| "The Evil in Men's Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems that things have settled for while in the group... now if they could figure out why they are all there... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: Finally!!!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 03:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh? A month since the last? WOW!! LOL Wonderful, wondering what else is Tsukikage is going to show all the protagonists! Nice and mysterious. Love this chapter!! And the castle is back, there is the memories, are we going to find out what happened there? Couldn't review on DA cause it's on maintenance mode!! Hmph... so should check later what's going down there and we can talk. But read about the manga and replied!! :) :) :) You made me wake up one of the best ways ever!!! :) :) :)
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Reviewed By: theknightcallsmyname [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying your story very much. You seem to have indepth knowledge of Japanese culture and Buddhism that gives the story depth and realism (well, as much realism as an anime/manga fanfic can have :) I love the bits here and there of Inuyasha and Kagome; it's just enough to satisfy the romantic in me but not too much to drown out the main plot. The only thing I find difficult about the story is that there are a lot of references to things that are out of my realm of understanding. It would be nice to know what some of the words mean or are referring to. Looking forward to the rest of the story!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 02:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good update... slowly progressing... can't wait for the reason behind why everyone is gathered together... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 15:36 CST
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shippo the 'wild child'... i like that someone made him apologize, yasha took it with maturity. happy we get the story and find out why everybody is gathered. maybe it will smooth a few ruffled feathers. . . i love the interactions. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, oh... Sesshomaru is quite pissed!! I can feel his youki too!LOL. Good, our protagonists are gathering together, only Jomei was left... with Yuki and his dreams... Nice that Shippou received a lesson -little- but a lesson by Tsukikage. Mmmm... Hatsou's memories reminds me of that other poem you once quoted... The castle,... the fire... don't know if it's related but it fits. Wondering what the Lady is going to tell them. Well, must wait to the next chapter and see how this continues. Great chapter, thank you for the update and for sharing it with us.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 14:09 CST
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nekomata - (n) mythical two-tailed monster cat - i looked it up for you in Jeffrey's Japanese/English Dictionary Server at: rut.org/cgi-bin/j-e/dict . . . the gangs all here and they're back together again! the dogs, the foxes, the humans, monks, miko, taijiya, kami, nekomata... let the games begin! *rubs hands together in a very mr. burns manner while crooning, "excellent..."* in eager anticipation. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 03:45 CST
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Update! Well, the tale ended and everybody is together again and going to meet at the same place where Jomei is. Hopefully, now we are going to know what is going on and why the Kamis are involved in this situation. Who is Jomei going to react to them? How Inuyasha and Sesshomarua are going to react? Interesting and full of suspense. Nice chapter and thank you for sharing with us!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... ok so now that everyone is gathered together... everything is still a mystery... there's one thing missing - the why?... the reason behind them gathering... and who is responsible... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... glad that inuyasha & kagome met up with shippo, miroku, kilala & sango... maybe some questions will be answered when all of them are together in a group... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 01:10 CST
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ah karma, fate, to chose or have no choice. to chose the path or to be lead... sesshoumaru chooses to make his own path... or does he really? in this little world you the author are kami. . . games... go, chess, backgammon, checkers(?) the pieces are all gathering, where are the players? and what exactly are they playing? . . . pondering what it all means, why are we here? what is our purpose? did you know that the answer is '42'? okay enough silliness. i love this story i just think i would understand it a whole bunch more if i took a hit of acid like i used to do when i was in the psychedelic 60's and 70's and watching beatle movies like 'magical mystery tour' and 'yellow submarine' or 'apocalypse now'... yeah, groovy man! far out! (yes, we really did say those things) ~ it was all an acid flashback, just disregard everything ~ ciao, ginny
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW... Finally... there are starting to gather in a same place and a bit is revealed. Not too much but a tiny bit. Loved the way you set the scene for each chapter, beautiful done. Would love to meet the "Lady"... Tsukikage now talks to Inuyasha too -and Kagome- poor Sango is kept out till now. Still a lot of misteries to unfold. Great chapter, love Teijo! Excellent work by the way! Thank you for the update and for sharing with us!.
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!!! Update!!! Sparks are crashing between Sesshomaru and Teijo... will they keep this "easy" talking or fight? Don't think they would, Teijo posture is more... defensive, like wanting to clear things out with his nephew. Although, might say, Sesshomaru is another story. Loved the images of Jomei's "dream" story, like he is reliving other soul story and the same time there is a quest? for him in it. Will his real role in this saga be unfold by the Kami? Well, it seems that the group is finally together are soon to join the others. And Tsukikage is with them too, will she join them? BTW loved the poem adaptation, truth be told is easy to see those fighter in a sort of dance or just doing the Kata moves like dancing. Beautiful images in this chapter, nice flowing in the narrative and the tension is building and building up. Excellent!! Thank you for the update and sharing this wonderful story with us!! :)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 05:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great updates... inuyasha & kagome finally met with the others... seems that sesshomaru & his uncle will fight... or will they... will inuyasha & kagome arrive in time to stop them... hope some of the mystery will lift soon... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Hanajima [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this fic is amazing! Just when I thought that creativity in Inuyasha fanfiction had died, here this was. Awesome job. I'm loving all of the Buddhist references.
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