| "What A Girl Needs" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Title: Good stuff
Reviewed By: Amie On: June 17, 2005 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic gets more and more enjoyable. I totally dig Sesshoumaru in your fic. Other than being more verbose than usual, I think you're staying fairly in character. Kagome is pretty good, too, but IMO Inuyasha is VERY well done. Miroku seems a bit subservient, especially since he got some last night! You'd think he'd be cheekier than ever! I like Shippo's POV, too, and cracked up when Sess upbraided him for clinging to the illusion of immaturity. I always wonder about that. I'm really looking forward to your next update. I won't hold you to the one week rule, since I'll take quality over quantity, and the quality of your writing is so high! :-D Merci beaucoup!
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: June 17, 2005 06:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! ::claps:: great chapter! ^_^ ....... uh... i know there was something more intelligent i wanted to say.. but.... ive gotten three hours of sleep in the last 38 hours. XD ... im fried! anyway, i loved it! go sesshou! ^_~ hes gettin an attitude! aight.. finally.. i shall be able to sleep.. Thank You-thankyouverymuch.
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 23:23 EDT
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aaaaahhhh, bravo, your plot is moving along beautifully. InuYasha's inability to communicate his thoughts is such a bummer isn't it? ^_^ Makes everything so much more fun. Though, I think what most intrigued me in this chapter was what Sesshoumaru said to Shippou about acting his age and taking his place in his family. Very interesting and I'm curious where you're going with it. A very enjoyable chapter and I eagerly awaint the next! ~angelica
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Title: UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 19:53 EDT
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This is one of THE best stories i've read so far. Please do not be like so many other authors that start & never finish. I read every chapter back to back & would have read 40 if it was completed! You're on my faves!
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Reviewed By: Akihanah On: June 16, 2005 03:42 EDT
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Well, I can see why Kagome would be so insecure. The last thing she would want is to figure out she pledged forever to someone who didn't feel the same way. Self preservation is a very strong instinct. And she has always had to deal with Kikyo being first, so it makes sense for her to be so insecure. Inuyasha really did botch that, didn't he? Though, he had her half naked...if only he hadn't said the thing about Sesshomaru...and if he hadn't made her a possesion and said he saw Kikyo last night....poor guy. People just kept hitting him too. Sango, then Sesshomaru..update soon, please!!!
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Title: swallowed in the sea
Reviewed By: Tailsarehot_06 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 18:42 EDT
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AHHHH!IM DYING!PLEASE please UPDATE!
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Title: Don't stop now!
Reviewed By: InuSaga [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. That last line, Kagome screaming at Sesshomaru that he and his brother are jerks had me rolling. Please, update soon. I swear, if I read one more great story that the author didn't finish . . .
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: June 05, 2005 00:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
great story! i hope you update again. it's a unique plot and i look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: jo On: June 01, 2005 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I just found ur story yesterday and I can't stop reading it. Nice writing u have...love the emotion struggle of Inuyasha and Kagome...not mentioning Sango and Miroku sidelines. Keep it up... don't stop writing k. Gambatte ne. They will mate don't they? Hope they do...
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Title: more
Reviewed By: tinky On: June 01, 2005 15:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep coming with the chapters!!!!
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Reviewed By: jo On: May 31, 2005 23:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I just found ur story yesterday and I can't stop reading it. Nice writing u have...love the emotion struggle of Inuyasha and Kagome...not mentioning Sango and Miroku sidelines. Haven finish all the posted chapters yet, will try not to read too fast..haha.. so I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter. Keep it up... don't stop writing k. Gambatte ne
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Reviewed By: Cookie15 On: May 28, 2005 01:33 EDT
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This chapter really took the whole story for a turn. I was wondering how you were going to continue after Kagome realized her idea was a silly one...and thank goodness she got ride of that slutty outfit. Sesshoumaru and Kagome training should be quite interesting
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Reviewed By: moonlit_shadow On: May 21, 2005 12:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am liking the story so far. i mostly am rewiewing because i know the answer to one of your questions. the reason sess transformed was because, as it showed in the 3 movie, he had seen what tessaiga could do.
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Title: PLease updata you can't stop now
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't stop now it is just getting really good o i hate it when authors do that but i guesss that is how you get reviews... anyways i love it the grammar and spelling perfect, like really one or two errors and the story line (plot) is so good at the being i didn't enjoy it that much because Kagome was giving up hope in the bond that her and Inuyasha had..*which made me upset* but the twist in this was Inuyasha brother Sessy.... taking Rin I though so to.... but in the end Kikyo must die and Kagome and Inuyasha become mates ^_^ please updata soon i have to now howw Inuyasha reacts to the training that Sessy givijng Kagome. From your favourite fan *~Kasha
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Title: moonlit_shadow7
Reviewed By: will tiler gusto On: May 18, 2005 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just wanna agree on the translation of `yokai' `demon' isn't appropriate
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