| "The Evil in Men's Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 05:44 CDT
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Nice, really nice. Loved the tempo and the stories. She is finally there... what is Sesshomaru thinking now? The song and the castle... something is coming... how much time left to gather all the protagonist in one place? Nice chapter. Good job!!! Thank you very much!!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 03:40 CDT
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i spent the night watching/listening to traditional japanese music/dance on youtube, i think it got me in the mood to read this. . . we can set this to music with the shamisen and the biwa, drums, some costumes... it could be a fascinating kabuki play. ~ doumo arigato gosaimasu, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... finally the gang is complete again... what's up with the others in inuyasha's uncle's group... why did the foxes bring them there... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 20:59 CDT
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Ohhhhh!!! You are setting the stage... They are reunited!!! Trick, trick, you are a sneaky fox!! Let me hanging there with the story!!! Loved the song!! So, the foxes speak on your mind... and Sango has a barrier that doesn't allow her to hear the Tsukikage. Who did it? We've got a very pissed off Inuyasha. Maybe, finding his friends will allow him to calm a bit and talk things -sort of- more like, listen to others arguments, specially Kagome's and Miroku's. Good for Kagome too, with so many youkai surronding her, she is really uncomfortable. I'm excited, want to know what's coming on the next chapter.;) Oh, well, must wait!!! Thank you for the update and for sharing it with us!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems there's a lot of waiting going on... everyone will eventually meet at some point... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 00:01 CDT
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can you believe that i am out of words? i have been typing and deleting for the past hour. i wanted to mention the interactions, perceptions and the behavior of the players. i wanted to mention your descriptions and quiet observations, good stuff but i was going to try to be witty and relevant but my brain broke and the tape isn't sticking. =/ i will write a better review next time... (there is no 'try', only 'do'~ yoda, star wars, the empire strikes back) ~ always a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 23:12 CDT
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I just realized that I missed your last couple of updates. I started reading this chapter and went - "Huh?" Sorry, been a busy girl. Anyway, this is getting very interesting and I'm amazed at how this is coming together. It's like standing a few feet away from an incomplete puzzle, and every chapter places a few fascinating little pieces, but the total image is still hidden. The plot is engrossing and progressing nicely, yet you've held enough back to keep your reader very very curious. All I can say is - wow.
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 22:06 CDT
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Okay... my mind is racing with so many deities and Buddhist's Lords!! I'm wondering what you have in store for this Saicho guy... is he going to honour his name or is he the young version of the lord to become. Mmmm... what are you knitting? Nice, short but nice. Keep going! Thanks for the update!!!!
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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 08:51 CDT
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hey, splendid writing, i love it! Love the pieces of wisdom spread about too. So keep up the good work and please update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's 4 in the morning, have to go to bed... for 2 hours... just woke up and found your update... have to read it!!! Nice chapter!!! You are slipping some information... a bit... but it's there. Oh! my Tsukikage is there too!!! She is a spirit fox... so she is a white fox. Mmmm love all this foxy thing! So soon they are all going to gather together. It would make Inuyasha and Kagome feel a bit more comfortable. I think. But, still, too many questions to be answered. We'll see. Loved the chapter and loved how it's flowing!! You are a skillful and magnificent writer my friend!! Good job, keep going!!! And thank you for the update!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... at least everyone is coming close to meeting now... wonder what happens when they all meet... how will everything go... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 11:06 CDT
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shippo's turn? . . . i hope you don't mind but i recommended this story to the 'inuyasha fan guild'. i found it to be a good place to find links to interesting well written stories and this fic fit the criteria... a first step to a possible nomination and maybe even an award, best wishes ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... but still wondering why everyone is being drawn to the same place... and what their connections will be... what roles will they play... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Here too!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm switching sites looking for the update! LOL. Eager to know what's going on and something is coming... When are they going to meet? Who is Shippo going after? Kuko? The Lady Fox? Although I'm not a fan of Shippo, it's sweet that he finds himself looking for his kin, remembering his home, his parents. Like how you brought up the memory of smells something we share with youkai. Smells that feel like Deja-vus.... rambling again. Now it is like an open page, feel like it will take a chapter or a couple to find more answers, maybe not. I think that, as we are, they are at the edge of their nerves! Like told you before, loved it... and the poems, WOW. Nice chapter, keep going and thank you for the update.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 23:36 CDT
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the ripples? was that when kagome broke the jewel? then again the jomei was starting her cult well before the jewel was broken... like everyone is having night terrors, not pleasant dreams. . . (hide, i just had a thought!) if he was doing a deity a favor by killing youkai why did the deity create them in the first place, even mosquitoes have a purpose (damned if i know what it is but they have a purpose). i waited until i finished reading the other stories i had on alert, i saved the best for last. ~ ciao! ginny
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