| "Love Yourself for Thyself" Reviews/Comments [ 306 ] |
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 19:14 CDT
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*sobs*this is soo sad i feel so sorry 4 Kagome!*crys*i wish i was in da story and was Kagomes like Best Frend from Hong Kong and came to visut and den wen i found out wat happened i wuld beat up dat whore(kikyo)!*sniffles*update please and i no u will let kagome live cuz if u dont ill hunt u down and hurt u and um if Kagome is dead den dere is no story....so betta keep her alive =) (p.s. im sorry dis is so long it never is usaually long so i guess ur story is special huh!!=])
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Reviewed By: Hanyou_swimmer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 16:40 CDT
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awesome chappy! I cant wait to see inuyasha's reaction to Kagome being in the hospital! poor Kagome. oh well, update soon, i hate cliffhangers, even if i use them frequently for my own stories, lol.
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Reviewed By: InuYoukai24 (Not Signed In) On: September 12, 2005 14:47 CDT
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Poor Kags! I hope she'll be fine. Well of course she will be you aren't evil...I hope...great chapter! Sooo short tho!!! *sad* please update soon! or if you cant, i cant wait til you update again!
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Reviewed By: Kagome-tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on the past two chapters, I can't wait to see where you are going with this. You are doing an excellent job as well, and keeping in mind that their still in Japan (or I'm half asleep still) Nonetheless, keep up the great writing and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Having Kagome go into a coma is a great twist, I did not see it coming. ~ Kagome-tsuki
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Title: "wow"
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover4life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"wow i cant wait until more come out this is a great story please keep going i want to know what happens next"
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Reviewed By: DragonTamer94 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more I'd like to know if kagome will be alright.
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Title: Irritation...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 20:03 CDT
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Ugh...Kagome's personality makes me want to beat the shit outta her! Sometimes you just have to make your presence felt. Now she's in a damn coma...grrr. (Only Kags could lapse into a coma from being pushed, heh) Anyhoo, InuYasha better come to the damn rescue!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 18:47 CDT
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Hey i loved your new chapter i hope you update real soon your story is great it is a very very wonderful story keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 17:11 CDT
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KIKYO IS A FUKING,SKANKY ASS,SLUT,WHORE,PROCETUTE WITH NO LIFE *clears throat* n-e way update please!=]
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 17:11 CDT
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There's a reason to put her in a coma? I hope so, cuz that isn't exactly pleasant. She must have hit her head pretty hard. Man, what a way to end the day, 33 problems on algebra in geometry class, yelling at yourn crush from the sidewalk, getting paper balls thrown at you, then getting shoved into concrete and going into a coma. This is just not Kagome's day, is it? Please tell us what's gonna happen soon.
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 22:28 CDT
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I like this story...It's cool, you made the setup diff from the other stories...your doing a okay job...just put a bit more detail into it...a bit more umph...whatever that is...lol...update soon...luvs Ty
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Yasha tryin to get on her good side thats good but after waht he said i think he need'z to do a little more for her to forgive him...but thats just me talkin :P and poor kagome has P.E but why did u make her hate it? P.E was and still is one of my fav class, just think u can make them play vollyball and she serve(sp) tha ball and hit kikyo in tha face!!(trust me that hurts alot to if tha person can serve) Tha would be funny, but its ur stroy so i dont want to get on ur bad side so it can be suggestion ,Well i hope u update soon cant wait for tha next chapter i will be waitin by my computer!!!
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Reviewed By: Hanyou_swimmer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! i think that this is a very important topic and I'm glad someone had the guts to write a fanfic about it. I actually cried for Kagome when I first read the story, its that amazing, update soon!
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Reviewed By: katie... On: September 08, 2005 21:27 CDT
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woo! great chappieness.. cant write a lot cuz im not supposed to be on right now... but anyways update soon please!
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Title: Love Yourself for Thyself
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 18:37 CDT
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*Loves it*
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