| "The Evil in Men's Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Title: We'll meet at Rinji...
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 16:58 CDT
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It seems like they are going to encounter at this Kami's place. Mmmm... fox everywhere, even Miroku dreamt one. So Jomei is been prepared in some way for this... intriguing. I was expecting Inuyasha to be taught a few 'regal' movements by his uncle, there is always time for get to know each other. Of course, Inuyasha will be reluntant but think that in the end he will get closer to Teijo. Would love to know what are you knitting on that mind of yours! Waiting for next chapter! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 13:47 CDT
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happy healthy reward and encouragement (bribe) to continue: chocolately goodness! ~#~ ::chocolate coma:: 12 oz silken tofu + 12 oz melted chocolate chips ^ whipped to a fluffy froth - refrigerate till cold ~ yummy! . . . i guess the family members won't become much closer right away but they aren't killing each other anymore. . . i'm assuming all will find some kind of enlightenment on their upcoming journey and i am intrigued as to what that will entail. ~a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 15:15 CDT
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one hopes the dreams/memories are for softening the heart and opening the mind. one would have to live as another for more than a few hours to truly understand they aren't much different as well as completely unique. . . sesshoumaru's attitude change concerning his brother is something that may take a bit longer in canon but i wouldn't be surprised when it does happen. . . too bad yasha and fluffy can't just tell the 'jomei' that they've been to 'hell' and 'land of the dead' and it is a place that there is no distinction between youkai or human. . . a wonderful story, keep it up. ~ thank you, ginny
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Title: Something is out there..
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 11:22 CDT
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Nice one. Adorable I/K relationship, they clearly grew up and their new status is showed bit by bit at each chap. Love it! Benzaiten is the Kami of the Ku...'s hand and Nyoko is a soul in the stone or the soul of the stone...? You got me there. ;) Jomei's dreams are turning into nightmares, nice touch to make him see his sister's ordeal through Mareo's eyes and the brutality of the 'good' guys, although don't think he would see it as brutality but punishment and part of his believes' 'logic', killing as redemption for those souls. Mmmm food for thought... Keep going!!! Great chap.!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm thrilled you update so often -not complaining just excited-, nice chapter it's like waiting to sthg to happen. So Jomei's father was not better than him... he is the product of his raising and culture, a very twisted one. Sadly that is not sthg. that only occured in the past. Fanatics are everywhere and on everyera. Good work, keep going! Love your poems!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 17:30 CDT
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are you eliminating the 'jomei' or are you going to teach him a lesson if he isn't too far gone? the last thing one wants is to make a martyr of a madman with twisted and dangerous teachings. . . maybe his uncle can give yasha some pointers on sword techniques. . . that was a pleasant and peaceful chapter except the horror of the his sister's death. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 12:32 CDT
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With each new chapter I am being drawn further and further into your story. As I read the last word for each chapter, 'my inner child' is screaming: No, that can't be all, I want to read more of this story NOW! But the much more patient adult side of my personality knows that if I wait quietly the author will present us with a well plotted and thoughtfully written chapter us to enjoy. So take your time (but hopefully not too long since you seem to be averaging one and sometimes two chapters a week) updating. Your excellently crafted chapters are worth waiting for.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 19:42 CDT
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the players converge... the hoshi, taijiya and youkai i assume are meeting up with the rest of the group? are they in the same hut that yash and kagome stayed? when you mentioned that the boys had gone to off the get the water i had worried about them meeting up with the 'jomei' character. it seems that you have written this 'sect' as a malignancy that quickly spreads and no youkai will be safe from them. i was worried... a master endeavours to elicit emotion from those who view their work, in this you have succeeded. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 18:36 CDT
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wow, an amazing story. the buddhist teaching swirling around the iy world and characters, the strange interpretation of the sect, the reactions of the players, the descriptions of the world, the scenery, the action, emotions etc eloquently executed... threads of different colors, textures woven into a rich and impressive tapestry by a master craftswoman. . . i shall be in eager anticipation of future installments ~ thank you, ginny
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice tale you're weaving here. All kinds of things going on. Now On to the next installment, but Update when ya can! ;)
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Title: One of the best
Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Possibly the most original and thought provoking story I have ever read on here. Very deep, and with what looks like a powerful message shaping up. Awesome work.
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Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was my favorite line: "Okay, Inari, we're taking care of him," he said to the Kami who loved foxes. That is such a subtle and perfect Inu-ism; it has a slightly modern expression, a facade of tough-guy-ism, and an absolutely Feudal sense of knowing when not to mess with the Gods. Loved it. I must say, from the perspective of a sword-swinging, Tibetan Buddhist student, raving IY fangirl, this fic just hits the mark in so many ways. I like the way you've woven in the very real entwining of Buddhist practice and martial arts training. More, please!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD!!!! I can't wait for more. Very unique, and interesting.
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Title: Enjoyable
Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 00:17 CDT
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Drats! I've read through all five chapters and now I have to wait until you update this story. I guess I'd better add you to my favorites list so I'll know when you've updated this fic.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story. You are a very good writer. I love your story. Can't wait to read more. Waiting patiently for next chapter. (trying too) Keep up the terrific work. And of course: please please please update soon.
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