| "What A Girl Needs" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 12:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa I love your story! I couldn't review the first nine chapters though because my computer was messed up, BUT I ALSO LOVED THEM! I think yor story is so well written and I just love the plot please post the next chapter asap! ONIIIGGGAIII! I must read more, oh and I loved the whole cliffy with Sesshmarou at the end lol! Lady Kagome
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Reviewed By: Amie On: October 29, 2005 00:37 EDT
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I have a complaint. A major complaint. Why is InuSaga beta-ing your already fine work when she should be busy writing her own damn self? ::chuckle:: Just kidding, but I do love her fics too. Very nice chap, with some very funny moments. Ah, there's my Miroku; good to see him up to some mischief. Thanks so much for writing - your efforts are very much appreciated!
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 14:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I love this story, Id have to agree its very romantic, though for some reason I got confused and thought that it was completed. I was a bit disapoited to see it wasnt, though I guess that was my fault. I really have liked this story so far, so much that I read it all up the tenth chapter in one sitting. Please update soon! I want to see how kagome gets back to the feudal era and what the HECK!!!! Is Sess going to do with THAT book!!! lol so please update!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: October 20, 2005 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Fantastico!!!!(Runs around with arms waving!) I thought it was a great chapter. I tried to review over at AFF, but it was giving me alot of grief. So, I am reviewing/commenting here. I have never seen InuYasha have so many revelations. It was a nice change. I always wanted him to finally "get it." I can not wait to see how he will handle the next meeting with Kagome. The emotional pressure is on and the angst pot is boiling!! You are doing such a fine job of writing. Do not stop-go, just keep on going! Thank you, Cynbad146
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Title: very nice
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 20:58 EDT
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Another compelling read =) I can't wait for InuYasha and Kagome to be reunited, they haave so much to talk about. It's going well!
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Reviewed By: eeviloverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 15:32 EDT
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BWAHAHAHAHAHA! I hate to say it, but that darned book is giving me far more humor than it was probably intended to. LOL I've been enjoying this story so far, including the reason behind why Hojo continued to [seemingly] clulessly chase after Kagome. Can't wait to see what happens when Kagome and Inuyasha finally sit down and talk...and about those scrolls! **snickers** Someone's been writing stuff down, I'll bet! It's the only reason I could think of, that Kagome's uncle would look at her so strangely, and her mother taped the packing boxes to within an inch of their lives. heehee
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Reviewed By: Ashra On: October 19, 2005 12:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!! i really, really dont mind the fact that you take your time to post a new chapter cuz i know theyre gonna be awesome!!!! theyre looong (just the way i like them) but theyre not boring at all!! this chapter was very exiting for me: Inuyasha already knows the true so we just have to wait how does he use that information; Kagome is in...a well deserved vacation...hahhaha... but most of all i LOVE that the characters seem to be IN character!!! well, maybe Fluffy can be a bit Oc sometimes but its not so bad, that end was the best, hahahhahahah very funny. really, I hope you keep going like this and Ill be waiting for your next gift..eh..chapter.. thanks for letting me read a so-well-writed story. ps: any recomendations to read while waitin for your next update?
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: October 19, 2005 09:39 EDT
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yay! i'm so happy you updated! great chapter and can't wait to see what happens.
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Title: roflmao!
Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: October 19, 2005 08:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
go figure sesshy would pick up the book, boy i bet he's just as confused as inu is since he cant read any of it. lmao! i look forward to the next chappie with inu and kagome. i also eagerly await the verbal battle between sesshy and kags...thats almost worth paying to see!
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Title: xbitternessx
Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 02:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, my name was at the end, i feel so special!! you better be reeeeeally happy that i was perfectly okay with re-reading the whole story just to make sure i remembered everything before reading chapter 10. lol, just kidding. i'm having some updating problems of my own with 'to hell.' as in i have no idea what the hell to write now!! but i love this story. it's very funny, but not all funny, and you have great characterization. awesome.
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Title: ALWAYS WORTH THE WAIT!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: October 19, 2005 01:04 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT!!!! I laughed so much -especially the part about Sessho and the book. OMG, hilarious!!! Poor Inu...Poor Kags! Sessho is gonna rip everybody a new butt hole, heh. GREAT CHAP! Can't wait for the next!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69(nsi) On: October 17, 2005 22:03 EDT
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please update soon
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Title: it's going beautifully
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 22:50 EDT
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I'm glad to hear you and your family are well and made it through Katrina. And I must say, this chapter was well worth the wait! Your action is moving forward beautifully and I honestly cannot wait to see what InuYasha does when Kagome doesn't return. You have characterized your Sesshoumaru, give excellent and believable justification for his characterization and are sticking to it. The way you've captured Kagome's sense of self-doubt is also very realistic and quite true to character. She believes in everyone else, but seems to have so much trouble believing in herself! I think you handled the reviving of the wolves well and I hope Ayame gets dragged into the story for a bit later. Kagome would probably like to see Kouga happy. All that said: you are more than welcome for the link, this story needs to get out there and be read! Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 01:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! Well, I like almost any story that's correct with spelling and grammar. They're kind of hard to find! But the storyline and characterization are great too! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: neko youkai On: September 14, 2005 07:56 EDT
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this story is amazing! i love the angsty misunderstandings and the fact that inuyasha and kagome have yet to fully realize their feelings for one another. the way you decided to include sesshomaru is genius. my only complaint: i need more! i will trade you chapters for cookies. (and my cookies are quite delicious)
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