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| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] | | Pages (51): [ « ‹ 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 › » ] | Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 22:06 CST
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Eight hunters? Uh oh... o_o And Sydnie is still a virgin? You know... Oddly... That doesn't surprise me. I mean, it's not like I was expecting it... But... I'm not shocked either. XD Does that make sense? I hope so. Anyway, thank you for the update. It was great, as always. Happy Valentine's Day!
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 21:42 CST
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so...i was so confused on the reference to belle that i actually attempted to draw out a family tree...that was until i figured out that she was Kich's daughter. but you should see the tree (no doubt you've already drawn one)...it's quite...errr...tangeled? LOL. great story though. at least Jeb realizes that if he screws with Bas, he's screwing with some of the major powers of the world. (to bad i know that won't deter an angry parent). it's really sad, ya know...i feel for the guy. both parties are doing their job (though Jeb IS doing his dirty) but it's still angsty. ::sigh::: i guess our party who is following Bas shall be rearing their head soon, ne? if eight men are gonna attack this poor kid...he's gonna need serious backup. ^__^ way to go, Sueric...another great story!
| Title: HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!!
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the chapter! What a wonderful Valentines Gift! It was amazing, and confusing all at the same time. For about 2 or 3 paragraphs I thought that Bas had called his sister Belle, so when you said she was his cousin/niece, I was like, No shes not, but then you said it was Bitty Belle, Belles daughter, which made me feel dumb for thinking about it so much! Also, I fear for Bas and Sydnie because of the 8 hunters coming after them, but I suppoese thats when the the one following them will come in handy (cough*INUYASHA*cough)! Well, anyways, I loved it, and HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! ~Kim~
| Title: Greatness!
Reviewed By: Angelswrath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 21:38 CST
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Amazing chapters Sue!! Can't wait for the next! And the thing with Sydnie at the end! Whoa. Never would have thought that! Your descritption is awesome and I keep falling in love with all of your characters. I wonder how they're gonna handle eight youkai hunters. I mean Bas is the man, but. . . I'm on the edge of my seat! :)
| Title: A Question...
Reviewed By: concreteangel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect chapter, as always!! anyway, when is this "mystery man" Gin sant in gonna show up? The excitement in the story is killing me!! Keep writing!! I dunno what i would do without your stories!! (probably be bored as hell). Happy Writing! ~concreteangel
DFDFÁ | Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 19:28 CST
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Agh...now I have to scroll up to catch up with the chat lol....Hmm, well it's good that one thing was kinda solved. Eight hunters, though, holy crap man! Can't wait for the action on that chapter lol.
| Title: I caught up, made it to ch. 30 at last!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 17:58 CST
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Whew! That last chappie was some hot stuff. Is it just me, or is Bas and Sydnie just the cutest things together? She's so fierce, posessive just like a cat. LoL And the Football game incident...ugh! I've catered to a few Super Bowl games...try the yelling at the screen with 3 or more men, not just one...and hearing your neighbors rooting for the other team through the windows....hillarious! If I never see another crockpot filled with barbecue sauce and little smokies...it'll be too soon. And the Catnip? Wheeeeeeeeeee! Talk about having your hands full. Too much fun. --- I will try harder to keep up from now on...even if I have to lock my roomie in his room! XD
| Reviewed By: Spygirl3034 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
to think ive been reading ur Fics since the 1st Purity and i never commented, wow, u rock!!! ur almost as god as ingrrl(she kicks ass!) lol, lat time i read #5 it waz at the part where bas and "kitty" where just getting to nkow eatch other and now shes giving him head!! can u say big ass diff!!, anywhore keep up the VERY good work, bye!
| Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 21:49 CST
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Wow... This chapter actually made me kind of sad. It's horrible that Bas was made to think that he was a freak and a monster because of that. Thank the gods Sydnie is there to tell him otherwise. Wonderful, Sue. Really.
| Title: GREEN ;-)
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So she likes his crests huh. Well of course she would!I just can't believe poor Bas got laughed at! Personally, I don't think I would have laughed, just stood there staring, kind of shocked. lol Loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one! ~Kim~
| Title: Implicit Trust
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you write your limes and lemons in your stories. Just beautiful writing at its best. Thank you.
| Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 13:22 CST
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another great chapter update soon plz ^^ Ja ne
| Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so nice!! I love the descriptions you use, they leave just enough to the imagination and tell you everything you need to know all at once! Once again awesome job and please keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My friend that's staying with me always knows when you update when I open my email because I howl like a little monkey. (Those were her words, not mine.) I know I've left you reviews before, but just to let you know how much I love you, my friend wanted to read your stuff, but won't because the computer hurts her eyes. (Whine, whine.) So, I am actually going to read the Purity series to her. Out loud. Which is insane, but oh well. And hopefully, then she'll read Chronicles, and Torrent, and all the others, because there's not a single one I don't love. You rock my socks.
| Title: smiles :)
Reviewed By: hanyouwings [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 00:54 CST
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Okay, first of all, I totally have to agree with Syd on the whole jumping thing...I mean...d-a-a-a-mn! Yah, anyway, sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile (smiles sheepishly), but I've still been reading your stories religiously! Speaking of which, I had a really depressing thought the other day. I know you said you are going to write 11 Purities (which I worship you for...seriously :). I also know it will be a long time before they are all finished,but what am I going to do when I don't have your stories to look forward to every day? I will be lost Sue...I mean it. I'm going to cry, get depressed, eat a whole lot...cry some more...just the thought of it makes me sad. I know there are other very talented writers, but there aren't any like you. You are sweet, sensitive, brilliant, amazing, and I know I don't actually know you personally, but I've read your stories so long it kind of feels like it. So when I think of not being able to read your stories, it's like I'm losing a best friend I've had for years. Of course, I know you'll still be writing Purities for awhile, but like I said it was just a thought which made me want to write this review to tell you how much you are appreciated and cared about. Anyway, live happy Sue!!! Ja ne!!
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