| "What A Girl Needs" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 03:29 EST
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It's such a pleasure to have you back with us: I'm glad everything is working out for you =) Your characterization of Kouga was absolutely priceless... and having Sango step right in where Kagome left of had me snickering loud enough to invoke questions from my family about my sanity. I was also surprised and very pleased that your lemon wasn't all... rainbows and flowers and candy if you will xD everyone needs to start somewhere so where's the fun if there's no growth? Now we have Kagome's reaction to look forward to--heck, InuYasha's reaction to her reaction...well, should be fun times ALL around. Once again, I love your characterization and look forward to the twists coming to us in the future.
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Reviewed By: AngelineL [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 00:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was worth the wait! I love this fic. I find it to be a refreshing, enjoyable read that I can go back to time and time again. Spot on characterization and I love the interaction. Loved how you depicted Inuyasha's and Kagome's first time, rather true to life. One gets tired of the soft pwp scenes that are typical of this genre. Great work as always, awaiting the next chapter anxiously!
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Title: funny and different
Reviewed By: DeepSin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 22:08 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for the different and extra long chapter I enjoyed it greatly, and thanks for not making it prefect I enjoy realism. Good job, now fix it with Sango and Miroku!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: January 05, 2007 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow . . .what a work of art! It was most definitely worth the wait! The end experience seemed so . . . touching, emotional, and beautiful. It seemed one of the most realistic lemons that I have ever read. I think that you hit exactly what you were aiming for, according to your end note. I have not even touched on how you continued the Shippo fiasco explanation, the Sesshoumaru intent clarification, and the hilarious Miroku/Sango/and Kouga scene. Poor Miroku/dense Kouga! Ha!Ha! It was such a lovely surprise to see this chapter when I was checking for updates. Thank you ever so much for sharing. Your fan, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 19:42 EST
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Bravo!!!!!!!! Another job well done and I really can't wait for the next update^_~
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Reviewed By: Malice_Babe On: January 05, 2007 10:06 EST
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Awesome story, but as to the tastey lemon; did Kagome not orgasm because Inuyasha doesn't know that women can orgasm too or did they just forget in all their passion? Update soon for I can hardly wait for the next installment! ^_^
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Title: *lightheaded and dizzy*
Reviewed By: Stasy On: January 05, 2007 09:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This awesome chapter is definitely worth all waiting! Thank you!
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Title: Welcome back!
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 04:26 EST
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I've had this on my 'favs' list for a long time and I'm so glad you finally got moved in and could update! I can empathize with the craziness of having everything in boxes...as you know. Finally, Inuyasha gets to claim her...and poor Miroku gets his own version of the 'sit' command. Welcome back, my friend!
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 03:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay an update and the lemon! Nice job. I can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: frostyshake(nsi) On: January 05, 2007 02:34 EST
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You're back!! And it was a perfect lemon, for the couple. After all they are virgins and they do have to learn how to do things right, even if they do have to practice over and over and over....... and that bit with Sango and Kouga, priceless. I almost feel bad for Miroku, almost.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Cherrysinger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 21:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy! AWESOME! This story is great! I'm giving you a ten because I like it so much...although technically I should dock marks for a few spelling/grammar mistakes and some other ones as well like the Japanese, which I myself don't prefer on an English website (which is inevitable, really, cuz it's just my own opinion), but I'm too happy with this story to do that right now. It was great! PLEASE update soon! I was so excited when I saw how long ch 13 was but then nothing really happened. And I really want to see what Shippo looks like...
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 16:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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mmm! A really nice story! I like it that the chars are so little OC) This it a great work you've done here))
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: September 25, 2006 16:25 EDT
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Where are you Soutassister? I really miss your updates. Please come back soon. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 01:13 EDT
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I just discovered this fanfic yesterday (loving it!) and I just sat and read all of the chapters in one sitting. I'm still holding out hope of an update due to the fact that there was a 5 month break between updates before. I must mention that I love your writing style and that you keep the characters .. well.. in character.
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 09:30 EDT
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I agree with some of the people that have reviewed. I REALLY enjoyed the fic. I just found it and I hope that you can update soon. I put it in my favs just so that I'll know as soon as you do. Please remember that there are those of us out there that do appricate the time, energy, and thoughtfulness that goes into a good fic. Looking forward to an update.
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