| "The Poison of Erised!" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 14:56 CDT
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cool story UPDATE PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 18:58 CDT
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I got two chapters! Yay! I liked them too, and you know what? I don't usually stay interested in a story as long as I have with this one. About 7000 words into it, I get bored. But then, most of those stories are annoying in that the authors are so horrible... and you are, therefor, not a horrible author. I suppose shutting up would be good right about now... heh heh.
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Reviewed By: koumorihana On: July 22, 2005 19:56 CDT
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I love your writting and stories, but why must you always put more questions up?! I always come up with my own, but the ones at the bottom are enough to drive me batty. Well, please keep on writing and update soon. Also, who does Kagome really love?- Inuyasha or Sesshomaru? I have to find out what happens!
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Title: The Poison Of Erised!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 16:25 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: twiddledee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know that this reviewer is still around and absolutly in love with how your story is going. The more questions the better! Makes me eager to get to future chapters and keeps me guessing ^__^ UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading this story, and wanted to get caught up before I reviewed. I'm really loving this story so far. It seems that Sesshomaru truly loves Kagome, even though he may not completely realize it. He knows he feels something, based on past encounters. But it also seems that he's not aware of the complete nature of the potion, or he would not have given it to Kagome. True, this started out as revenge, but it's not ending like that. I can't wait until his next encounter with Kagome, since she is now aware that the potion was used on her. I'm wondering if it will affect his call at all, or not since they are mated. I'm thinking that the witche's Youkai died because he resisted.
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Title: Great Chopter!
Reviewed By: Cresent Moon21 On: July 17, 2005 17:38 CDT
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Ugh, more questions...very good chpter and please update soon! i love yer story and i hope people give you more reviews in the future! Can't wait for the next chapter...hopefully Sess is in it...he he he...
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Reviewed By: inu luver 2004 not signed in On: July 17, 2005 15:10 CDT
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Don't you dare pull this story we are reading it... some of us are just slow at reviewing LOL. But as always you write wonderfully... but I am itching to know what is going to happen when Inu finds out... not to mention Kagome!!! DUN DUN DUUUNN!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 08:10 CDT
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I want a little baby... Baby would be good. Yup. hope ya make a baby for this story. Yup. Baby would be really good... Oh, and you could make kikyo die somehow... That'd be great. Yup. kikyo dying and a baby... Yup. I'm tired leave me alone! heh heh...
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Title: Great chpater!
Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! They're starting to figure it out!yay! update soon! it's an awesome story!
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 22:44 CDT
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love the story so far, update! plz lol it was so good i stayed up a bit late reading it lol
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Title: YEEEY!!!
Reviewed By: Inukame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEY! You updated. It was very, very good, and I hope you will update soon.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 (nli) On: July 10, 2005 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, update! can't wait 'til the next one. tell me there's a lemon 'a comin'!
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Reviewed By: Skyhawks On: July 08, 2005 03:41 CDT
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Will Kagome get pregnant?
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 08:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You could write another chapter you know... I mean, if it ever occured to you... (looks up innocently)I mean, this story isn't just a little... What word to use..? Bad, now is it?
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