| "Red Shaman" Reviews/Comments [ 260 ] |
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Reviewed By: mm--chan On: December 20, 2005 23:00 CST
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i know this is your review DV but KD it doesn't count unless i have computer access whenever i want! that being said (sorry dv couldnt resist)...i was a bit dismayed by the lack of yohji in this chapter but that's okay *sniff* next chapter for sure right right? okay so i know im not the only person to pick up on this..but aya's a sensitive or is he actually a latent talent? and dontcha know that yohji's the one who's supposed to be special?
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 22:01 CST
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Oh, Phoenix! Your mind is amazing. I don't know how you do it, but I hope you don't stop. I'm very excited to see what happens at the party. And, was that a hint to Aya being somehow sensitive or attune to powers? Interesting... Nicely done, darling. I love it!
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Title: beat ya, chibi
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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And I read it, too. Beautiful, Phoenix, I love that you've got the innocent grown-ups mixed in too, not only children can be helpless in the face of evil. I love, love, love, the friendship between Schu and Skye, even the teeny bit you show here. I wonder why Aya was the one who reacted to the note. And I want MORE!!!!!!
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Title: i'm a heel
Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 22:39 CST
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I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner! I love the visuals in this chapter. You're so descriptive that I have a beautiful mental picture of how everyone looks in their party clothes in the past two chapters. As always, I want...more, more, more!
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: December 17, 2005 00:30 CST
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okay i have no idea what was the last chapter i reviewed and so....um they were all great except too short?
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 18:20 CST
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This is just too good!! *screams in frustration* I can't stand it, I can't stand it!! Please, please, can we have a long chapter and get stuff done, it's killing me, I HAVE to read this! I SWEAR if I don't get some satisfaction I'm gonna end all my fics right now with a huge asteroid striking the earth!!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 23:21 CST
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Absolutely lovely as always. The descriptions are so vivid that I feel like I'm in the room! Bonus points for use of "Killer Queen"! So looking forward to the party!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 23:20 CST
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Gee. Poor Brad, trying not to leer at Schu. Idiot. Schu loves being leered at! Wonderful as always, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: red queen On: December 09, 2005 00:02 CST
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lurvely! *dreamy sigh* i love star...such a badass babe...but i'm jealous that she gets to boink farfarello on a regular basis. ken too, actually. but she's so coool! she needs her own comic book. great chapter, as usual; i didn't mind the jumping around. your characters are so much fun, OC's and series characters both. i just have one little nitpick-- "He had been a detective before joining Weiss so he had quickly surmised that he hadn't been gone all that long." er...why would one have to be a detective to figure that out? was that meant facetiously? and why am i the only one that ever nitpicks or points stuff out? i feel like the wicked witch of the southeast... --love, redqueen
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Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 00:26 CST
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Oh how well I know the scary implementation of a Southern Drawl... Backing away slowly really is the best and only defense. And consequently, I so need a shirt like that. One that I could make menacing reference to at work most preferably. In any case, lovely work as ever. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 21:30 CST
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Have I told you lately how much I love you? And this story? And your characters? And your sense of humor (mostly because it's my sense of humor)? Beyond compare, as usual! Thanks for making me smile! By the way, love the shirt!
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Reviewed By: KD not signed in On: December 07, 2005 21:20 CST
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...want...more. ...want...more... Gah, this is torture, waiting for you to update! If I could, I'd just refuse to read until it was finished, but I just can't not stampede to read as soon as I know something new is up!
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Reviewed By: mm-c On: December 04, 2005 15:56 CST
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i do believe you've got the deviousness of tatsumi and the enthusiasm of watari to a T
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 14:04 CST
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Thank you! I love how devious thosy boys are! Blaze really should know to be more specific! I'm so looking forward to the mission! Perfect, as usual!
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Reviewed By: KD nsi On: December 04, 2005 13:59 CST
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Okay, I am going to get that show/manga/whatever. Phoenix, not only is this story delightful, you're showing me a whole new world. Love you! And love sneaky Tatsumi *wants to jump him too, but is afraid of Blaze* *also is really sick of spam codes* *hee hee, though attempt three produced "VEXY"*
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