| "The Offering" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: sweetness427 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter, thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Jupiter_a [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Please continue with it. I noticed that it has been a while since you last updated it, are you going to write more? I really do hope that you will continue with this! It is your story, write what you want. As long as you enjoy it thats all that really matters right!
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 21:49 EDT
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Are you going to continue this? I am really enjoying it so far, I haven't read a story with quite this premise yet. You have a few spelling mistakes, but ptherwise it is quite good! please continue it soon!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 20:14 EDT
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ahh!!!!!!!!! i read it for the millionth time and im still in love with it please update soon! i love it! i can't stop saying i loved it!
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Reviewed By: the evil fluffy muffin queen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 18:54 EDT
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I really like this fanfic, you have great talent and each chapter is filled with hundreds of genres, great job! i think a rape sceene would add to the drama, especially if it was kagome, seeing as the story is mostly told in her point of view. I can't wait for your next chapter, and even though it might be a while, i am fully prepared to wait!
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Reviewed By: DarkFire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 22:14 EDT
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You have to update. Great story. DF
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Reviewed By: redroseonblacksatin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 02:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just post it but warn everyone in your AN at the begining of your chapter. If they continue to read knowing it will upset them then its there own damn fault, and if they flame you for it then there idiots and can therfor be ignored.
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Title: Hmmmm
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 02:08 EST
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For whatever matters...I think she's stupid and annoying also. But...she's not flaming, being rude, or anything so there's nothing we can do about people who choose to be annoying...in the worst possible way: nice. lol >_> Sooo...when's your next chapter coming? Cause...I'm excited to see what happens next after this whole mermaid cannibal-esque deal.
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Reviewed By: lil_angel0999 On: February 21, 2008 00:52 EST
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update!!! i like the story and you should hurry up and update
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Reviewed By: nyuu_nyuu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 11:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
do wath you want
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Title: go for it!
Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(nsi) On: January 23, 2008 15:13 EST
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If u want to put in a rape sceen, it's your story, n u kno a lot of pple just make lines in the middle of the chapter stating that the rape sceen has started n then another line across the screen once ended. Though it's all up to u. Personally, tho about the rape sceen I donno what u got planned n I would hope b/w k n sess but I hope it's not too brutal. Some rapes sound so harsh u wonder realistically how ny one could have really moved on from that.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 10:30 EST
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In response to your question: Well, you did rate your fanfic as 'x', so it would stand to reason that there would be some more 'adult' scenes. People who don't want to read the rape scene can skip over it. Perhaps you could warn when and where in the story the scene is, and then as soon as it's done, do something like "~end rape scene~" or something. That's what I would do. BTW Great job with the fanfic. I like how it's going along. Keep it up, and I'm glad you're back!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 02:15 EST
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plz update soon i love it oh and put the rape in!
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Reviewed By: Sailor Saturn415 On: January 16, 2008 21:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic, based on an even better idea. I'm really enjoying this story, although I'm not always sure what's going on. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 23:47 EST
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Screw the softies! Just put up a disclaimer in big letters, and you have done your job. Trust me, you would get really tired of emailing everyone a chapter of the story. Fantastic grammar and spelling. That makes a world of difference! Good luck posting the next part!
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