaru with his knowledge, power, and looks. However, I am always attracted to the InuYasha character because he comes across as having a passionate nature with a tremendous amount of heart (eventhough he screws up alot). These are just some thoughts that I have been reflecting on. I am enjoying this story with your different point of view. I will continue to check in to see where you take us. Cynbad146
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Title: The Poison Of Erised!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 21:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 20:16 CDT
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I love this story! Please update! i cant wait to see how kag will react! will she stay youkai this time? i hope so, if only to see the look of shock and envy on inu s face! lol And so there will be a Lady kagome of the western lands! lol Please update!
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama! (too lazy to log in...) On: August 05, 2005 14:12 CDT
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I love this story! it is so hard to find good kag/sess stories out there. I also like how youre making Inuyasha out to not be so horrible as some peoples. I dont like him at all, but its good to see he gets a break. I do hope you keep writing this, And I encourage you to consider posting to mm.org. I dont want to be rude, but I think it is somewhat childish to say since you havent got as many reviews as you would like that you wont update here anymore. Im sure there are more people than just me that would like to see the story continued here, as single spark is somewhat unreliable for me and it often wont let me find fics on it. So, please consider updating on mm.org, and keep writing!! I want to know what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama! (too lazy to log in...) On: August 05, 2005 14:12 CDT
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I love this story! it is so hard to find good kag/sess stories out there. I also like how youre making Inuyasha out to not be so horrible as some peoples. I dont like him at all, but its good to see he gets a break. I do hope you keep writing this, And I encourage you to consider posting to mm.org. I dont want to be rude, but I think it is somewhat childish to say since you havent got as many reviews as you would like that you wont update here anymore. Im sure there are more people than just me that would like to see the story continued here, as single spark is somewhat unreliable for me and it often wont let me find fics on it. So, please consider updating on mm.org, and keep writing!! I want to know what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: Nastda On: August 03, 2005 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNoOOOOOOOO! Don't stop posting, please! I really like this fic. And I want to see how you develop both S and K's relationship and Inuyasha's character. Like I said, PLEEAAASE! POST MORE!!!!!!!!
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Title: The Poison Of Erised!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 14:04 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update ASAP!!! loved the story!! its 1 of the best i read ^_^ great job on it!!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 05:50 CDT
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it was nother wonderful chapter. You write very well your words are very good at "painting" the picture out so you can actually see what is going on. Please keep it up... and soon would be great! LOL
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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keep up the good work
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