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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 23:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I was reading a post by InuSaga on her lj when she mentioned this story, so, of course I had to check it out and I'm sooooooo glad I did. I've truly enjoyed reading each and every chapter and I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings. I hope that an update is not far off because I will be patiently waiting for it! :) Excellent work, bravo!!!
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Title: More, please!
Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: February 09, 2006 22:11 EST
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I hope you continue this fic, Souta's Sis! I really enjoy it and I can't wait to find out what happens.
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Reviewed By: The Painted Lady On: January 06, 2006 16:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully done! A perfecr blen of fluff, angst, and laughs to make the perfect romance fic! Loved every syllable of it!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 18:02 EST
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Wow! Now that's a good story! I've been reading like mad to finish this these last two days, but in between screaming kids, a husband that likes to annoy, and the tv being on, it's taken me longer than usual to get through this.And now that I get here, what do I find? AAAGGHHH!! It's not finished! You're a cruel woman! Course, I shouldn't be talking since I've got a fic from a year ago that I STILL haven't finished and people have been screaming at me to finish, but, that's no excuse for you! :P Anyways, nuff, ramblin'. This is an awesome story. Great characters, great plot, great discription, terrific idea! I can't wait to see the next chap, so please don't make me and the rest of your fans wait TOO long!
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon (not signed in) On: December 09, 2005 14:35 EST
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OMG, I didn't realize you are the infamous WJ that I enjoy seeing reviews from on my stories! I just started reading this because it seemed like it might be good, and the writing style appeared above average, which is always welcome. Anyway, I'm not sure I can possibly tell you how much I love it! It's a great story, and I have to say this - you're meaner to poor Inuyasha than I am!!! LMAO! The story ranges from dramatic to amusing, and I enjoyed every moment of it. I can't wait to see another chapter! So I hope you're writing! *nudgenudge* This story is going right on my 'one of the biggest reasons I never get my own stories updated because I'm too busy harrassing them for updates' list. ^_~ Now I must be sure to check out your LJ when I get home...
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 17:36 EST
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I loved when SHippous was mentally dissing Inuyasha's acting skills. "Bwahahaha", really? I also liked when Sess was considering Kagome's excuse for being late, which, by accident, included the real reason she had to go. However, I have a couple of questions/comments. Aren't the sides of the well closer to butt height? If Kagome hits Inuyasha high enough or with enough force, they still fall in. Also, why didn't Kagome create a barrier when she and Inuyasha were at the bottom of the well, thus rendering them both invisible to Souta and Grandpa?
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Reviewed By: Kyou_kun [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 04:09 EST
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I really really love your story!!! It is written so well!!! It was so hilarious when the two guys were looking at the "books" Kagome gave Sango - i was almost crying of laughter during that scene. Ahh this story is so great! Its getting closer now to them admitting their love for eachother hehehe i cant wait for that to happen! Anyway, great chapter and keep up the good work
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Title: Checking, checking , checking....
Reviewed By: Amie - NSI On: December 06, 2005 03:14 EST
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Score! Great chapters. The boys are certainly happier. Good to see Kagome's training is paying off - almost as good as Tessaiga power-up. ^-^ As always, thanks for writing!
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Title: two chapters, what a treat =)
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 23:40 EST
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Here's to another two enjoyable chapters! I like the way you handled some very difficult, awkward situations. You are getting better at building up tension and remain as daring as ever without leaving the realm of good taste. I'm so glad to hear it's lemon season. I know my views would be seconded by many of your northern readers, we could use the heat! I hope your family is able to get everything pulled together enough to have as normal, traditional a Christmas celebration as is possible. Hoping we hear from you again soon!!
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Title: W0vv
Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 23:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The results are in and the Judge (me) gives it a perfect ten. I love this story soo much it is adorable, and angsty and exciting and other...more hentai-ish things of course, it's almost as good as Sesshomaru in nothing but his moko moko sama....O.o..ehh I probably shouldn't have said that out loud, bad me. Ne-who update soon pretty pretty please with InuYasha and a Cherry on top!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: ezaangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 21:00 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg girly now i know why you won the best inu/kags romance this story rocks i LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH. update soon gab
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Reviewed By: crystal singer On: December 05, 2005 17:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good, and if you have Midoriko Sama helping you , then you can't go wrong. Hurry with more soon. I voted!
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Title: Chap 12
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 05, 2005 17:09 EST
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That was just beyond funny!!! I loved fluffy's train of thought with the horses & great uncle. So cute & funny! The bottom of the well was another roar-fest. The way they were all commenting, LOLOLOL. I loved these last 2 chaps. Well done, just fab!!
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 05, 2005 16:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was just hilarious! I love your writing style. Kagome's mom is the shizznit, lol. I'm glad she smacked Kags upside the head with a lil' knowledge! I also got a kick out of InuYasha & Shippo's antics. And let's not for get the formidable Fluffy! Just wonderful writing!
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Reviewed By: tornadotrail On: December 05, 2005 16:12 EST
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Oh man that had to be the funniest chapter ever! I have people staring at me as if I'm insane when I burst out laughing. Poor Kagome, oh the humiliation of being caught by everyone, and in both sides of the well.Hahahahahaha
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