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 Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 25, 2009 04:33 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Oo im up to date, and Inuyasha is finally within distance of Jomei?? Ooo he is screwed XD and hmm interesting about Teiji, im still pondering if hes a good guy or evil XD
 Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 26, 2008 20:15 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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As you see, I'm catching up!!! :D Why did you think that this chapter wasn't going to be good? I love it, it's setting things for the outcome. It's giving perspective of the issues to come. It's drawing them together with no ill in-between them. I like it, a LOT. So feel more than pleased with your work sister!!! :D LOOOVE it!!! THank you for this new update, you know I've been missing EIMH!! Thank you, again! :huggggg:
 Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 05, 2008 17:57 CDT
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I spent a good part of the day reading this story. I just couldn't stop! It is wonderful! I sure hope that you don't plan on killing off any of the original group. I tend to avoid authors who do that. This is so well written, though skipping around so quickly kinda has my head spinning. I think that all of your muses are having a hay day and I'm sure that Black will soon have her fun. You make everything so mysterious! Such suspense! It's killing me. I love it! I sure hope that we see more of your story soon because I'm going to be dying a slow death until the next chapter comes out. BTW, I love your original characters. ^_^ I sure hope Teiji is a good guy, that none of them are going to take sides with evil. This has been a great adventure, and such great description. I am dancing in my chair. [happy squee] This is going on my favorites list. ^_^ Snow
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2008 05:09 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... interesting that they are all there in one place but in different areas... seems that they will finally understand the reason all of them have gathered... update when you can... please and thank you...
 Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2008 13:17 CDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20March0 8/drama3rd.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
 Title: pewterwings
Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 30, 2008 22:54 CDT
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You are so well versed in Buddhism that an Shamabala Sun advertisement is displayed at the bottom of the page. But I love how you have managed to bring a new problem to the group while making it feel realistic. Namaste
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 19, 2008 06:42 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... another part of the mystery about to reveal itself?... what was that darkness they saw?... were inuyasha & kagome able to join the others in time?... what about the white light?... where did it take them?... update when you can... please and thank you...
 Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 17, 2008 23:46 CDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Your story has been nominated in the Best Drama category. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2008 03:29 CST
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tinyurl. com/3cu9bm ~just remove the spaces for the pretty music, tinyurl. com/3cepr6 ~actually anything from 'celtic woman - a new journey' is wonderful~ tinyurl. com/34mtgt ~. . . are they all going to have to fight the darkness? the new or considering the time period, the original 'light warriors' (see 'nuklear power 8-bit theater)? . . . i have to stop before i get too silly, i've been listening to celtic music (flogging molly, dropkick murphys and celtic woman) all night and i'm not myself right now @.@ . . . at least yasha and kagome got some peace and a little cuddle before the heavy stuff drops on their heads. ~ enjoy the pretty music. i enjoyed your chapter, ginny
 Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2008 05:08 CST
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oh, what can i say, i love the way your story evolves. I also love your little pieces of wisdom and your insight on the characters. Thank you for your work and dedication, and for the good moments spent reading it!
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2008 01:49 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nothing much has happened yet... seems like the calm before the storm kinda thing... wonder what will happen when they reach their destination... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
 Title: The plot thickens...
Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 10, 2008 13:22 CST
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I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying your story. I've followed this fiction from the beginning and have always been impressed by the quality of your writing. You've consistently kept the pacing and suspense throughout each chapter. The love and care that you take to make sure that each chapter is legible is appreciated by this mature reader. So let me just say thank you and looking forward to reading the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2008 16:43 CST
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all sentient all children of light unless they embrace the dark, corrupting their hearts with the evil, their whole being. . . beware the dark side of the force. . . YODA: "a jedi's strength flows from the force. but beware of the dark side! anger, fear, aggression - the dark side of the force are they. once you start down the dark path, forever will it dominate your destiny, consume you it will, as it did obi-wan's apprentice. ~ with all my love, ginny
 Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2008 16:37 CST
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So does this mean that Benzaiten is planning on making Jomei an instrument of change? I think I'v forgotten, but Jomei was sort of the ringleader of those monks, right? I'll have to go back and re-read some of your earlier chapters. You're doing a fantastic job of making me wonder at the possibilites of where this might be going. On the one hand, the amulet might explain the absence of youkai in the modern world, but on the other hand, it seems like IY, Sessh, and the kitsunes are gearing up for a war - with maybe Jomei on their side? Oh, and will he be able to convince his monk cohorts to aid, or will they hold on to the evil in their hearts? I can see there are so many different ways this could go, but then again, you could just do a big switcheroo "I fooled you", too. Well, I'll be waiting with baited breath to see what you're going to do. Oh, the little stories, legends & whatnots you pepper throughout are wonderful. I'm curious if you do most of your research online or if you have a great collection of books. Anyway, glad you updated.
 Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2008 15:20 CST
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I'm so glad you updated. "The Evil in Men's hearts" has become one of my very favorite fanfiction stories. I read this chapter slowly, the same way I take pleasure in a nice cup of tea, tasting each sip. Please keep updating!
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