| "The Evil in Men's Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 06:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have me on the edge... and turned into a tao's and zen's frog! LOL. Back to the chapter, everything is there and sthg. is going to happen. The testing... who is 'she' with so many regrets? I can imagine but not sure... Good to see that, although they still keep their animosity the brothers are growing up, maybe sthg that they must prove capable of to achieve as well as Sesshomaru's acceptance or tolerance of ningen... WOW. Too many things to think about... the testing is coming... I think. >.o Nice chapter! Thank you so much for the update!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... it seems that whatever or whoever it is - is drawing everyone to rinji or the same area... what for... what's the reason behind all of it... wonder when they'll all meet... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 11:05 CDT
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Wow, you've got kamis coming out of the woodwork! This last chapter gave me a little thrill chill down my spine. I keep looking over my shoulder when I read this, expecting to see some glowing entity with a beatific smile. Geez, I gotta quit drinking. Gotta say, you're inspiring my imagination. Great work.
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything is interweaving, the dreams and its protagonists… the different situations each of them is going through -by dreams or reality- is preparing them for the outcome meeting, and you are the weaver. The chapter is very deep with its meanings and innuendos, at the same time, it left -sort of- up to the protagonists to find the meaning in it. BTW, the lady fox is sort of calling each of our gang members to be part of what's developing… waiting to know more about her, is intriguing… who is or was she o who really is she… The first noble truth… they are living it, they are dreaming it… You have the ability to put us there as a ghost and sharing what they are going through. It's beautiful and complicated… thrilling and nurturing… It's getting better and better, really. Thank you so much! Mage
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... everything is getting complicated... i agree with you when kagome said that it was easier to know who was good & bad when they were still against naraku... now it just seems confusing... hope things will become clearer once everyone reaches their destination... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 17:58 CDT
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they're not leaving anyone out are they? a premonition or a warning perhaps? . . . i have been developing an intimate relationship with google concerning japanese deities. a real japanese theological education between this and demonlordlover's 'a sentinel mother'. . . wondering where the warrior monks cam from and is it okay that they were killed? jomei is going to need a maillot to the head if he doesn't fall asleep soon. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... what did kagome's dream mean... who was it calling to her... when will sang & miroku's group meet up with inuyasha & kagome's group... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Just started reading it at your journal...
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 01:07 CDT
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then there was a bit on my PC... your update at MM. Wow! What a night they are having! Must tell you that I'm learning a lot about swormandship styles and Japan's Kamis! Each time someting pops up I must go to google to know the meaning behind the Kami presence or whatever, not that I get a clue about it but it's very interesting. LOL. This story is like reading a 'thrill', clueless about what is going to happen but so trapped in its labyrinths that can't stop reading it. Thank you so much for the update!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 09:02 CDT
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Oooh, the plot thickens. Loved the chrysanthemum story. Very charming - maybe a sneaky little parallel about Sesshomaru's relationship with Rin? So curious about the youkai appearing to Kagome in dreamyland. I've always wondered what Sesshomaru eats since he doesn't like ningen food. Is there some sort of youkai pate out there? Really nice chapter & great story!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 20:10 CDT
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*see tapestry analogy in a previous review* . . . amazing! i love this ride, and yes it seems like a ride, the lulling sway and momentum of the vehicle, breathtaking scenery, interesting company! a wonderful fantasy tale artfully told (even the scary parts). . . i'm thinking i am going to run out out of pertinent and complimentary things to say about this story without sounding redundant before it's finished so don't be surprised when all you get from me is a review that only says:"good stuff!". . . everyone will go off into their own little dream adventure, learning their individual purpose, lessons, goals? . . . the way you present this tale intrigues and captivates. the reader wants, needs more. we are grateful that you update frequently so we don't have to hurt too long for our next fix. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, love the way you make me think things over, the way your story nutures us. The way you mix religion and hand human nature with mythology and fantasy, the usage of 'dreams' a form of communicating messages or premonitions of what could happen. Beautiful and sweet scene with Rin and Hatuzo (sp), nice story. Thank you very much!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like where you started and where you are going. i can't wait to see how you develop the relationships.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... things are still a bit confusing... everyone seems to have different agendas... who is really the bad guy here again... how will kagome be able to help... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... wonder what happens when everyone reaches Rinji... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The more I read this, the more I like it. Intriguing plot, nice build up, and it stimulates us morons into trying to use our brain cells. There are plenty of fun fics out there, a slightly lessor number of "good" ones, an only a few that challenge the reader. I think yours is one of them. Keep up the good work. Oh, please don't take my Spelling & Grammar rating too hard. I know I butcher the punctuations from time to time, but it's obvious yours are only typos.
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