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Reviewed By: dr mosquito On: December 05, 2005 10:16 CST
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nice fic. Very interesting, I even saved it to my favorites so please update as I look forward to reading more. Is it me or do so many of these reveiws say the same thing. How unoriginal.
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Reviewed By: yaoi fangirl leader On: December 05, 2005 10:15 CST
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I love the pairing setups and I can't wait to see the love blossom. I can tell that Neji likes Naruto ALOT. It's very obvious and I like how you made Naruto's feelings mysterious to the readers. I like how it is obvious Sasuke likes Shikamaru, but he doeesn'y realize it. And I love how Shikamaru is his indifferent lazy self. Can't wait for more yummy yaoi-ness
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Reviewed By: yivmf gf,hg On: December 05, 2005 10:13 CST
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nfdgjshglkh good lkjflizhsflzzhsfl update jdsflkjhsdfkjh soon
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Reviewed By: reviewer2005 On: December 05, 2005 10:11 CST
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I really love the flow of this tale. I hope this story will be extra long. Long ones are interesting to read. So update. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: sidelong football On: December 05, 2005 10:10 CST
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yo! update
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Reviewed By: amealea On: December 05, 2005 10:10 CST
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Like wow! You should so like update! And like with longer chapters!
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Reviewed By: margaritta vonhule On: December 05, 2005 10:08 CST
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I like it a lot. Do update.
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Reviewed By: bartholomule On: December 05, 2005 10:07 CST
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good. updat.
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Reviewed By: kakai-sensei luva On: December 05, 2005 10:07 CST
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Whois getting together with Kakashi? And could you hurry up with the Neji Naruto love and the Shikamaru Sasuke love. I wanna see them all together. Will Neji and Naruto get back? I hope so. Afterall all the people's reactions to their return would be so cool. Anyways, update!
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Reviewed By: monologue On: December 05, 2005 10:05 CST
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good. work on spelling and update.
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Reviewed By: bored student On: December 05, 2005 10:03 CST
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I really like this story. It was a good way to spend my advanced classes. They are so borin and I find fanfics are a great way to pass time when I'm too lazy to do my work.
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Reviewed By: zoolologist On: December 05, 2005 10:02 CST
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Nice. Please include more detailed descriptions, and also more cool critters. Oh by the way I don't really understand your time passage through both worlds. Is it supposed to be all wonky?
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Reviewed By: proud fangirl On: December 05, 2005 10:00 CST
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WOW!!!!!! This story is GREAT!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON BUT DOn't RUSH YOURSELF I COULD WAIT FOREVER FOR MORE STORY THOUGh I still want an update soon. Im so demanding. DO IT OR ILL LIVE IN YOUR CUPboard
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Reviewed By: jugular golem On: December 05, 2005 09:56 CST
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Good. I like the random bouts of humour thrown into the serious situations, makes it feel like a real anime series, not one that has been modyfied
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Reviewed By: Carolina On: December 05, 2005 09:55 CST
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very good. Update
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