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| "Red Shaman" Reviews/Comments [ 260 ] | | Pages (18): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 › » ] | Reviewed By: red-queen On: December 02, 2005 10:24 CST
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YOU GOTTA FIGHT! FOR YOUR RIGHT! TO -- nah, i'm not even gonna go there. telepathy and telekinesis run along the same pathways in the brain? where have i read something like that before? ;) teasing, teasing. so brad's gonna go to schuldig with a leash on and nothing else, and ostentatiously surrender the end of the leash to him, right? hey, as long as he's listening to advice from star...what, no? brad's just not like that? well, he hasn't gotten very far being himself, now, has he? :D as the bf would say, i'm In A Mood. c'mon brad! go for it, white boy!!! love, redqueen
| Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 23:02 CST
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Simply beautiful. And here I thought I'd never have any sympathy for Brad Crawford, obsessive control freak that he is. It's certainly nice to be proven wrong. Lovely work as ever!
| Reviewed By: mm-c On: December 01, 2005 21:42 CST
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one of these days i will beat that darn KD! Anyway not usually a big Brad fan, but even I pity him. Outside looking in and all that
| Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 21:34 CST
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Think I said this, but it's beautiful. I think the little teeny change makes a big difference, too. I love your writing, Phoenix, and I can't wait to buy your book! And I'll send Schu in a few minutes. *Huggles!*
| Reviewed By: red queen On: November 29, 2005 16:36 CST
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i liked this chapter a lot, although aya seems to have suddenly gotten 100x mellower than he has been this whole story. is that just because of admitting his love for yohji? maybe i missed something...anyway it's fun to see them interacting as a couple. and i loved that star showed up with ken on a leash. of all the characters in weiss, it seems that ken most belongs on a leash. in fact, there was some kind of fanart contest to that effect, where gluhen aya had to have ken on a leash...getting sidetracked. poor, poor brad n' schu. and what about skye and sunny? all these people, sadly not getting it on before a big schu-killin' mission. er...he's not really going to die, right? RIGHT?? ah, well...half the characters in the story are dead, so i guess that's not such a big deal. love, redqueen
| Title: good out
Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 08:40 CST
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I'm sorry that your lemon didn't work out, but I LOVE the way you got around it! This is another great chapter, it's nice to have a few quiet moments thrown in and to see Ran & Yohji interacting. It's also refreshing to to see that it's not all sunshine and roses just because they got past the initial hurdle of admitting their feelings! As always, I'm anxious for more!
| Reviewed By: mm-chan On: November 29, 2005 06:38 CST
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okay as caught up as i was by everything in the chapter one thing stood out.....ken on a leash!?!? you know i'm not going to shoot you...blah blah blah look at me being supportive...you know that one day you have to write one for me right?....oh yeah what's with the posting after i went to sleep???....be that way...i'm only going to post when you're at work...
| Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ROFLMAO!!!! OMG, I love you, Phoenix! Don't worry, I'll protect you from the chibi, it's the least I can do, what a great chapter. Oh, I love Star, I love her, and I love you. *GLOMP*
| Title: u cheated....
Reviewed By: mm-c On: November 26, 2005 20:26 CST
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...but i forgive you only bc i know it's coming and poor Omi and his trust issues....
| Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 20:18 CST
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It's so...short. *pout* But good! Makes sense that Omi would fight it, he's not big on trust anyway. Well done, you have carefully laid an excellent and enjoyable foundation.
| Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 19:32 CST
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Oooh! I can't wait to see Nagi, Omi, and Ghost in action with their new powers! Looking forward to the next exciting installment! Love it, as always.
| Title: nag, nag, nag
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 19:08 CST
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So I'm wandering the kitchen, hoping foolishly for something I can eat without using my mouth (yeah, you know how that went, right?) and the munchkin's cartoon suddenly ends up in Valhalla. Which reminded me to nag you--need more!!!! Now, please!
| Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 17:16 CST
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so, i've finally red the story that everyone's talking about. and it's really fascinating, the whole mix of magick and mythologies. and threesomes! woohoo! there's a lot more heterosexuality in this than in most of the fanfics i read, but it works because the female characters are so strong, and not simpering little figures of wretched fangirlness. are all the members of red shaman OC's? i'm figuring that they are, and that their personalities have been fleshed out very well by you. and the farf! the superhuman, superpowered farf!!! oooo, i love it! even before he regained his 'jeirn' powers he was really spifftastic. i love 'im so... i do have one minor thing, which i probably shouldn't mention, since you apparently have an editor who would have pointed this out to you -- sometimes you have a complete sentence, followed by a sentence fragment, where a compound sentence would flow better. it just makes the reading a little choppy. but you don't do it all that often. oh, one other thing -- dang it, you made me cry with that last chapter! the RedQueen does not cry! ever! okay, so that's an enormous lie. but still! anyway, i'm glad you update so frequently as i'm looking forward to seeing what will happen to the schu-beast. i'm really enjoying it! it's good work, this fic! love, redqueen
| Title: not a happy camper...
Reviewed By: mm-c On: November 21, 2005 23:08 CST
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...and you know why!...good chapter though, but depressing
| Title: Blythe
Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 13:52 CST
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OK, so I'm a little depressed and the latest chapter made me cry, not an easy feat, I assure you. Very moving, always anxious to read more!
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